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 Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:32 am
Post a single sentence from each WIP you have (or as many as you want to pick). No context, no explanations. No more than one sentence.
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:33 am
I cheated a little bit. :/
1. She never did manage to find a coat, Alan thought as he peeked over the window sill and shot somebody in the knee.
2. Alfred grinned wolfishly, showing his teeth as he whispered, "Since when did I listen to you?"
3. She touched her fingers to her face, realized that she was blushing, and turned away.
4. Henry realized that he was seriously NOT fine, and he scrambled weakly to at least push himself up before he vomited again, but, pathetically, couldn't quite manage even that.
5. Frankly, England was rather in the mood for a pint, and thought America might actually be as well, but the fact that he'd come in waving around a bottle of California wine meant that his ego needed stroking.
6. "Yes," he assured her in 2A.M. tones, his fingers finding their way to her chin length tangle of hair, sun-kissed to a light rum brown.
7. "This place is a ********' mess," Conor said eventually, his muscles ridged with the effort it took to keep from shivering.
8. "You don't know what it did to me when you left," Yuuri whispered, "and you just... left. Like it was so easy for you."
9. He was so surprised, that he didn't even flinch when pieces of his brother's skull sent the lamp shade, five feet away, swinging haphazardly, the inconsistent light making the moment all the more surreal.
10. "You left me for drugs like five minutes ago!" Kyle pointed out crossly.
11. "Conor," Henri said lightly, joining his distressed companion on the ground, under Zealot's sunning rock. "Come on. Yamako is about ready to break the rest of your ribs anyway; no way nanos can be worse than this."
12. "You got stomped on." Zoro said firmly. "I saved you."
13. "Okay, so you know about the Umbrella Corporation, right?" Henry, his mouth full of beer, nodded and swallowed awkwardly.
14. "I ******** HATE my brother!" Zealot shouted. "And don't call me Charlie!"
15. Wesley, steadily chopping his way through the undergrowth said, "Thank God for mosquito spray; they look like they could swallow a person whole."
16. The two of them scrambled down the sandy incline, Dad in his tennis shoes and old boot-cut jeans, Thomas in his flip-flops and swimming trunks, each clutching their hat in one hand and the course, black handle of the green, inflatable river-raft they'd rented in the other.
17. Fernando! Pirate King of the High Seas quietly pointed out that he would stab her in the neck if she ever lied to him again.
18. Upstairs, though an open bedroom door you watch the clouds of smoke billow as two girls (one sobbing, the other watching with glassy eyes from the bed) burn cigarettes and joints and incense and love letters.
19. "I hope that mother ******** gets eaten by a bear," Jamie hissed viciously, ignoring Alex as he elbowed her in the ribs.
20. "Sorry, I forgot you're allergic to the thought process," Jeremy replied dryly.
21. Abby was the only living person he'd seen in days, and after they horrors they'd endured, after the hoards of dead, rotting faces, he took every opportunity to study her.
22. "Because Tex is fighting your sister, Shelia's being all weird, Caboose is hiding from the girls and Tucker is WATCHING the girls. Right now is the only time nobody's going to come looking for me." Church paused. "I'm the leader, you know."
24. "You're not," Henry said, pulling his hand away from his arm; a sympathetic attempt to reach out and touch Leon's arm-- but instead he gave a little cry of pain and horror as sticky clumps of skin tore away from his bicep, sticking to his fingers.
25. "Wait, heather?!" he said, alarmed, watching the round, flat syllables fall from his mouth and burst quietly against the bed they were sitting on.
26. "No," he sighed, "she was dead before you killed her."
27. Except for me; I'm alive in the middle of all of them, awake and watching, secretly thrilled to be so alone with my speedy heart rate, like I'm more important now that I'm the only one.
28. Vuroja was a man of questionable origins, but one day he sailed into Kilika with this young, silent, bright-eyed boy by his side, and they've lived here ever since.
29. "Okay, maybe Nathine will drown," she admitted, "but I doubt Violet will. Her tits are like portable flotation devices for God's sake!"
30. She could smell the chill, could feel the way it hardened the rubber in the souls of her shoes, turning them unforgivingly stiff as she shuffled along the cracked and dirty pavement.
31. If I ever started bleeding out of my ears, I'd tell him first; I'd say, "When the skin of your tongue slides down your throat, it becomes difficult to find people who still want to kiss you."
32. Devoid of a fitting insult, he settled for puffing out his cheeks a bit as Antonio began to dry himself off.
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:34 am
Okay these are all from the same story but none of them have anything to do with each other so I only cheated a little bit.
1. "Are you the fairy prince?" Sky asked while licking a third bullfrog.
2. Bring it on you flabby heifer!
3. Why the hell would I shoot him gently?
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:28 am
okay one more....
