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xBriar_Rose

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:15 pm


This is the first of two writing contests for the month of March.

Please post your submissions here.

This closes Tuesday, March 17th.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:19 pm


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Make it wonderful like always and enjoy!~

Only Omen participated, so I'll give him gold. ^_^
I'm still going to read it though....I haven't had a chance yet sweatdrop !

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:14 pm


(I was up to 2 a.m. last night/morning and I decided this would be fun. If not interesting just read it and I hope you enjoy it.)


Whore Houses Of Menzoberranzan


Alton had been saving up his money from the house he worked for, he was a common solider, he did not matter. Most of the time he would gamble his money away and have a good time, but he decided something different might be interesting.

Alton strode through the maze that was Menzoberranzan for him, it was only like this because although he was a commoner who did not matter, he still belonged to a fairly powerful house, and striking against a powerful house with no way to pin it back on the perpetrator would be good for a lesser house.

Alton finally reached the house and he looked both ways before entering, he was nervous this was his first time hiring someone to pleasure him. He entered the house and was already sweating, instead of being killed he was welcomed, instead of seeing soliders, he saw many women none of which carried weapons. He swallowed and could feel his heart pounding, but he kept walking to the front desk which was a huge slabe of granite.

"Who do you want?" The female at the front desk asked. She wore clothing that accentuated her curves and showed her boobs. He did not know what to say this was his first time and he had a knot in his throat.

"Uhh this is my first time.... Is there someway that I can get a tour before hand?" Alton finally managed to ask. The receptionist smiled and bite her bottom lip and looked up. Alton was wondering what she was doing and took a step back all of a sudden he felt like he was being set up.

"Hand over your weapons, 50 gold, and no touching until you decide." The female said "This is to insure the safety of our workers" Alton did as she said and she used a small peice of curved glass held up to her eye and looked Alton up and down then the gold, and finally the items.

"All is in order let's go." She said as she walked from behind the granite and opened a hidden door. Alton swallowed and took a look around at the rather plain room he had first entered all the women he intially saw had departed, it scared Alton a little but he ignored it and followed the female. The two walked through a number of hallways going through sudden turns and through solid walls that were mere illusions. They eventually stood in front of 3 doors.

"The one on the right is your plain type of sex, it is not very exciting compared to the other 2 choices but it will be very pleasurable. The room on the left is for those who seek excitement, but it will be very painful. Exotic pleasures await behind that door. The last door is mine, you can expect an unforgettable time, one that will leave you not ever wanting to leave." The female recited it in such an alluring voice that Alton could listen to her voice and be pleasured. But that also made his decision.

He followed her into the middle room, inside it was dark like all the rest, yet he could smell the sweat fragrances of so many candles. In the middle of the room was a pool of water, a rare sight in the under dark. Alton looked up and saw a bed it was warm so to be seen in the heat spectrum but he could not see its features. Alton looked back to the female and noticed that her body heat was hotter than ever, this would be pleasurable

"I will undress you, then we will take a dip in that water, and after you are clean I will show you an amazing experince in the bed." The female purred as she started stripping the clothes off of Alton. Alton let her and when he was naked he walked over to the water and looked back to her.

"It's your turn, why don't you get undressed?" Alton asked.

"I will but first get in the water." The female purred "It is all apart of the show." Alarms went off in Alton's head but he ignored them and dipped his foot in the water. IT BURNED THE WATER WAS NOT WATER, IT WAS ACID his mind screamed to him, but before he could even get his foot out of the acid a tentacle under the acid grabbed him and pulled him under. The acid burned his body, the tentacles dragged him just under, just enough to completely submerge his body and not enough so that the surface of the acid was just beyond Alton's grasp. Then Alton thought to fight against the tentacles but it was to late, and his limbs went numb with lack of oxygen.

*****


The female had undressed while her pet fought the new comer. She walked over to the bed and laid on the top of the covers, waiting for it to be over and for her lover to come to her.

After a few moments tentacles gripped the outer edge of the pool and pulled her lover from the depths of the acid. He was immune to the acid, he was a demon and did not need oxygen, making this the perfect trap. The tentacles lifted the form of a dark elf out of the water, he was naked but not Alton, he lifted himself to the outer edge and the tentacles were sucked into his back. He dried off and walked over to his lover. They had won and now it was time to celebrate.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 10:39 pm


Yay! Long short story!!! Um that didn't make sense....I'll read it when I have a chance

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:51 pm


Omen that was good!
A little tweaking here and there, but that was fun to read....in a sadistic sort of way
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