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 Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:02 pm
I am making a story in my journal, about imaginary adventures that I can't seem to get out of my head.
FF stuff will come in a later book.
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Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:47 pm
umm...if you would, make a point to this thread...like, post those journal entries here and label it as a fan fic or something, rather than a random announcement...sorry, but as of now, this is spam...
you have until friday. thank you
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 7:40 am
OK, here comes the first Chapter
Book 1
Chapter1
Hi, my name is Kenny I am 14 years old, and man have i had an unbelievable day. I don't even think you will believe me, but I have to tell someone.
So I was sleeping in my bed after a long day at school and all of the sudden I was jolted awake to find myself in a white nothingness. I know what you are thinking, this must just be dream right? Well I was hoping so and I even tryed every means to wake myself up imaginable. And after I was done trying the ol' pinch yourself thing a great, booming voice knocked me onto my rear.
"Stand Kenny and face your destiny", it boomed.
"What destiny?", I asked as I stood up.
"You are to ensure that nothin ever goes wrong in the demensions I have created that you see as T.V. shows and video games in your world", it replied.
"How am I supposed to do that?", I complained.
"I will endow you with the powers that will help you to get through your adventures", it answered.
"Ok", I said sarcasticly, because right at that moment I was thinking that I was going crazy.
"The first power I will give you is the all important gift of interdimensional travel", it stated, and as it said it I felt a warm energy flow through me.
"Second and third are the power to make any weapon out of anything and the skill to use those weapons", it said.
"Third is the gift of eternal youth and the ability to change your age.", he delared.
"And last are the power to copy any supernatural abilities and the proper amount of strength to start you off as well. And now I leave you to start your assignment, and let me warn you, if you abuse your power and become evil I will take away your powers and your memory of them.", and as he said it I did not realise that what I attained would be the best thing that ever happened to me.
But suddenly the the voice ceased to speak and i was left to think about what to do. The first thought to come to me was to leave here for home and forget it ever happened. But for some reason that seemed to be the wrong thing to do. So I started to think about where I was going to go, I had a feeling that I had only had a few choices of worlds that I would be able to handle at this point so I thought of worlds that would not require special abilities.
The first thing that came to my mind was the world of Kingdom Hearts, it did not really require special abilities that I cannot aquire. And with my ability to make a weapon out of anything i could destroy the heartless.
So with my spirits on high I decided that that was where I was going to go. But how do I activate my special travel power, but then the knowledge swarmed into my head and I instinctively swiped my hand through the air while calling out "Kingdom Hearts, Travers Town!"
A rip in the fabric of space time appeared as I did it, and I walked through, as the disembodied voice had said, "To face your destiny".
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 9:12 am
wow, definitely a lot different than i had expected. not too shabby though.
PS: i editted the thread name to something that made more sense.
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Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 7:41 am
Believe me, it is going to be in more than one game, for example the Final Fantasies. Could you also please try to spread the word about my journal?
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 6:00 pm
Here comes the second chapter.
Book 1
Chapter 2
As I steped into the rift their was a flash of light and when my eyes adjusted I saw that I was at my destination. I looked around to see the Item Store, the Accesory Shop and that mailbox where you put in the postcards.
I still couldn't believe that all this was happening, I was still trying the pinch trick every five seconds to be sure that it was real. I started to walk around and I saw a figure round the corner to the stairs next to the accesory shop, I immediatley knew who it was and started to run after him.
When I finally got to the door leading to the Second District I noticed that it was partially opened and took a peak through to see the person I was chasing suddenly become surrounded by these little shadow creatures. The next moment I saw a giant key appear in his hand and he quicky dipatched of the shadows. Even though I could only see his back I could tell that he was disturbed by something, and as he turned to his left to follow the path I got a brief glimpse of his face. He looked exactly as the game depicted him and now I had no doubt that this boy was Sora, the person I came to help in the adventure he had no idea he was going to have.
When I knew he was out of veiw I turned back and Jumped behind a low wall to wait for his eminent rearival. While I waited I decided to practice with my new powers, I started concentrating on mental images of weapons and began making them out of thin air. When I was content with my ability to make copies I sat there twidling my thumbs until Sora passed by again.
