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Need second eyes

SunWuKung

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Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 5:17 am

I am doing this artwork for someone and here is the rough sketch.

anyone if they can um possibly point things as far as anatomy and stuff is concerned... I know its a rough sketch and it is not very attractive right now.. but I think i need a second pair of eyes on this one..

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Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:05 am

I like were this is going
;D

the only thing that is really annoying me; is that the man's head looks slightly detached from where the neck should be, or closer to the point, the ear and face are to far forward, making his head look stretched.
Then again it might just be the sketchiness.

Once again it's looking pretty good for a starting point, the expressions are lovely.

;]