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Goddess Aerithe
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:47 pm


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The sun rises over the hill tops, as the early morning dew rests undisturbed, along the fur lined nest.

Two eggs are settled between shrubs and moss, desperate to keep warm from the unusually cold spring day. A mare nuzzles each egg gently, glancing around for dangers, before she finally kisses the eggs goodbye.

Why is your mother gone? Where is your father? You're still unborn, but your mind works, as you dream of breaking free. Tell us, what do you dream of? Is it the first cool breath of air within your lungs? Seeing your mothers tender face? Or is it fear?

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:36 pm


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: elfstar89
Name of egg: (black is female) Kuroka
Reply:

Kuroka sensed her mother's fading presence, even through the egg. She'd long since stopped sensing her father's presence, which had been cut off abruptly, whereas her mother's presence seemed to be on the verge of disappearing forever, not because she was getting farther from her eggs, but because she was soon going to be gone, like Kuroka's father was. If Kuroka had been free of her egg, she would have cried out and wept for her mother to come back, but all she could do now was drift into the realm of dreams.

Kuroka saw a red female with flower-like markings whom she knew at once was her mother, as well as a black and white male whom she knew must be her father. The smiled, and called out to her with their sweet voices. She couldn't quite hear what they were saying, but she could tell, they wanted to come with her.

She tried to move her delicate legs to follow them, but thorny vines adorned with flowers held her back, not pricking her, but still keeping her from her parents. "Mother! Father! Wait for me!" she bleated in a panic. They weren't moving...but they were fading away, a deep sorrow in their eyes. "No! Please! Come back! I want to be with you!" she cried out, tears streaming down her cheeks. "Mother! Father! Don't leave me! Don't leave me alone!" The air around her grew cold, and somehow, her parents seemed to get closer now.

They stopped before her, no hint of happiness in their eyes. "Go back, little one. Never forget us, but go back, little one. It's not yet time to come with us." They nuzzled her lovingly. "Follow your heart always, but don't follow us yet. When it's time to come with us, we'll come for you, our dearest little one," they whispered gently, fading into a strange light growing behind her.


Kuroka came to what passed for wakefulness in the egg, sensing a light beyond the eggshell, cold and feeling no trace whatsoever of her mother's presence. Her mother was gone to join her father, she knew that, but it still broke her heart. In her pain, she broke through the egg into a bright and cold world where her mother and father were gone, and wept her first tears, which fell like stars down her blackened cheeks. "Mother, Father," she bleated tearfully, and sniffled. Her parents were never coming back, and Kuroka would have to make her way alone in a world where, if she was lucky, she'd have the brother she felt sure was still alive in his egg to protect her, but their parents were gone forever, where Kuroka and her brother could not follow, not until their time came to go beyond the confines of the world to join their parents.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:44 pm


I'm entering for both; hope that's ok biggrin

ROSES ARE RED!
Username: Novablu
Name of egg: (red is male) Keivann
Reply:

He could feel the warm breath of his kirin he would grow to know as 'mother' on the shell, right by where his head was lying against membrane. He could feel the hesitation in her breath. They were touching...well, almost. They would be in only days from now.

He longed to feel the soft velvet of his mother's muzzle against his face. Tiny ears swiveled around and Keivann -- the name his mother uttered when she neared his egg -- curled his spindly legs into himself.

It was so cramped... He longed to feel his tiny hooves against something other than membrane. He longed to stretch out his coltish neck and dance along the plains, tail streaming behind him. He wanted to kick up those heels and run around beside mother.

Next to him he felt his sister, in her egg, shift weight. She wanted out too. He gave a groan and stretched best he could, leaning against the soft shell. Feeling his horn scrape the tip of the egg, he froze.

Maybe... Maybe it was time! His tail gave a little flicker.

With a small grunt, he jerked his head upwards, banging the tiny horn against the smooth inside of the egg. Instead of cracking it, though, a wave of cold resistance reverberated down his horn and rattled his little head.

No... Keivann's heart fell.

Not today.

He rested his face against the film of the inner egg.

He'd rather wait for mother, anyway.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:03 pm


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: Novablu
Name of egg: (black is female) Nox
Reply:

Black.

It was all around her, swirling like shadows cast around her. She shivered slightly, but held her ground. Her little cloven hooves pressed up heavily against the side of the shell, pushing outwards.

