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 Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:43 am
The title i'm still rethinking about it cause i don't really know what to put... this fic is something i'm currently been working on... hope u like it...
CHAPTER 1
“AHH!!” A scream was heard.
“What is it?” Another one asked.
“What did I just touch?!” The girl said almost screaming looking at her hand.
“I don’t want to do this anymore.” She said at the verge of crying.
“Neither does us.” Her friend said as she continued scrubbing the toilet floor.
“You know what?! We should stand up to them and say. We are not your slaves!” Aryn said proudly as she dropped the brush into the bucket of water.
“In your dreams Aryn.” Jae Na said as she washed her hand.
“But why not? Why does everyone bow down to them? Why aren’t they doing anything?” Aryn said as she bent down and took the brush out again.
“Because they’re rich and powerful and we aren’t.” Dae Mi said brushing her fringe of her face.
“We aren’t but Yi Min is though.” Dae Mi continued. Yi Min kept quiet as she continued doing what she was doing.
“But…” Aryn tried to say.
“No buts Aryn. Forget about it alright? Let’s just finish this so we can go home.” Ae Na, Jae Na’s twin sister said.
Aryn sighed as she scrubbed the floor. After half an hour later, they were down to the last step. They washed the soap of the floor and mopped it dry.
“I don’t think I’ll ever want to clean a toilet ever again.” Yi Min said as she shivered.
All of them cleaned up themselves and left the school. Yi Min, Aryn and Dae Mi were walking together towards their house.
“Hey, did you guys hear about those new boys that are coming to our school?” Dae Mi exclaimed as she cling onto Aryn’s arm.
“What new boys?” Yi Min and Aryn asked.
“You guys didn’t hear? There’s this group of boys are going to transfer here from Japan or something.” Dae Mi said as she smiled.
“I wonder how they look like.” She said daydreaming.
Dae Mi was two years younger then all of them but she was the biggest blabber mouth between them too. She gets all of the school gossips real quick. Eventhough she’s that type of person she was a really bright kid. She was always top in her class and also her whole form.
“How’d you get to hear about this?” Yi Min asked.
“Hey, I have ears don’t I?” Dae Mi said slamberly.
Yi Min gave her a sarcastic smile. As for Yi Min, she’s quite quiet but she would be really loud and scary when she’s angry. Yi Min is a patient person but at times she just can’t control her anger. Eventhough Yi Min came from a rich family; Yi Min was also a very thoughtful person and she never liked showing off.
Now, Aryn is kinda of the main character here. She’s not exactly hundred percent Korean but she’s half Chinese. Her mother is a mixed of Korean and Chinese so, she has the blood of a Chinese too. She was brought up by her parents in Italy until she was 5 and lived in Hong Kong until she was only 8. Her father used to be a marine but decided to retire as one and be a buissnessman and moved to Korea. Since Aryn used to live in Italy and Hong Kong, she could speak a fluent Italian ,English,Chinese and Korean.
When Aryn’s first day at her middle school, she didn’t had much friends since she had just moved but her neighbor was also her schoolmate that was Yi Min. Through Yi Min, she met Jae Na and Ae Na. They only knew Dae Mi a few years later. Dae Mi used to be bullied in school and she was much quieter back then. She started to become a loud type of person when she learned that she had to stick up for herself after the rest entered junior high school.
“Alright bye guys! See you tomorrow.” Dae Mi said as she parted from them crossing the road towards her house.
Aryn and Yi Min waved at her and they continued walking. They linked arm as they walked down the street.
“Ai…” Yi Min called Aryn.
Yi Min was the only one who calls her by her Korean name which sounds a little bit like Chinese that was Ai Rin.
“Mmm?” Aryn murmured as she turned towards Yi Min.
“Do you know Kibum?” She asked.
“That kid from your Art Club?” Aryn asked. Yi Min nodded her head.
“Do you think he likes me?” She asked.
“Why are you asking me that?” Aryn asked puzzled.
“Cause, I can see him from across the street and he’s following us.” Yi Min explained as she grabbed onto Aryn’s arm tighter.
Aryn looked from the corner of her eyes and Yi Min was right. He was tailing them. From the look of it he doesn’t seem to even bother hiding or anything instead he was following them clearly.
“Ai, What should we do? I’m scared. He doesn’t look nice at all.” Yi Min said sounding as if she would breakdown any minute.
“Don’t worry. When we get to the junction right in front, on the count of three we run towards your front yard which is much safer.” Aryn whispered to Yi Min and she nodded her head.
They took a few more steps towards the junction and Aryn counted to three and they ran. They ran without looking back. Their hearts were racing and Aryn felt like she could hear his footsteps getting quicker behind them. They ran till they reached in front of Yi Min’s bungalow. It was safer there since her house had security cameras around.
They tried to gasp for air. Aryn looked up and saw Kibum retreating, turning around and walked back towards where he came from. The both of them didn’t want to think much about him since they thought it wasn’t going to be such a big deal. But, at one point later, it would and they will be in deep trouble.
When they got into Yi Min’s living room, the both of them lay flat on the couch.
“What happened?” Yi Min’s mother asked when she heard them coming in from the front door.
“Nothing. We just kinda got chased. Nothing big.” Yi Min answered walking towards her mother and gave her a peck on the cheek.
“Alright. You girls just remember to be safe while you’re outside.” Mrs. Jung said as she gave them each a peck on the cheek before she left for her office.
“What’s your mom working on now? She seems quite busy.” Aryn asked as she jerked her head trying to look into Mrs. Jung’s office.
“She’s making a new line for teens this time. And she wants me to be her main model.” Yi Min said walking towards the kitchen.
“So?” Aryn asked.
“I said no.” Yi Min said as she drank down her glass of juice.
“What?! Are you crazy? Why did you say no?” Aryn exclaimed.
“I just think it doesn’t suit me.” She answered pulling a chair out from the dining table sitting down.
“But, it’s your chance to be popular. Your mom’s clothing line is like the number one clothings that the girl in our school wants to wear and you get the chance too but you never wear them.” Aryn complained.
“Please Ai, I don’t want to talk about this. It ain’t pleasant to me. Let’s just eat up and you can get washed up in my room.” Yi Min said as she stuffed some rice in her mouth.
“It’s alright. I got to get going anyways. I promised my mom I’d try her new lasgna recipe. She’s making her new cookbook.” Aryn said getting off the chair.
“I’ll call you tonight.” Aryn said as she left the house.
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i dunno if this fic is good or not....
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 10:15 pm
i think it's nice..
please..go on.. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:31 pm
Actually dis got accidentaly deleted so, i lost completely everything and now that i see that someone actually wants to read it so, i'm building a new chap but remaining the first chap as it is. so, i'll try to come up with the new chap as soon as possible..
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