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rayneskyver

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 8:39 pm


Title: Thicker than Blood
Genre: Historical Paranormal Romance [please don't leave yet!]
Rating: PG-13 at the moment
Author's Note: Well this is my new story. It actually branched off from the prologue that I wrote about a year ago for a contest. I finally decided to add on to it and turn it into a full length story. Also criticism would be welcomed and loved.




Prologue
Paris, France - August 7th, 1842;
Lucien Gautier was sitting in his study holding a glass of brandy. He still had his day clothes on. He wore his white cotton shirt and his dark waistcoat his riding coat was over the back of his chair, he also wore the black trousers, white breeches, and his riding boots.

It was casual day attire but he wore it during his nights, since he spent his days sleeping in a darkened room. He swirled the brandy that was in his glass around, watching it through the thick crystal. He swallowed the rest and smoothed down his goatee as he stared at the fire that was blazing the the fireplace.

His hair was black and long, secured in the back with a leather tie letting a few smaller strands that didn't make it in the tie fall into his face to cover his eyes. His deep, blue eyes were transfixed on the red-orange movement of the fire. His frame was tall and thin, he towered over many a man and was thinner than most.

He was jostled out of his thoughts when a quiet knock sounded on the thick door, "Monsieur Gautier?" Genevieve, the house maid asked through the door.

"Enter," Lucien answered to her call.

He grabbed the bottle of brandy off the floor and poured more into his small glass as she came in. Genevieve was a small girl of about four and twenty; a girl from Lyon, France with dull blond hair that was always bound to her head with pins and pale blue eyes that he'd rarely seen hilarity in, she had thin lips that were never painted and that never smiled. She always wore dark gray dresses that bound her tightly inside, it made her stand straight, almost painfully straight. "Monsieur, the cook wonders if you are to eat tonight?"

"Yes, I would like lamb tonight, rare." He told her absently as he gulped down his glass of alcohol. He needed to dull his senses, his hunger was becoming to much and he had no time to go find someone to sate it for him.

"Of course, Monsieur Gautier." Genevieve curtsied before rushing out of the study and closing the door behind her quickly in a rustle of skirts and petticoats.

The household staff feared him but dared not to leave, he controlled their pay and also didn't want a scandal to darken their own names. They thought he didn't hear the whispers within the house, of why he slept during the day. They believed he secretly kept a mistress that crept in at night while they all slept and wore him out so he had to stay abed all day. Others believed him a witch. Then a few questioned him as a vampire.

The ones who thought the latter didn't know how right they were. He was a vampire, he'd been one for the past two years.

He'd been turned by a man who he didn't know and didn't see after his transition. It happened when he went on a stroll late one night to clear his head, he'd been grabbed a block away from his estate and bitten by a man. Though Lucien fought the man, who was thinner than him, the mysterious man seemed to have the strength of ten men as he easily took each of Lucien's blows.

Lucien was afraid when the man bit him, he felt his blood leaving his body with every suck of the other man's mouth. He felt his knees giving way and his body going cold and limp. The man pulled away just as Lucien was on the brink of death. The man looked at him with curious eyes, "Do you wish to live? Be young and beautiful for all of eternity, to never age a day or get a wrinkle."

Lucien meant to shake his head but he had no strength. He didn't mean to surrender to weight to the vampire he wanted to push away from him. The man took that as a yes and removed a hand from Lucien as he sliced a cut over his carotid artery and moved Lucien's face to the wound that was oozing blood.

Lucien tried to fight in his weakened state and got out a small 'no' but the vampire didn't listen and forced his mouth onto the wound, "Drink and live again."

He succumbed to the vampire's will and drank in his blood, gagging at the weird taste, choking on it.

When vampire forced him away and told him, "Go home and sleep. When you wake you will be one of us."

Lucien had walked out of the alleyway and to his estate in a daze, he didn't he have to think of doing it. His body seemed to do it on its own as if he was possessed.

Once to his home he entered it and walked up to his room, closing and locking the door before pulling the Samite curtains, which were a heavy black silk that was interwoven with gold.

He undressed before spilling himself into his bed and falling to sleep, only to dream of blood and death...

Lucien had woken up confused and disoriented. He was in pain. His muscles ached but he had no reason for it, he sat up and looked around his dark room. He could see everything, the paper that covered the walls and the wood that covered the floor clearly, even though it was dark.

He sat there examining the room with his new site and listening to the house with his new hearing.

