now this one i wrote because i was outside watching the birds fly and i saw a hawk soaring. it gave me such a great feeling and i jotted down this small poem ^^
Freedom
she rises above the clouds
so free in the air
her wings give her what
her mates cannot
freedom to rise
freedom to fall
freedom to do anything at all
as she lands
and comes back to earth
shes never been so sad
to give up her freedoms worth
on the ground she longs to soar once again
when she does soar through the sky
she has what money cannot buy
Eternal Savants
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