| What's your favorite type of thing to write? |
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| Songs (I just got that beat ya know?)XD |
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| Short Stories |
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| Plays (Oh Romeo, oh quiet with the Shakespeare) |
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| Novels |
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15% |
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| Other |
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 Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 8:55 pm
Post anything here that has to do with poetry, songs, written work, and we can either tell people how to improve or just look upon the majesty of work!
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 2:32 pm
Ok! Here a thing I wrote back in 98. This was in my dark period. Very dark period infact! 3nodding xd
The Dead Children pick the Scabs of the World, as the Daisies sacrifice the Sun's soul to the Rain Gods to bleed Semen to the Dry Dead Whores, Slicing the Wrists of a Suicidal God, Plotting the Death of Confidence, Truth, and Understanding. The Razor Blade Fields cut the feet of soulless bodies as they sing the Hymns of the Bloated Fetus, Shattering the Moon into millions of Blood Stained Shards of Glass. -SirhX
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:38 pm
SirhX Ok! Here a thing I wrote back in 98. This was in my dark period. Very dark period infact! 3nodding xd The Dead Children pick the Scabs of the World, as the Daisies sacrifice the Sun's soul to the Rain Gods to bleed Semen to the Dry Dead Whores, Slicing the Wrists of a Suicidal God, Plotting the Death of Confidence, Truth, and Understanding. The Razor Blade Fields cut the feet of soulless bodies as they sing the Hymns of the Bloated Fetus, Shattering the Moon into millions of Blood Stained Shards of Glass. -SirhX It's awesome SirhX! ^_^ I shall share a dark one in a few more posts as well...
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:42 pm
Izunami SirhX Ok! Here a thing I wrote back in 98. This was in my dark period. Very dark period infact! 3nodding xd The Dead Children pick the Scabs of the World, as the Daisies sacrifice the Sun's soul to the Rain Gods to bleed Semen to the Dry Dead Whores, Slicing the Wrists of a Suicidal God, Plotting the Death of Confidence, Truth, and Understanding. The Razor Blade Fields cut the feet of soulless bodies as they sing the Hymns of the Bloated Fetus, Shattering the Moon into millions of Blood Stained Shards of Glass. -SirhX It's awesome SirhX! ^_^ I shall share a dark one in a few more posts as well... My favorite part is the "Shattering the Moon into millions of Blood Stained Shards of Glass" line! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:59 pm
Yeah I wrote that while in a marijuana induced state, but now I don't use drugs anymore. So I can't do that kind of writing anymore now. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:07 pm
SirhX Yeah I wrote that while in a marijuana induced state, but now I don't use drugs anymore. So I can't do that kind of writing anymore now. sweatdrop good for you SirhX 3nodding and as for my dark song here it is and it's from one of my series:
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:14 pm
Awesome!!! biggrin 3nodding blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:15 pm
SirhX Awesome!!! biggrin 3nodding blaugh I'm going through my gothic stage...can't write happy anymore...
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:19 pm
My gothic stage started at 15 and ended at 19. Now I'm at the stage before that, the Hardcore/DeathMetal stage again.
I gotta go, Ja ne! sweatdrop xd 3nodding blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:44 pm
SirhX My gothic stage started at 15 and ended at 19. Now I'm at the stage before that, the Hardcore/DeathMetal stage again. I gotta go, Ja ne! sweatdrop xd 3nodding blaugh Ja ne. My contest just got the second topic started...man...
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:49 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:05 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:08 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:17 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 8:48 am
Here's the song I entered in the second half of that music contest if anyone was interested:
Paths
You and I
had everything so together
then how did we
mess things up so much?
Cause we changed the world
you and I
could have been each other's world...
(Chorus)
But the roads
we have chosen
are empty of each other.
We chose someone else
inside us to be.
I see you walk everyday
talk the same way
be the same person
that I remember.
But I see that glare
in your eyes
because you are lonely too...
*chorus*
I look away
as you sit down
and propose to a lady.
I can't watch
I somehow wish it
were me standing their.
*chorus*
*chorus*
And now you're there
promising your heart
what am I
suppose to do?
Because my heart
still belongs to you.
(outro-spoken)
My heart
only belongs to you
and if doubt
in her elegance abounds
I hope
you will see
what I am seeing now.
Comments or anything would be wonderful. ^_^
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