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Winters-Snow

PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:34 pm


Well... First of all.... The full title of the story is suppose to be An Opening Thorn, A Crimson Phase, A Closed Reflection of a Serenade But I named it A Closed Reflection of a Serenade For short....
Ahahahaha~ This is the first time I'm posting my stories online, so I'm a bit Embarrassed... redface But my friends tell me to get over my embarrassment and shyness so I'm posting One of my stories for a while. Ummm... What else... Oh~ Apparently this story is suppose to be a cross over from another one of my stories, and the main character's in this case, are modeled after a few of my friends younger than me. So... Umm.... Please tell me what you think....
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:39 pm


Chapter I…



A group of 3 girls were running away from some people, as fire balls and explosions attacked them out of nowhere, missing them entirely.
One of them accidentally tripped over them self and fell face first. “AHH~! My uniform’s ruined~!” She yelled crying
“You-chan!” the other 2 girls said running over to her.
“Are you alright You-chan?” One of them asked
“Am I alright? AM I ALRIGHT?! OF COURSE I AM NOT ALRIGHT! My uniform is ruined! AND I FELL FACE FIRST! DO I SEEM ‘ALRIGHT‘?!” She yelled
The other 2 girls were silent with a surprised expression on their face.
“So, I’m taking that as a ‘no‘?” One of the girls said
“Mi-chan!” The last girl whispered nudging her.
“Huh?” She asked
A boy came out of nowhere with a sword.
The first girl started having tears come out of her eyes. “OF COURSE NOT~! WAAAH~!” She cried as she fell to the floor “ My uniform’s ruined, my face is dirty, and- and! WAAAAH~!” She cried.
“Shu-chan…. I think we should go….” Mi-chan said
Shu-chan nodded and whispered “You-chan’s illusion is as impressive as ever… it actually makes her acting seem so real….” she said as they quietly walked away.
“I Don’t know what I did to deserve this… I-Is this punishment God?” You-chan asked still crying “D-Did I do something bad?”
The boy blushed as You-chan was crying. “U-Umm… I-I don’t think you did anything wr-wrong…” He said lowering his guard and walking closer to her.
You-chan sniffed and wiped her tears a bit, but still looked teary, looked at him and said “R-Really?” as she was glowing a bit with shiny stars in the background.
The boy turned red and thought ‘S-So CUTE~!’ He nodded stiffly.
“Then…” You-chan said as she got up, wiping her tears away “IF YOU REALLY FEEL SORRY THEN DON’T DO IT IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!!” She yelled as she kicked him “THIS UNIFORM COSTS 500,000 (About 5,350 U.S Dollars) YEN!!! YOU BETTER PAY BACK!!!” She yelled as she shook him so hard that he had no choice but to say yes.
She smiled and let him go and said “Really? Yay~! Thanks!” as their was a bubbly and starry background
He had a slight blush and a big smile as he nodded.
Shu-chan and Mi-chan both separated after separating from You-chan. The other 2 boys they were facing, splitted up and chased after them.
The boy chasing after Mi-chan was a Caster. As he chased after Mi-chan, he casted a wind arrow at her. Apparently, she turned around and the wind arrow hit her on the face, at the cheek.
“Ah….” The boy said.
Mi-chan got really angry and started chasing the boy as she shot arrows at him, one after another.
“HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO A GIRL’S FACE!!!!” She yelled chasing him “BY THE TIME I CATCH YOU, I’LL PUNCH YOU, PINCH YOU, GIVE AN INDIAN BURN AND MUCH MUCH MORE!!!!” She yelled
“I’m so~ Sorry!!!!” He yelled crying
Shu-chan… was a bit too relaxed as the boy, who happened to be a hand to hand combat fighter, walked up to her.
Shu-chan smiled as she took out a deck of cards and drew 4 cards. She held them so he wouldn’t see what cards they were. “Here are 4 cards, one of them is an Ace of Hearts. Pick a card, and if it happens to be the Ace of Hearts, I will go all out on you, if you don’t pick the Ace of Hearts, but pick different aces, then depending on the suit, it’ll be the level of power I decide to use on you.”
The boy was nervous. He knew that Shu-chan did stuff like this in a match when she knew that she’s at a bit of a disadvantage. He picked a card.
“Congratulations~! You picked~ The Ace of Hearts~!” She said with a big grin on her face. One by one, The deck of cards began to disperse as the cards began to float. “Oh, and a bit of an advice, I suggest you don’t come in contact with any of these cards…” She said as all the cards began to chase the boy around the stadium.
“AAAAHHHHHH~!!!!!!” He yelled trying to run away from the cards.
Shu-chan giggled as she looked at the 4 cards in her hand “Works every time~” She said as she dropped them all.
The camera zoomed up at the cards for the crowd to see what they were. They were all faced up, and they were all Aces of Hearts.
“A~nd we have out winners~!” The MC said “They are all at the 20th degree, Hinoiri Youko~, Tenma Mitsuru~, And Wakana Shunya~! They get to maintain their degree and privileges~!”



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And.... This is all I have so far...... Apparently I have to type everything onto the computer because I have a habit of writing things out.... But for a look ahead of the chapter, it begins to Tell everything that is going on and of the school system, so The story becomes more clear of what's happening. It also fully intoduces the main character and what they look like. Ummm... What else? It'll take about 2-5 days for me to post up the rest of the chapter, so Untill then, if possible, I would like some Critics....

Winters-Snow

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