He heard a knock on the door which pulled Lucien out of his memories and he looked at the door again, "I have brought you your supper, Monsieur Gautier."

"Enter," Lucien told her in a slightly cold voice. It was the second time that night he had been interrupted from his thoughts and it wasn't even eight.

Genevieve came in carrying a tray that held a slice of lamb, potatoes, and a glass of dark red wine from the Langmeil Vineyard which was in Australia and had prospered the year he was made into the beast he was.

Genevieve set the tray down on his desk and kept her eyes adverted to the floor. Her blood roared in his extra-sensitive ears, he could smell it as if it were in the glass of brandy he'd just taken a drink from.

He knew he wouldn't be able to hold out any longer. He had to have what she could provide him.

"Is there anything else you will need, Monsieur?" She asked quietly, not even looking at him while she spoke.

"Yes, I will be needing something. Come forward Genevieve," Lucien purred to her.

Genevieve shuffled her feet slowly as she went towards Lucien, it was obvious that she was afraid of what was going to happen. It was all over her mind, she was afraid that he'd seduce her, that he'd force her into a sexual act.

"Be calm," he told her in an almost demanding time. "I will not harm you."

She stood in front of his chair, her blue eyes on his feet and her heart beating quickly of fear. Lucien stood up and stood over her, towering about a foot over her.

"The walls have ears, Genevieve," he murmured to her, setting his hands on her shoulder and pulling her closer so his mouth was by her ear. "They hear what you and the other maids speculate about me. They hear and they tell me." As he talked his lips brushed her ear on a couple of occasions. He heard her heart pounding faster, "Although, I want to hear from you what you believe me to be."

"Monsieur... I must go," She breathed, she couldn't make it sound forceful even if she wanted to.

"No you do not, Genevieve. Now I wish to have an answer. What is it you think I am," He asked forcefully, squeezing her arms.

"I... I... I believe you to be a witch. A witch of dark magic." She whispered trying to pull away.

He smirked, "Why do you think such things?"

"Why else would you leave at sunset and return at sunrise; you also sleep during the daylight hours. They have said they see you with your cauldron and with your sacrifices!"

"Who fills your head with such lies?"

Genevieve's breathing picked up as Lucien's mouth went to her jawline, "I.. I must go Monsieur. Please, release me."

"Answer me Genevieve," he growled.

"Violette. She tells me she sees you at night, behind the stables. She tells all of us you are the one taking the horses so you can slaughter them and use their blood to perform your witchcraft."

Lucien's mouth twitched upwards involuntarily at the nonsense the maid was saying. His lips went to her neck, brushing them around until he felt her strong plus beneath his lips. "They are wrong Genevieve and you shouldn't have believed in such nonsense."

Lucien's fangs grew and he bit into her neck, her body jerked against his and she groaned, clutching his shirt and pulling at it in pain. He drank from her, taking in the taste of the blood that was solely hers.

When he pulled away, he licked he neck to closed the wound before rubbing the back of his hand against his mouth, she was holding onto his shirt lightly and had surrendered her weight to him. "When you awake tomorrow you wont remember what happened this night." He ordered.

Genevieve pulled away from him and left the room quietly, closing the door behind her. Lucien stood there, a sigh coming from him as he turned and went to the window which was still covered by the Samite curtains he drew over them every dawn, and pulled them open before opening the glass balcony doors.

He stepped into the cool night air before going over to the rail and looking out into Paris. This was his home. This is where he would stay until the end of time. He sighed contently at the breeze blowing his hair out of his face, the quiet filled his ears.


Chapter One
London, England - June 23rd, 1888;

"Sir, would you like me to summon your valet to ready the carriage and hackney for you?" William asked as he walked briskly to keep up with Lucien's long strides.

"No, I feel like walking this night," He replied to the older man as he took the steps of the staircase two at a time until he came to the main landing just outside of the small foyer.

"Sir!" called William as he tried to hurry down the stairs; his old, bony hand gripping the railing as he went as fast as he could. "What would you like for supper?"

Lucien ignored the butler as he hurried out of his own home, trying to get away from the servants that plagued him with to many questions.

Exiting his home, he rushed down the cobble stone walkway that lead out of the streets of urban London. The street was dark, the glow of the oil lamps - that had been lite only about two hours before - did little to light the way for anyone unsure of the path. He hurried his pace, getting farther and farther by the minute, wanting to get into a more populated portion of London for his deed tonight.

