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The_Brightest_Moon

PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 3:51 pm


WOW. After months I FINALLY DRAW SOMETHING ( ). I need a redline on it.... >.< I'm unsure about the guy's foreshortening with the sword (correct it/put guidelines?) including the hand, like I'm not sure if It would show or not (I got my friend to pose but we didn't have a sword...). Leave his face I just haven't drawn that in, Erm... oh yeah! Pants! They're just simple, black pants, not jeans. Just like, an outline of how they would fit on his waist? It's annoying cause I can't draw the waist part of pants (for guys). Drives me nuts.........

On the girl, I just need help with her hand which is resting on him, Her ARM (gaaah driving me nuts) and the box on her waist is where his hand is supposed to go (sorta holding her to him- I had to draw one of those epic hero poses lol XD). Please help with anything else that looks wrong....... Merci Beaucoup!!!!

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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 3:52 pm


Btw, the page is NOT dirty, those aren't fingerprints or dirts or creases. The scanner is messed up so now it picks up like, every little bit of shadow on the page. I have to fix it.. XD So just ignore that. I just posted this in the art "works in progress" forum too..... (I just want like, different opinions and stuff)

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Shokai

PostPosted: Wed May 27, 2009 11:24 am


I am sorry if I have nothing to contribute but may I ask your foreshortening technique?

Your drawing looks really nice by the way!
PostPosted: Wed May 27, 2009 12:22 pm


Shokai
I am sorry if I have nothing to contribute but may I ask your foreshortening technique?

Your drawing looks really nice by the way!


Thanks- I really don't KNOW my foreshortening technique... I think it came out ok. I know the angle is off but for someone who doesn't know how to foreshorten like a professional, it's ok, right? xD

The_Brightest_Moon


MindYourMuffins

PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:20 pm


im dont have time to redline it, but i think her arm looks a little wierd. her upper arm (from shoulder to elbow) looks too short, try making it a little longer. other than that it looks great!
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