Mother had left. And she had left in a hurry. She'd kissed her and her brother goodbye, then ran with her tail between her legs. Nox flattened her ears at the thought.

So far her life had been mainly sleep and dreams but in her dreams, she'd seen her parents. Mother's name was Yyvell. Mother was fearful, timid. Weak. And father? Nocturne was a stallion with the blackest coat and the darkest scales. Red eyes illuminated the darkness surrounding him and he moved with grace and utter brilliance.

A stallion Nox would be proud of.

She stretched out, sleep overtaking her. Or threatening to. Until a scream rang out, muffled by her safety walls but there nonetheless. Nox's eyes pressed shut as she tried to block the noise -- a painful sound -- out.

All around her, the cries of battle surrounded her, filling her soul with worry and fear. And fear was something Nox didn't usually feel.

Finally, it died away.

But mother never returned.

In her dreams, she could see her laying flat on the ground, her sides moving with her final breath, her neck bent at an unbearable angle.

Nocturne was hiding within the shadows, watching the new stallion -- the winner of the fight and the winner of Nocturne's small harem -- Blinddusk as he approached the eggs.

Nox shivered again at the feel of his breath warming her egg. Her ears flattened and she resisted the urge to jerk her horn against the soft inside of the shell, to break free and come after him with teeth bared.

Mother was weak. But Nox was not.

And Blinddusk would find this out the hard way. She swore upon it.



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Venexia

PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:49 am


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: Venexia
Name of egg: Styx
Reply:

Mother was gone, and she had taken the warmth with her The safe, secure feeling Styx had felt had ran away with her mother. Gone, gone forever. And now she could feel it, feel the dark shadows, the eerie dangers creep towards her. Slowly, slowly, they were whispering to her, teasing her, taunting her. Why had mother left her? Left her alone with these monsters, how could she have done such a thing? What had happened to the love that she had given, did that mean nothing to her mother? It was father, that must’ve been it. Mother loved Father more, Mother wanted to be with her father more than she wanted to be with her daughter.

Father’s presence… Styx could hardly remember its feel now, he was but a fleeting feeling. Had he cared for her? Had he ever loved his little girl? Her throat – or perhaps it was only her mind – emitted a low growl. No, no he hadn’t wanted her, he hadn’t wanted Styx. That’s why they left, they left because they didn’t want their eggs, because Styx was unwanted. At one point she had longed to break out of her shell and roam free with her family, but no more. Her family had not wanted her, had not the slightest care for her, and so she would care not for them.

The shadows danced around her, hungrily, greedily. And as she felt them now, felt them swirl and chatter around the safety of her egg, Styx did not find fear in them, but comfort. They were like her, they were unwanted and perhaps all they wanted was someone, someone to care for them. If that was so the two were in a mutual agreement, both longing for someone to care for them as some had not. Perhaps she could take care of the shadows; perhaps they could take care of her. There was a bitterness growing inside Styx, a cold, hateful feeling that begun to poison her mind. Her parents had not wanted her, they had loathed her, if there had been any love they would’ve stayed. But who needed them? If they didn’t care about her, then Styx no longer cared about them. Rage ran through her, who needed Mother? Who needed that warm feeling? It was all an illusion anyways, Mother had been hiding her, sheltering her from reality.

But now she had found the truth. Something of a grin sneaked onto her face as she felt the shadows once more. Their presence was not like Mother’s; it was dark and cool, tempting and forbidden. They were harsh, they were just, they were frightening. Styx loved them. This was reality - this was her reality. Shadows coated her egg, the darkness drawing her in and Styx pressed against the shell of her egg. She would come out, she would join the shadows; join the reality that called to her. And that grin returned to her, twisted happiness rushing through her.

Styx couldn’t wait to come out and play.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:05 am


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: elfgurl1234
Name of egg: Chi
Reply:

It was so quite. Where was my mom? It seemed like it had been so long now. So long since I had heard the sweet sound of her voice, or felt the warmth of her presence. Agitated, I struggled against the confines of my egg, but to no avail. My developing limbs were still too weak to break through the tough shell. Mom…

I eventually conceded to the fact that I was alone, but time seemed to pass by agonizingly slow. In fact, the only way I could even begin to tell time was from the fact that the inside of the egg was sometimes less black than others. This must be time. Still, the blackness pressed in around me uncomfortably. Why am I alone? Why did mom leave? Is she hurt? Am I just undesirable? Trapped in the darkness as I was, I couldn’t help but ponder these questions to myself.