It was time for him to 'eat'. Lucien hated this part of his life; he hated it even more than the loss of sun and loneliness. He resented the fact that he had to use trickery with whores and innocents just to quench his thirst and keep from going on a killing spree, he hated the anonymity of the sex he occasionally had. He despised that he couldn't get rid of his curse and was trying to take it in stride, he tried to accept the fact that there was no way of returning to his former self. Taking it in stride hardly worked though.

As he walked, carriages and people began to pass him more frequently. He welcomed the clop, clop, clop of horses hooves, he accepted the murmuring voices of passersby; he almost enjoyed all the noise.

His thoughts came to a halt as he approached a street that was commonly used for whoring. It wasn't as deserted as he would have hoped; there were several people walking up and down the street and even more woman loitering. He smirked to himself as he saw a woman that caught his attention and continued to walk; pretending to ignore her as he started to walk by.

The woman; upon noticing him, perked up and began to approach. "'Ello," she said in a seductive voice as she drew closer. "Ya look like a man thats needin' himself a woman."

Lucien stopped in his tracks and turned his head slightly, letting her catch his eye, "How did you observe that?" he asked, not even having to attempt to charm her.

At the sound of his voice, even more so his accent, the woman's eyes brightened, "I know what a man needs and what he looks like when he is needin'."

He weighed her offer and then asked, "The cost, Madam?" As he looked her over, taking in the sight of her. The whore was a little thing with dull brown hair that was knotted and lifeless brown eyes that held virtually no emotion. She wore a tattered green dress without the bulk of petticoats and the restraint of a corset. He almost felt bad for the lifestyle of this woman but knew there was nothing he could really do but take advantage as every other man that passed her did.

"Five pence," she told him, as if pleading her case.

Lucien gave her a brief smile and accepted her offer, she hastily — as if to keep him from changing his mind— grabbed his hand and lead him towards the alleyway. He followed her almost obediently as she lead him farther and farther into the alley until they were out of view of the street.

He leaned into her slowly, his deep blue eyes holding her stare until his lips pressed to hers and she grabbed onto the lapels of his frock, pulling him closer to her. As Lucien deepened the kiss the whore's tiny hands began to travel lower to the front of his trousers. Breaking the kiss, he kissed down her chin and to her neck, sucking and kissing at it sensually as he felt the frantic beat of her heart beneath his lips. Lucien's fangs elongated right before he struck, his fangs singing deeply into the artery in of neck.

The whore gasped and stopped playing with the front of his trousers; her hands immediately went to his waist and began to grip, her dirty nails digging into him. Lucien sucked at her neck gently until he felt the whore getting weak in his arms causing him to pull back, his fangs leaving her throat and receded slowly back into his gums. He licked the wound at her neck and watched it heal slowly, leaving only a minute amount of his feeding on her.

Lucien released her and looked at her dazed expression, pulling out triple the amount she originally asked for and tucking it into her hand, "You will return to wherever it is you retreat to and you will sleep deeply. When you wake you will not remember me or any of this nights events, only that you received this coin from your usual work." Lucien told her in a stern voice, as if he was chastising a child. "Do you understand?"

"Yes, Suh," she murmured, her eyes half closed.

"Now go," he ordered as she pulled away and started to walk down the alleyway. He stood there watching her until she turned out of the alley leaving him in the darkness all alone again. He finally let out the first deep breath he had since he had arrived in London, relieved that the gnawing ache had finally left his body.

With his body refreshingly nourished he headed back to his home, almost looking forward to what the cook had prepared for supper.


Chapter Two
June 24th, 1888;

Lucien lay in his massive feather bed, the sheets and coverlet wrapped around his body in an uncomfortable way. Sighing, he sat up and looked around the room, curious as to why his body awoke him; he could heard the sounds of the house staff cleaning which gave him indication that the sun had not set yet.

He continued to listen to the noise in the house when his ears picked up on a conversation and he tuned in on it. There was a males voice, one he was unfamiliar with and William's, they were speaking down stairs in the foyer.

"I am sorry, Sir but the he is currently disposed of at the moment," William said politely.

The unfamiliar voice replied, "I've come to deliver a message from the Duchess of Wellington."

Lucien groaned, he had hoped to avoid publicity within the social circle of London. With publicity came unwanted attention and he really did not need that at the moment. "I will make sure he receives Her Graces' message. Good evening, Sir."

