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 Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:01 am
I see there are a couple of people here who are Christian Manga artists, other enjoy drawing, I think we should (Again) have a place to display our works and recieve CONSTRUTIVE criticism on it.(Not Thats bad, do it again... But That is ok, but I would suggest kinda things)
If you dont want crit on your work, post that at the top of the post containing the art. Also, put a brief descrition of the work if possible, why you drew it, relevence to other pieces....
I think you get the idea. I hope this forum comes alive again soon, It seems to have died again recently. ^_^
Xan
Never know, I may open an art contest monthly/Bi-Monthly for prizes wink
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:06 am
 his is taken directly from my devientART gallery. It is a picture I did for someone of one of the characters in their comic. ( devART page: http://www.deviantart.com/view/24455571/ comic can be found here: www.sweatdrop.com/products/dragonheir1.php ) Well, this is the character called Protus, crit if you like, if not, then enjoy(maybe)
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:11 am
 another pictuer for a friends comic, this time it is from a comic called Those Who Can Dance On The Feathers ( www.sweatdrop.com/products/thosewhocandance1.php ) This is also my first(pretty bad) attempt at digital toning.... the untoned version is here http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v256/djgresh/Sanyo.jpg
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 7:56 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 3:04 am
Whats wrong with the speech at the bottom? I like this picture, There are a couple of things like the feet, but I think feet are the worst to dwar anyway so you have done well.
I would suggest on future drawings to ink them, or at least the lines, while mine are a bit sketchy, they look better than when they were pencil. An ink outline always finishes the picture, you could then go further and Tone it either using Pencis(As you have done) or Screentone.
But overall, I like this picture, out or interest, roughly how long did this take to draw?
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 9:28 am
um... *stares at pic* about 2-3 hours i think
i made this a while ago
sorry abput the pencil ^_^' i really dont ink my pics unless im gonna color them but you are right it does finish the pic.
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