I occasionally continued to try to free myself from my shell. It was getting very cramped, but I still didn’t have the strength to break free. My thoughts began to trail away from my usually depressing inquiries and instead focus on more trivial matters. What was the purpose of sight? There wasn’t much to see in here besides the subtle lightening and darkening of the egg. Is that all it was for? To tell time? Seemed rather useless. And what about these legs of mine that I kept cramped up to my body? They did nothing but get in the way. I tried to use them to break the barrier around me, but they seemed useless even for that.

So useless. Everything was useless in this dark prison. I could feel the stress building up inside of me. So painful. In a sudden wave of anxiety, I thrust about as strongly as I could, determined to break free. My small horn successfully broke through the shell, and through that weak point I was able to escape from my cramped hell.

Instinctively I sucked in a deep breath and blinked my eyes furiously against the cold night air. It was dark out, but still so much lighter than the egg had been. Ah, so this is what eyes are for, I thought to myself in wonder, taking in all that I could of this whole new world. I shivered as a soft breeze blew by, for I still quite wet from the inside of my egg. It’s cold out here. Mom used to be so warm… I choked back that thought with a soft cry, shaking my head and struggling to put these legs to good use. I don’t know how, but I knew that I needed to move on. It wasn’t safe to stay in the same place for too long. So alone… Why must I be alone?

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:30 am


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: elfgurl1234
Name of egg: Sachio
Reply:

I didn’t think much of it at first when mom disappeared. After all, she often disappeared for short times before returning. I was always so happy when she returned. This time was different though. She did not return. I remained hopeful for a while, but when a long enough time I passed I couldn’t help but give in to the fact that she wasn’t returning. This saddened me greatly. I wonder why she’s not coming back this time… I tried not to dwell on it for too long.

Instead, I focused on what I could hear of the outside world. Keeping my ear pressed against my shell, I listened with satisfaction to the faint sound of the birds songs. It sounded so beautiful. I wonder what makes that sound, I pondered to myself, never having seen a bird. I’ll bet it’s as pretty as the music is. The egg also usually looked lighter and felt warmer when the birds were out, so I wondered if there was a reason for the connection. No matter, I was sure to find out eventually.

When the egg was colder and darker, a new kid of music assailed my listening ears. It was quite loud and quite close. The chorus of crickets often kept me awake, listening along in silent wonder. With so many magnificent sounds coming from all around, it must be some beautiful sort of world outside of this shell. At least that what I assumed.

Time passed and things began to grow a little bit more cramped in my shell. I couldn’t move around as freely anymore. This bothered me a little bit, but there didn’t seem to be much that I could do at the moment. So instead, I resumed my usual hobby of listening to nature’s symphony, enjoying every minute of it.

Finally, the day came when the constraints of my shell could no longer hold me in. With a little effort, I had broken free and into the world beyond. The sun blinded me at first, but I was quickly able to adapt. Hearing the sound of birds singing, I looked overhead and marveled as a few flew by. Is that what has been making the music? They’re so small! But still beautiful, just as I thought. I struggled up onto my feet and looked around myself peacefully. This world was so much better than I had imagined.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:47 pm


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: Princess_Feylin
Name of egg: Seul
Reply:
I don't quite dare open my eyes in the warm darkness for fear that the wet will get in, and once in prove impossible to remove. I don't know what purpose my eyes will serve, but I'm sure they're important, and I'd like them to work when I get out. I'm fairly certain I'm supposed to get out eventually, because my space seems increasingly confining, and soon I will be too large and overdeveloped for it.

I don't know how I know this, but I sense it quite strongly, just as I sense that my time here is coming to an end. More and more my dreams are of impressions from things I almost sense from what lies beyond, rather than what they were before. I cannot even recall what they were before. I've changed so much since I first acquired a sense of myself. Back then I wasn't aware of the slight changes in temperature from beyond, or the sounds and occasional vibrations which emanate from the same place.

I spend much of my time dreaming, for there is little else to do. I receive all that I need from the nutrients which surround me, and I am too large and confined to move as I used to without endangering my safe existence. I sense that my world as I know it will come to an end soon enough, and I'm not keen on hastening that end. I dream about the world beyond based on the impressions I've formed of it. Much of it frightens me, and I shift from dream to dream, unable to completely wake and escape from my dreams. I suspect the only way to do that would be to destroy my world, and that would put me into that terrifying place. I'm reluctant to risk such a permanent solution.