He heard footfalls before the front door closed and the houses cleaning bustle continued on and Lucien sat there thinking about what the Duchess would want with him. He'd been in London no more than two weeks and he hadn't received a social call or anything of the sort. The only people he had spoken to were his house staff, and when he had first arrived a few people in town that he could barely remember now.

As if all of the sudden, an idea as to why she sent him a letter came to mind. "Of course," he muttered to himself as he stood to get ready for the evening ahead, "The London Season is starting."

It was no secret that he was a bachelor and a wealthy one at that, being the rightful 3rd Duke of Angoulême. He groaned, knowing that no matter if he went or not staying here would cause trouble and leaving suddenly would rise suspicion.

As he pulled on his trousers a knock sounded on his door, "Master Gautier?" an elderly man's voice called from the other side of the door.

"You may enter William." Lucien said in reply as he retrieved a simple white shirt and began to button it; deciding that he didn't need to dress anymore. He didn't bother with the pesky cravat or waistcoat or the heavy frock coat while inside his estate and he did not intend to receive anyone else that night. "What is it you what?"

William cleared his throat slightly before speaking, "Her Grace Dutchess of Wellington has sent you a letter. It is in your sitting room."

"Thank you, William. Is there anything else?" Lucien asked as he donned stockings and boots.

"Yes Sir, what would you like for supper."

Lucien shook his head, "It does not really matter to me. Whatever the cook feels like making, I will eat it." He went over to the washing basin and rinsed his face quickly before patting it dry with a small hand towel located next to the basin.

"Alright, Sir." William left the room and Lucien followed, closing the door to his private chamber before heading down the hall to his study. Upon entering, he saw that several gas lamps were lite throughout the room, casting it in orange light.

He walked over to his moderately sized desk and sat at it, picking up the letter that had a wax seal with the Duchess' mark on it. Lucien carefully opened the letter and began to read.

Dear Mr. Gautier, Duke of Angoulême,
As you might be aware, the London Season is starting and I would like to invite you to the first ball.
Word of you has traveled around London quicker than one would have expected and many are curious as to
why you have been hiding inside your home. I am giving you a chance to come out and see the city and also,
for the women who have their eyes on you, to be formally let down. I expect to see you at my estate on
the twenty-eighth of June and I do apologize for the brevity of this letter.
Sincerely,
Eleanor Blyth, Duchess of Wellington


Lucien was astonished by the way this woman sounded in the letter, he'd never been addressed in such a way and it shocked him. It shocked him even more that she expected him to show up for her soirée in four days, which meant he didn't have time to formulate a brilliant way of avoiding it.

Taking out a piece of parchment, and dipping his quill and the bottle of ink he began his reply.

Dear Her Grace, Duchess of Wellington,
I accept your invitation and will attend your social party.
I would request you keep my attendance a secret until the day of, I do not wish
for Mother's - whose attention I've caught - to be plotting to toss their daughters at me.
It would be much appreciated.
The brevity of your letter is nothing to be sorry for.
Sincerely,
Lucien Gautier, Duke of Angoulême


He quickly sealed the letter with wax and pressed his family's seal into it, before summoning his footman. He requested that the man bring the Duchess the letter and the man quickly left. As the man left Lucien hoped he wouldn't regret guaranteeing he would attend the Ball, and praying to God that He would not let anything unfortunate happen.



Chapter Three
June 28th, 1888;

Lucien was more than a little nervous about this soirée than he had been about anything in his life. He was so distressed that he felt like a school boy who was about to receive his first kiss and didn't know what to do. He wore his best social attire which consisted of a white shirt and cravat, black trousers and dress coat, and a red waistcoat. His hair was kept back by a tie and his face cleanly shaved, which was a first for some time.

He now sat in front of the Duchess' home not wanting to step out of the carriage; trying to gather the strength to do it on his own. Taking a deep breath, Lucien opened the door of the carriage and stepped out to see people entering the large home and loitering about outside.

He straighted and held his head up high as he began for the house, entering the gated yard several people turned to look at him before turning back to their companions to whisper about him. Lucien ignored the talk as he walked to the door, it immediately opened up as another couple went to exit. He stepped to the side and bowed his head and polite acknowledgment before going inside himself; young girls stood in groups talking and laughing with each other quietly as men and woman chatted casually.

Lucien then cursed himself more, for being out of his element and not knowing what to do. He was about to turn an leave when he heard a woman call, "Mr. Gautier, if you leave now I will never forgive you."

