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Wow.

I love your mature writing style. Kept me fixed to reading straight until the end. I also really admire your attention to detail; you manage to mix plot development and detail for a wonderful combination (I've been reading too much where there is a wonderful story, but I have no idea what the characters look like, or the complete opposite). It's nice to have a pleasant mix of the two elements I look for.

I like how the broccoli motif keeps popping up. It makes me laugh every time.

I was also pleasantly surprised that you brought in Greek Mythology into the Six Feet Under fic. It's a spin on Underground theology I personally have never considered or come across. It certainly is giving your story a lot of depth and direction. Good job on planning things out so well.