The bad dreams, the scary ones, didn't begin until the one who loved me went away. I have more impressions of that one than anything else beyond. I used to sense that one's presence, and that one kept the badness beyond at bay. I don't know how or why, but I'm afraid to go beyond without knowing where the one who loved me is and knowing that one can protect me and make the terrors go away like before. Maybe I can find that one, but I don't know how I'll do that.

There is another entity I'd like to meet. I can still sense this one's presence very nearby, but it is more nebulous. I don't know why. Perhaps the other one is like myself, and that is why I'm drawn to know this entity. I don't know. I suspect I will know more when I go beyond, but that's not enough incentive. I get so many impressions of pain and suffering. I don't want to leave my safety yet. The warmth and dark appeals to me. But I am curious.

Princess_Feylin

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Intkueetu

PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:34 pm


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: Tnau
Name of egg: (red is male) Talen
Reply:

Talen had found himself usually nestled against his egg where in turn his sister would nestle closer to hers so both could keep warm as possible together, although when he felt his mothers warmth brush the top of his egg he edged just a tiny bit little closer. he also felt his sister move as their mother then proceeded to nuzzle her egg as well. Talen felt as if there were something wrong, the tiny foal squirmed in the closed space he wanted to be free and now. But as their mother noticed the egg move she whispered and cooed at him, promising her return soon.

Was it an empty promise? This Talen could not tell, but his sister had come back to cuddle against her egg and Talen decided it was best to stop his moving and not startle his sister. After all, it's not like any of them could break free from their eggs at the moment, both were still weak and to be able to survive in the outside world they would need everything on their sides. He hoped his mother would return, that she had left both of them up nerved him although there was only one plausible explanation. It was the Kirin that had touched him when he was much younger, he was certain it was a him and had even thought of the Kirin being his father.

His 'father' had left his mother, of that he was certain. His presence had slowly gone and now that he thought about it, his mother had been restless since his 'father' had not returned. Talen hoped his mother had not left them to go find their 'father', if so Talen truly wondered how or why his mother had foals if she could not care for them. Or maybe his 'father' had tried giving his mother a choice and she'd chosen him over them. Shaking his head, he curled around himself tighter and drifted to sleep with his sisters warmth.

In his sleep, Talen dreamed about his mother. He imagined her grazing in a field of tall grass, the sun bathing her in a golden light. He could of smiled if he had not seen in the distance a storm, brewing dangerously and getting closer to his mother. He wanted to scream, to help his mother but he seemed to be stuck in place. And when the storm reached the edge of the forest before the clearing Talen saw him, and his eyes went wide. His father, a dark looming figure strode forth pausing still at the edge watching his mother.

Talen tried screamed, tried kicking, tried something but his mother just couldn't notice the danger coming towards her. The dark Stallion moved forward, taking the storm with him as he walked blocking out the sun. It was then his mother noticed and looked up straight at his father, who had now reached her and was trying to tug her along. She turned to gaze up at Talen and let his father tug her along. Talen watched as his father and mother both disappeared into the woods and the sun came back. But it was too late. Talen was alone and his mother was gone.

Talen woke up from the nightmare, shaking violently in his egg and soon waking his sister who moved away from him. He hoped his mother would return soon.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:41 am


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: Lissome Llia
Name of egg: (black is female) Baccara
Reply:

Sometimes, the best way to show someone you love them is to leave them.

Such was our case. She was old, way past her prime - her last two children a gift. She would never live long enough to watch us grow tall, strong, beautiful. Instead she chose to leave us out here on our own. Two's company, she thought, and it's better they never knew me than to know and lose me shortly after.

Right but wrong. I was a part of her body up till now, and with her body I shared her thoughts, her dreams. In our dream last night I saw my grandmother, sensed my mother's pride at having inherited that immaculate coat. And what a coat it was! One that inspired stallions to battle and mares to gossip. The daughter is and will be as the mother was. The same pride comes through when she nuzzles the thin wall between us, so I know I will inherit that lovely coat as well.

I know more than I should, and I know what she wants me not to know.