He immediately spun around to face an older woman, she was tall for a woman; almost six feet tall and had to be at least two score older than he looked. Her hair was left down and her face unpainted, her gown was a blue off-the-shoulder creation that put all the others he had seen to shame. "You were not thinking of leaving so soon where you, Mr. Gautier?"

"No Your Grace," Lucien said as he took her gloved hand and brought it to his lips, kissing the knuckles lightly. "I was only going to go out for a bit of air."

She shook her head, "Please, call me Eleanor." She told him with a smile on her face, "I also request you do not lie to me. I know what a man running away looks like and you Sir, were running away."

Lucien could not help but smile at the older woman, "You are completely right Madam Eleanor."

"I am always right," she told him. "Now, I'm glad you came. Everyone will be thrilled to see you. It's not every day that we have a foreigner move to London." Before Lucien had a chance to reply she continued, "Where are you from originally?"

"Paris, Madam." Lucien told her politely.

"Ah, Paris. I have been there a time or two; it was absolutely remarkable," she told him. "Though, I was told by Mr. Watkins you came from Italy."

"I was living in Italy when I contacted Mr. Watkins about my current estate," he stated matter-of-factly. "I have not lived in Paris for sometime."

"Where have you lived then, Mr. Gautier?"

"France, Italy, I was also in Greece for some time." Lucien explained, "I enjoy moving about."

Eleanor shook her head, "Young men such as yourself should not be moving about like you are part of the circus. How is it that you keep your title and lands without being there?"

Lucien became uneasy by her question. He had his title since the year before he became what he was. His father had died, leaving it to his only son and Heir, it wasn't like he could openly say the title had been his for fifty years. "I have brothers who watch over my land. They understand my love for travel."

Eleanor continued to smile, "That is good that your brothers watch your land."

"Yes... It is." replied Lucien with slight pause.

"Now, I want to introduce you to some of the young woman who are in here this Season." Eleanor told him as she began to walk towards a group of girls that was looking their way and giggling like children. "Come."

Lucien followed her hesitantly as he said, "Madam Eleanor, I am not looking for a young woman to marry."

"Hush, I am not trying to play match maker. I am only trying to introduce you to some desirable young ladies." Eleanor said pleasantly just before getting to the group, "Good Evening." Each woman addressed Her Grace with a 'Good Evening' and curtsying, "I would you all of you to meet Lucien Gautier, Duke of Angoulême. Mr. Gautier this is Lucy Crowley, Beatrice Kent, and Elizabeth's Acker." Eleanor directed to each of the girls who were all prim and proper, each wearing a dress that cost almost as much as their dowries did.

"Good evening, Ladies." Lucien acknowledged as Elizabeth extended her hand towards his, Lucien took her hand and kissed it while the other girls giggled.

"Mr. Gautier, it is lovely to meet you," Elizabeth lilted.

Lucien nodded his head, "Like wise Mademoiselle."

Elizabeth smiled radiantly before saying, "I'm so sorry we have to be leaving you but the first dance is starting and all of us are already taken for it." She said speaking for her friends and herself, "Though, I'm sure if you want to dance we all have dances free on our agendas."

"No thank you, Mademoiselle. I am in no mood to dance tonight."

Elizabeth's smile turned into a slight frown while her friends left her side to go with their dancing partner, "Oh I am sorry to hear that Mr. Gautier. I hope that as the night progresses you will be in a fairer mood."

"It was nice meeting you Mademoiselle Elizabeth."

"You as well," she replied as she turned and smiled at a man approaching her.

Lucien turned away and looked at Eleanor, "Anyone else I must socialize with?"

Eleanor laughed, "Not at the moment, the young ladies are about to start dancing." They walked off to the side as the partnered men and woman began the dance.

"If I may ask, why are you not dancing with your husband?"

"He is socializing with the other men and will dance with me when he feels like he must dance," she responded.

Lucien and Eleanor did not talk anymore during the dance, the music played quietly and the people moved like one great wave. He watched the people curiously when his eyes settled on one of the young woman dancing with a young man. She was tiny and her hair was a dark brown in a simple bun with a gold comb in it, her dress was a deep plum color and lavender that was fitted to her well.

As he watched her move he became almost entranced by how she moved with her partner, his eyes moved with her movements and when the man blocked his view of her he shifted to look at her more.

Eleanor, noticing his movements and stare at the young woman said, "At least I know you are a man that is interested in woman."

"Excuse me?"

