WOW. After months I FINALLY DRAW SOMETHING ( ). I need a redline on it.... >.< I'm unsure about the guy's foreshortening with the sword (correct it/put guidelines?) including the hand, like I'm not sure if It would show or not (I got my friend to pose but we didn't have a sword...). Leave his face I just haven't drawn that in, Erm... oh yeah! Pants! They're just simple, black pants, not jeans. Just like, an outline of how they would fit on his waist? It's annoying cause I can't draw the waist part of pants (for guys). Drives me nuts.........
On the girl, I just need help with her hand which is resting on him, Her ARM (gaaah driving me nuts) and the box on her waist is where his hand is supposed to go (sorta holding her to him- I had to draw one of those epic hero poses lol XD). Please help with anything else that looks wrong....... Merci Beaucoup!!!!