I won't remember this when I wake for the first time from my dream-sphere, when I take my first breath. Maybe when I'm older I'll refabricate it all, tell it to my brother, comfort him with the uncertain idea that mother had no choice but to do what she did.

I cannot return her kiss, but I think deep down inside she can somehow sense my thoughts. I am her and she is me, after all.

Goodbye, mother. I love you.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 10:22 am


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: ` P 0 5 ! 0 N
Name of egg: Prince Elijah
Reply:

It was a strange day, cold really.. Though that wasn't the strange thing, there was a drowning sorrow in the air. The young nameless egg could of tasted it if tried. Was something wrong with the one outside? Was she the one causing such sadness. If he was older he would of understood... this wasn't just sadness, it was goodbye.. It had been unusual his time in this dark space. In the beginning he had the warmth of someone other then the lady outside. He had no clue who this strange other was but it was always there, until one day it just disappeared. The egg thought nothing of it until now. There was sorrow that day to. Was the lady going to leave? Squirming as best he could in the shrinking space of his egg he tried to get the lady's attention. She couldn't leave. It was much to cold. Though no matter how much he tried to move the egg it didn't budge, he was much to young.. So when he felt the soft caresses outside of the shell, he quickly moved towards the warmth. But as soon as he got there it was gone. Though the presence was still outside. And when a soft kiss was placed at the top he tried to open his eyes to see, but as soon as his eyes opened just a sliver the filtered light coming through the egg caught him blinded.

There was a shadow though, he'd seen it! And as he heard the steps backing up he caught the faintest whisper.
My dear Prince Elijah... And my lovely ......
The words were drawn away, he guessed to that egg nestled beside him.. But the shadowy figure had spoken to him.. A name.. Elijah. He only heard the figure say one other thing before it disappeared.
Mother loved you both dearly..
Mother? A warm feeling spread though Elijah when he thought that. She was mother. But she was leaving! Trying to move once more Elijah found himself growing weary after a few seconds and allowed himself to drift off. Dreams of the figure called mother graced him. Each time little colors were added as he began dreaming of his mother for the first time.
Not realizing that she wouldn't be there when he awakened..
PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:08 pm


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: ShinosBee
Name of egg: Trile'anon ((Biting flower))
Reply:
The cold was bracing upon his shell,
and the being within did curl and twine
to press back at mother's farewell.
Her departure marked his fate assigned.

As the mare of darkest hue
bade her children well and left
the youngling's mind did turn away,
to greet a world of love bereft.

With open arms
(though they pressed tight
to chest unfilled by the air's charms)
he greeted the surging sense of might,
the strength to keep his home from harm.

To grow alone meant standing fast
against the world apart,
no looking back at sad times past,
the sealing of the heart.

Though form would grow
and muscles ripe
and horn and hooves fell many foe
the youth would find him not the type
to follow where the winds did blow.

On this spot he knew he'd stay
the passing years he'd spurn
and civil mind would soon turn fey
as it awaited Her return.

No other would enrapture he
who waited 'neath the limbs and boughs
even when body became debris
a feast those living aloft to rouse.

With dignity and grace the mind
within the hard shell turned,
for hidden fear of love left behind
had his lonesome vigil firm assured.

A home upon the place he lay,
the role of guardian his to play.


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Tahlruil

PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:16 am


ROSES ARE RED!
Username: Satu Markula
Name of egg: Thales

Reply: He wasn't sure what the sensation was at first, when the wind began to drift over his egg; the unborn colt knew only that he didn't like it. Where had the other feeling gone, the one that was comfortable and safe, and he could hear a reassuring thump-thump in the background continuously? That sound was gone too, as was the... warmth? Yes, warmth... that was it. And now he was cold. He wanted to be warm again, and have that sound fill his ears; it had faded as the heat did, however, and though he strained his few senses, he couldn't find it again.

What had happened, he wondered, mind drifting in a hazy fog, grasping for the words and concepts that eluded him with ease. He still wasn't whole yet; he wasn't complete. The instincts and knowledge he would have once hatched hadn't set in, and it was so very hard to think... and it was so terribly cold. The wind outside picked up, growing stronger as it brought in a rainstorm; the whistling, howling sound of it disturbed his being even more. Where was the thump-thump, the steady beat that kept him calm, and lulled him into a state of peace? Why had the thump-thump gone away?