I was in the middle of thinking what the next world I would go to was when I heard the door creak open, I waited a few seconds, knowing that if I popped my head up too early I would reveal myself, and when i heard the footsteps walk past me I looked up to see him walking back down the stairs. I slowly followed him and when I was sure that he was in the Accesory Shop I walked on in and saw Sora talking to the store owner.
Sora, hearing me enter turned around and asked me, "who are you?"
"My name is Kenny, and what is your name?", I asked, not wanting to get into a complicated discusion at this very moment.
"My name is Sora, pleased to meet you Kenny", he replied.
"What are you doing here?", I asked.
"To be honest, I don't really know, one second I was on my island, then the next I am on this world", he replied, and then he went into an exact interpretation of his encounters on his island.
After he was done the store owner said, "I can't really help you, but one thing is for sure, this ain't your island".
"Oh well", Sora sighed, "I guess I should start searching for my friends now".
"I'll go with you, I don't really have anything better to do, and I could do with the excitement of fighting those shadows that have been appearing around here", I stated.
"Are you sure? I don't want to be responsible for you getting hurt", he asked.
"Yeah, I am sure, I may not look it but I can take care of myself", I answered
And together me and Sora walked out of the Shop, two new friends ready to conquer anything.
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:32 am
Can you people who read this post on it so that more people will read it?
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:34 am
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:57 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 11:07 pm
We walked through the door, preparing to search the town thoroughly, and right when we were completly out of the store we heard a voice say, "so you are the weilder of the Keyblade."
"Who are you?", we asked at the same time, turning to see a man speaking to us.
"But why", the man said, "why would it choose a kid like you?"
"What's that supposed to mean?", Sora inquired.
"Never mind", he answered, "now, let's see that Keyblade", while he said that he walked forward ready to take the Keyblade from Sora.
"What?!", he demanded, going into a battle-ready position, "there is no way your getting this!"
"Fine, then have it your way", and as he said that he brought out a sword that had a gun on the hilt.
Then suddenly charged up and fired a blast of fire magic, the only thing I could think of to do to stop it came to me in a flash. I quickly focused on Sora's Keyblade, jumped in front of Sora, raised my copy of the Keyblade, and deflected the blast up into the sky. After that both Sora and the gunblade man stared at me with totally dumbfounded expressions that almost made me bust out laughing.
"Well I guess my cover is blown, I'll tell you how I did that after this fight Sora", I said, "now where WERE WE!"
I dashed forward and struck at the man, he swiftly blocked the blow and fell from the clash to kick him to the ground. By this time Sora had recovered from the shock and jumped up to do a falling blow straight at the man, but it missed as he rolled to the side, got up and struck at Sora's side. He deflected it with some obvious dificulty, but then he quickly followed up with an impresive combonation of blows with a few that connected. As soon as I saw those blows connecting I saw my opening and put together the best combo I could get from the instinctive skills given to me. With both of us pounding on him with all our might we could not be denied, we finally did a strike together and threw him back with the force of the blows.
But with that the last of our strength diminished and we gasped forward with Sora saying, "now your gonna......your...gonna...".
And finally we feinted to the floor, but in my final moments of consciousness I heard a woman say, "Aw, your slipping Leon."
And I heard the man say, "I went easy on them, but it looks like things are worse than we thought, a lot worse.
Then I faded into unconsciousness and the world of dreams.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:10 pm
Awww Leon is always getin his butt kicked...oh well, when you started i thought it was sorta lame but it's coming together quite nicely! smile
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:52 pm
It's very good.....hmmm I'll probably suggest to Hikari89 that we Need a Fan Fic Forum so you can have your story in it
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:57 pm
Good idea, you do that.
And yeah I know, the beginning was kinda cheesy but after those parts, it only gets better.
How good do you people think my combat part was?
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 12:47 am
The combat is good but....possbily have some dramatic/climatic pauses in the story as it gives more depth....and some "..." Pauses which can give more realistic feel to the story line.
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 7:38 am
I don't know how to do that so I will just stick to what I know how to do. 3nodding
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