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A roleplay based on the series, BLEACH. Current Storyline: The Shattered Hougyoku; Gotei's Resurrection 

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 3:08 pm


**Originally posted elsewhere by a friend of mine.**



Hi there, Stasi here! As any of you who've ever spoken with me for more than about five minutes may know, I'm a bit a**l about my grammar and spelling and I claim my keyboard hates me when I make typos repeatedly. Seriously, sometimes I go over things about fifty million times when I write them. I'm guilty of occasionally going back to posts or stories months old and editing my phrasing or sentence structure that nobody else will notice because it bugs me. I haven't really called anyone on it, but be forewarned.

Anywho, now that we've established I'm picky about spelling and grammar, this was written up because I've noticed silly little mistakes we all make while writing coming up and wanted a place where we could get a quick primer. This won't be a comprehensive class (mostly because if it were I'd like a paycheck!) -- just something to make your writing in a forum roleplay setting a little stronger. Most of these tips are little things, really, but they pay off big-time in the long run look and feel of your post.

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First, a quick review of some terms I'm going to be using throughout this:

A noun is a person, place, or thing. Like ball, or girl, or house.

A pronoun can be used in place of a noun or a proper noun if you want to vary your writing. Words like she, he, it, and they are all pronouns.

A proper noun is the given name used for a person, place, or thing; Amanda, or London, or Paris, or Eiffel Tower.

An adjective is a describing word, used to tell us a little bit more about a noun -- the big girl, the old house, the scary dog.

A verb is an action word! Like jump, run, say, sigh -- anything that describes an action.

An adverb is like an adjective for a verb -- it's used to describe a verb. Quietly walked, joyfully said, powerfully hit...you get the idea.

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When writing dialogue, unless you have a specific sentence attached to the dialogue, make the dialogue it's own paragraph.

Joe, who had been watching Kara stretch instead of the sidewalk in front of him, ran into the streetlight with a hollow 'thunk'.

"Ow!!!"

Now, to clarify what I meant about "attachments": attachments are short little sentences that tell us exactly what the speaker is doing in the very moment they're speaking. Usually these are things like "she sighed" or "he laughed" or "she rolled her eyes" or something like that.

Harriet shook her head. "No, you can't put that knife away just yet, it's still covered in blood."

Also make a new paragraph if you're changing point of view or if another character is speaking.

"Is that it?" Gary whispered in awe.

"Yeah..." Veronica replied, voice hushed.

With that said, here's an example of all three of these "rules" in action:

"Seriously, Matt, it's our two-month anniversary! You could have scheduled the Halo tournament for another night!" Tina looked furious. "You promised me we'd go out tonight."

"Babe, don't be mad..." Matt began, but Tina cut him off.

"Don't you "babe" me!"


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The only things that get capitalized are the first word of a sentence and any proper nouns. Proper nouns are the names of people, places, or things, like the Eiffel Tower, or Kristen, or London.

Evan grew up in London, England; understandably, he was a little amused by Ashley's awe when he said he had been to Big Ben multiple times before.
 
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 8:37 am


Spelling Refresher!
( Commonly Misused Word + Number Rule )


Okay, so Stasi is a bit of a spelling junkie and it makes me twitch when I see words spelled and/or used incorrectly. This is a short guide on how to avoid annoying me ( and quite a few others in the guild who may be picky on this situation ).


1) The most commonly confused is the there/their/they're trio. These three can be tricky! I'll break them down:

There is a placement word, and refers to the location of someone or something.
Hey, look, over there! Is that a flying pig?!

Their is a fancy type of word called a possessive pronoun.
The Applebaums love their new 50" flatscreen television.

They're is a contraction that means "they are". There's an easy rule to keep in mind when using "they're": ask yourself if the sentence would make sense with "they are" instead. If not, then you're using the wrong one.
They're very friendly for a pair of serial killers, aren't they?


2) Another set of spelling tricksters are the your/you're pair. It makes me grit my teeth when I see these being misused and that's not good for the teeth, m'kay? Here's a run-down:

Your is another one of those fancy possessive pronouns. Used to indicate something belonging to you.
Is that your juice carton?

You're is a contraction ( something we all learned when we were chibies ). It is used to say "you are". If your sentence sounds right with both "you're" and "you are", then you've hit the nail on the head!
You're the one who kept taking my juices from the fridge, aren't you?!


3) Also on this list of misused spellings is the than/then pair. More than anything, I see this being misused horribly and I weep for it. Though, after speaking with someone who told me the reason they had trouble, I sympathized just a bit. So, here's a nice little explanation on how to tell these two apart:

Than is often used as a comparison word. But it is also used when showing a preference over something else.
- Five is greater than three.
- I'd rather die than go out with him!

Then is used to show progress or it may lie between a "cause and effect" sentence.
- She went to the store and then she went back home.
- If we don't put a stop to his tantrum, then more valuables could be broken!

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As a general rule, when writing with numbers, spell out the word, don't just type the number.

It's been ten years but Grace still shudders at the idea of touching a spider.

Obviously, when the number is especially large, this rule can be broken...

Harold was born in 1956, years after the tragedies of World War II.

But NEVER EVER use numbers to start a sentence!!!

Stasi twitches when she sees a sentence started "10 years ago..." or anything similar.

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