Panic was settling in over him as the sky turned an ominous gray. After a few moments of gathering dark and growing chill, the heavens let loose, and a steady drizzle began to fall towards the earth. The first few drops were a shock to his system, bringing an even deeper cold as the drops slid down the curved surface of the shell and began to gather and pool in the nest. However... as the wind died down and let the noise of the rain take over the chorus, a knot of tension inside of Thales eased. Plit-patter-plit-plit-plosh... it wasn't the comforting thump-thump that he wanted and craved, but it was steady, and it was close enough for him in that moment. The unborn moved slightly, tucking himself into a tighter ball in an effort to create more heat, his ears ticking in an unconscious mimicry of the noise that took him back to his safe place; the place where he could stop worrying and thinking, and turn instead inward to complete the ever important task of getting ready to hatch.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 4:36 pm


ROSES ARE BLACK!
Username: Cornetified
Name of egg: (black is female) Lorna
Reply:
The black egg wiggled slightly when the mare’s soft muzzle brushed it in goodbye.
Inside, Lorna was blinking sightless eyes, pressing herself against where she had felt the larger entity’s body warm the egg, shivering against the chill the rest of her shell held tight to her sensitive skin. Developed ears twitched slightly as she listened to that outside entity, which had called itself Mommy, walk away, the vibrations rattling the egg. Then, nothing.
Lorna pressed against the fading warmth as long as she could. Where had the Mommy gone? A subtle warmth radiated at one side, but it gave off barely enough to matter against the chill. She sensed another entity there, but it obviously wasn’t as strong as the Mommy. It hadn’t ever spoken like the Mommy did, so it wasn’t as important. But… now the Mommy had left. Lorna twitched in her cramped space as she searched for the Mommy’s presence. For the warmth and the tender voice that comforted against the cold.
Lately, that voice had been accented with fear. Fear of what, Lorna didn’t know, but she knew it was something bad. She and the silent entity next to her had been moved many times, her egg cooling and warming in irritation. She felt sick whenever her temperature changed extremes like the moves made it do.
Now she was cold, and the one bit of warmth and security was gone without warning. And she somehow knew it would stay that way.
Before, she had been excited about leaving her cramped little egg. There had been a lot of nice warmth before. Many entities were outside the shell, including a happy Mommy. Then a while ago, three weeks outside the shell since Lorna had no sense of time, the fear had entered the Mommy’s voice. Suddenly, all the other voices were gone. The constant warmth was gone. Now it was just her cushioned but cramped and chilly egg, and the small and silent entity next to her.
She tapped a hoof against the shell forlornly, then with a little more determination. She wanted to get out of here and find that Mommy. She wanted to see what had made her feel so comforted, and to return that comfort. She would get out, and find the Mommy…

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 5:24 pm


ROSES ARE RED!
Username:
Name of egg: (red is male) Spence
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My calcite home wobbles as Mother nuzzles first one egg, then the other. She whispers, telling us to take care of each other. Why would we need to do that when we have Mother and Father to watch over us? Confusion invades my mind. Mother’s kiss warms my shell and security is mine again. Listening to her quiet steps fade away, I slip into slumber and dream of what’s to come when my sibling and I break from our shells. Glorious days of romping in the sunlight, chasing grasshoppers as they spring from our passing. Running races with other young bucks and showing off for the fillies. My flowing mane and muscled haunches will no doubt attract many a fine young lass. My heart is happy with the dreams of what is to be.

Waking from my slumber, a dread surrounds me. Something feels wrong. Poking at my calcite prison, I find it still too strong for me to break free of. The time is not right to meet the new world yet. My ears strain to hear the return of Mother’s hoof beats, but there are no familiar sounds to comfort me. The coldness seeps in and I feel colder than I ever have before. Where is Mother? Why is she not here to keep us warm? Feeling confused again, my mind searches for answers. No memories come to ease my worry. Perhaps she’s gone in search of Father. Yes, that must be it. He needs to be here to welcome us when we break out of our shells. My heart is happy again with thoughts of standing next to Father. He’ll lead us to warm pastures to frolic in and to groves of fruited trees to fill our bellies. A smile widens my lips. My heart cannot stay happy though. The dread comes back to worry me.

My thoughts wander to my sibling. Does she know that Mother has been gone too long? Does she worry like I do? A bump nudges my shell, almost in answer to let me know she is still there. It’s a small comfort, but a comfort none the less, to know that I’m not alone.
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