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 Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:24 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:27 pm
Really cute, I like how you do the eyes. Try to make the shoulders a little less stiff. They fall down a bit, and are not formed in 90 degres. Also, Sit down, and draw your own hand from any possible pose. There are also some great tutorials about those on da, and everywhere else.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:45 am
I would suggest looking at the human arm because you have the shape way off and the shoulders are also off same with the torso. try finding a good anatomy book and stop hiding the hands and doing them in the same pose this will not help you improve. Also practice shading more your pieces look flat the all point of shading is to make a 2d image look 3d.
Just keep practicing, you will get there wink
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:33 am
thanks for the advice, guys ^^!! here's the newest  
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:02 pm
I agree with Narcisz, the shoulders should be lower and looked relaxed, unless they are really keeping it up. The hands look a little awkward, but you're almost there.
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:50 am
hands and sholders are my weak points ^^; 
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:59 pm
work on them fingers foo!!! jk. But seriously the fingers. And I really have to agree with the shoulder thing. And more poses they are too plain and look quite the same
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:20 am
that's true, i need lots more poses ^^ i do suck at fingers ^^ thanks for the advice :3 here's more latest arts     
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:53 am
I really like the hair
It's soooooo pretty
And I suggest you try sitting in front of a mirror when you're drawing the body
Good work though, you've got a LOT of potential
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 9:28 am
why thank you ^_^ glad you liked it :3 that might be a good idea, or just practice this looks a lot different than previous works x33  
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:23 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 5:26 pm
Okay. To begin with shoulders if you take a look aren't just a straight line and the shoulders don't curve upwards unless your raising the arm. And next would be hands. My suggestion for those would be do some sketches of your own hand this is helpful to figure hands out. Besides that you have a lot of potential. Keep working at it. mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:14 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:14 pm
I can't say this enough! Study the human anatomy. It' helps out tons!! Try drawing pictures of (REAL) fully body people and study the structure. Same with hands. Fingers are NOT pointy, they are rounded, but if you're going for the look of a finger nail make the finger rounded and then add the nail with the roundness of the finger still visible. And work with your poses. Using the same pose over and over isn't going to help you improve, it just enables you to learn from mistakes. Be adventurous! It's not art until you can create something extraordinary and dynamic, it's just doodling. Look up tutorials on anatomy, hands, coloring, eyes, faces, the works and study and practice. It's the only way to get better. The only direction to go is up.
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:11 am
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