SCREAMING RIPS APART MY BRAIN LIKE RAZOR-WIRE THROUGH MY VEINS
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:49 pm
Carnemire 17. Fernando! Pirate King of the High Seas quietly pointed out that he would stab her in the neck if she ever lied to him again.
To which Gwen would reply: ******** you, you ******** stuffed bear! Carnemire 32. Devoid of a fitting insult, he settled for puffing out his cheeks a bit as Antonio began to dry himself off.
um, i'm now inspired to go through my WIPs and pull out some one liners.
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:07 pm
I'm thoroughly entertained by how many of my WIPs are the beginnings of some very naughty stories. Lol.
1. Inside the flat, Adeline poured them both strong drinks, his in hopes that he’d pass out quickly, and hers in case he didn’t.
2. Darius felt comfortable with the knowledge of where their friendship lay, which was to say in the friendly region, but Milo’s kiss had pulled up dead and buried emotions that hadn’t troubled Darius in a long time.
3. He could feel the heat off the pavement radiate through his thin sandals, the cheap plastic doing little to cushion his soles from the trash that littered the roads.
4. And it wasn’t even real football, it was just the American kind that the stupid American made up and named incorrectly.
5. It was near the coast, and on winter nights, sometimes a fog would blow into the hills and the woods and it would be impossible to see past the hood of your car.
6. The tile counter is cold under his a**, and he knows that if his mother were to see him sitting there, she would give him a scolding that he would feel the next day.
7. He groaned and tentatively touched his forehead, his fingers encountering a large bump on the back of his skull.
8. The place, I suppose is largely unimportant, so why not place it in Russia, or England, or some dusty city in America…
9. So the waitress didn’t really look at the young, slip of a boy she was serving drinks to and instead focused on flirting with the handsome man with the charming smile and mischievous eyes.
10. It didn’t surprise him that he was dead.
11. “Where the ******** are we?” he cursed, unbalanced by the dropping feeling of his stomach, and grateful for the first time that day that he’d missed any semblance of a meal for the last twenty four hours.
12. She readied herself, and leaped, soaring across the room with a feline grace unknown to any lowly creatures such as bears.
13. But Johnny was a strict non-believer in the available medical system and in the absence of any apparent life threatening wounds, Johnny didn’t see the harm in letting the kid sleep a while.
14. Once upon a time, a boy and a girl had sex.
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:45 am
sally_black Carnemire 17. Fernando! Pirate King of the High Seas quietly pointed out that he would stab her in the neck if she ever lied to him again.
To which Gwen would reply: ******** you, you ******** stuffed bear! Carnemire 32. Devoid of a fitting insult, he settled for puffing out his cheeks a bit as Antonio began to dry himself off.
um, i'm now inspired to go through my WIPs and pull out some one liners.
2) He was wet from the tub. You should know this.
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:03 am
More recent things... cheating again... a lot....
1) "You should know, normally I am not letting girls into my room," he told the little walrus sternly as he set her down on his bed. "I am also not letting in cats. However because you are walrus, I will make exception. Just don't tell, yes?"
2) Perhaps, had they been older when they met, Sharky might have had a better chance at procuring a name without a such a childishly endearing suffix, but as it was, "Sharky" had been Jacob's name for the past thirteen years and it probably wouldn't shake until he got married and had kids. Then again, with teeth as unfortunately arranged as his, maybe he'd never get a wife anyway.
3) “You smell awful,” Romano said, looking annoyed. “What happened, did you fall into a vat of whiskey or something?”
4) "Hell, even girls like girls; it's old news!" ((that one was for you, Sandi.))
5) He found himself cheering the poor sailor overboard, rooting for him to find a way out of the tiny little medical facility they'd locked him in (primarily due to his apparent psychosis), cheering for him jump the hell off the ship and into the ocean, where he obviously belonged.
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 8:57 am
Ryndon didn’t care what his mother said, Cody enjoyed beating him.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:55 am
* "Do not under any circumstances bring your pregnant wife into the bakery!"
* "That doesn't mean it doesn't hurt, now give me my arm back!"
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Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:08 pm
Hearing voices was never good; especially when they said to burn things.
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Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:09 pm
Even if he did manage to get there, he was naked and he didn’t have any money.
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Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:10 pm
Carnemire
2) Perhaps, had they been older when they met, Sharky might have had a better chance at procuring a name without a such a childishly endearing suffix, but as it was, "Sharky" had been Jacob's name for the past thirteen years and it probably wouldn't shake until he got married and had kids. Then again, with teeth as unfortunately arranged as his, maybe he'd never get a wife anyway.
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:56 pm
Vengeful Elegance Even if he did manage to get there, he was naked and he didn’t have any money. I approve of this sentence.
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:18 pm
Carnemire Vengeful Elegance Even if he did manage to get there, he was naked and he didn’t have any money. I approve of this sentence. LMFAO
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