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 Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:15 am
 Can you figure out what's wrong with it? I can't really see it. ...Oh, and here it is colored, in case you wanted to see 
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:51 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:55 am
mm... the only spot that I could see... was the head... it might be that, but I love it! ^^ {possible draw meh?} It doesn't draw the attention to it, so its not that its really bad. It is actually really well drawn.
What I mean by the head:
The hat {unless it is spose to fit that way} May seem a little odd to some, as if it is set to high, or to off centered. {I love it, wouldn't change it if I could.} Other then that, they might argue that the head is to long, and skinny, but I don't really see that as an issue here. {they just could say that.} Other than those {I just barely were able to pick them out as a possiblity of what they ment} I can't see anything else.
All in all I love the picture, and wouldn't change anything about it.
^^
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:01 am
roseankitty mm... the only spot that I could see... was the head... it might be that, but I love it! ^^ {possible draw meh?} It doesn't draw the attention to it, so its not that its really bad. It is actually really well drawn. What I mean by the head: The hat {unless it is spose to fit that way} May seem a little odd to some, as if it is set to high, or to off centered. {I love it, wouldn't change it if I could.} Other then that, they might argue that the head is to long, and skinny, but I don't really see that as an issue here. {they just could say that.} Other than those {I just barely were able to pick them out as a possiblity of what they ment} I can't see anything else. All in all I love the picture, and wouldn't change anything about it. ^^ I could probably draw you later, but I'm about to get ready for a big contest. Hmm... I think I might have made the body curve in too much at the waist... And thanks for you input, and compliments ^^ I really appreciate it. heart
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:04 am
the waist is fine! >< Way better then I can draw... need to work on my guys... lol.
Don't worry about drawing me if you don't have time. ^^ I just love avi art, and only have 3 on my pro from others... >.> Searching out more.
If you do get a chance to draw me, could you send it via pm? I wish to post it on my pro, and forget to check up here often.
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:41 am
Sure!
...would you be terribly upset if I took off the hat though? sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:28 am
LOL C e i l i n g C a t Sure! ...would you be terribly upset if I took off the hat though? sweatdrop nope! I will go take it off for you. And if the clothing needs a down tone, let me know. ^^
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:07 am
I like it and I can't see anything wrong with the proportion either ^w^
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:32 pm
u could have made the part of the head facing the hand a bit fuller
but its more manly ur way xD
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:11 pm
Thanks for the imput, you guys! ^^
I'm kinda tempted to PM and ask her, but I'm afraid she'd think I was mad or something sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:15 pm
LOL C e i l i n g C a t Thanks for the imput, you guys! ^^ I'm kinda tempted to PM and ask her, but I'm afraid she'd think I was mad or something sweatdrop haha go ahead and do it! the worst she could do was yell at u
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:28 pm
tell them to suck it !
"proper proportions" are up to the artist if u ask me D:<
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:37 pm
I don't know, most people are saying the head, but I think the shoulder is a bit off. By your adding of the seam line on his(?) vest, you give the impression that he is slighty turned, which would call for the arm to look a tad bit closer to body. Other than a slightly unnatural holding of the other arm and the hair coming up a tad bit high, it is actually a rather nice set of lines.
If you ever are having some difficulty spotting perspective or proportions flaws, try flippinng the pic horizontally. It can occasionally make the subtle rather obvious.
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:06 pm
Nekros Conrad I don't know, most people are saying the head, but I think the shoulder is a bit off. By your adding of the seam line on his(?) vest, you give the impression that he is slighty turned, which would call for the arm to look a tad bit closer to body. Other than a slightly unnatural holding of the other arm and the hair coming up a tad bit high, it is actually a rather nice set of lines. If you ever are having some difficulty spotting perspective or proportions flaws, try flippinng the pic horizontally. It can occasionally make the subtle rather obvious. Ah! I see it now! Thank you! ^^ Something about the body was bothering me. Agh, it looks so obvious now D; Ok I see it all now, thanks! ^^
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Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:30 am
others have already pointed out the incredibly minor faluts in your drawing. my only advice is to learn from your mistakes.
you have a very good hand at art btw
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