Eleanor let out a small laugh, "That is Lady Lorraine Whitworth. I will introduce the two of you at the end of this dance."

"That is not necessary."

"Of course it is, you will also be asking her for the next open dance on her agenda," Eleanor ordered. "You will not be standing around watching her all night and not dance with her."

Lucien sighed, "I will dance with her."

"Good," Eleanor then stayed quiet and the dance was soon over, the people scattered and Eleanor then said, "Let us go now."

She led Lucien right to Lorraine. Lorraine noticed the Duchess approaching her said, "Good Evening, Your Grace."

"I've told you to call me Eleanor, child." she told Lorraine before saying, "Lorrie, this is Mr. Lucien Gautier, Duke of Angoulême; Mr. Gautier, this is Lady Lorraine Whitworth, Daughter to Marquess of Winchester."

When Lorraine extended her hand to Lucien he took it and kissed her knuckles, "Good evening, Mademoiselle. It's a pleasure meeting you."

"The pleasure is all mine, Mr. Gautier," replied Lorraine with a warm smile.

Lucien then asked, "Mademoiselle, would you honor me with your next open dance?"

"Of course, Mr. Gautier. None of the following dances in my agenda have been filled, yet."

He was almost shocked to her such news, he didn't understand why such a radiant young woman wouldn't have her whole agenda filled up. "That is terrible news."

"I must agree."

"If I may inquire as to why none of these buffoons would ask you to dance?"

Lorraine's jade green eyes sparkled as she laughed at his comment, "Hush now, they are not buffoons. I do not have the slightest idea as to why they do not want to."

"Very well then, I would like to offer myself to all the open slots on your agenda until one of these other men decide they would like to dance with you."

"I kindly accept your offer," giggled Lorraine.

The people began to gather again for the next dance so Lucien led Lorraine to the dance floor. The music started and they began to dance, "Mademoiselle can I make inquiry?"

"Of course, Mr. Gautier."

"What is your age?"

"I will be twenty in a few months and you Mr. Gautier?"

"Five and Twenty, Mademoiselle, " Lucien gave the age he physically was.

Lorraine looked up at him and asked, "May I ask something of you, Mr. Gautier?"

"Yes."

"I would request you stop calling me Mademoiselle."

"What would you wish me to call you instead?"

"By my given name. Even Lorrie will do, I just feel like a little girl when I am called Miss or Mademoiselle." Lorraine stated.

"I will call you Lorraine," Lucien told her.

"Thank you Mr. Gautier."

He smiled at her, "Now I would like to request something of you."

"What would that be?"

"Call me Lucien, when people call me Mister and Monsieur I feel like a man three times my senior."

Lorraine laughed happily and said, "I will call you Lucien then, as long as you continue to call me Lorraine."

They continued to dance and when it was over they talked more. They danced five times that night and each time Lucien learned something new about Lorraine, like her father let her come to the social party unattended because the Duchess was a friend of the family and knew that Eleanor wouldn't allow Lorraine's name to be scandalized. He learned that she had lived in London most of her life.

By the end of the night Lucien didn't want to leave Lorraine but knew he had to. "I must go," Lorraine told him with a small frown, "Father won't like it if I return home to late."

"I understand." Lucien told her, "I will walk you to your carriage."

She smiled brightly and they left the house, walking over to where her valet was waiting. Lucien opened the carriage door for her and said, "I had a wonderful evening."

"I did too, thank you for filling up the empty spots on my agenda." She gave him a small smile.

Lucien helped her up into her carriage and said, "I hope to see you again soon."

With hesitation, Lorraine kissed Lucien's cheek. "You are such a gentleman, Lucien. I hope to also see you again soon. Possibly at the next ball."

"Possibly," Lucien said in agreement. He wanted to kiss her back but not the friendly, innocent kiss she had given him on his cheek. He wanted to kiss her lips in a passionate way that would undoubtedly ruin her reputation. "I hope the rest of the evening is good for you." With that he closed the carriage door and tapped on the side and the carriage began to move, leaving the area and his sight.

With a deep sigh he turned and headed for his carriage, he was about to get in when he saw Eleanor rushing towards him with a sheet of parchment. When she got to the carriage she handed it to him, "Write Lorraine a letter to thank her for the wonderful evening."

"Madam Eleanor, I cannot accept that." Lucien said, he actually feared what was on that piece of parchment.

"You will take this and write her a letter. I have not seen her smile that way in a very long time and I will not see it go now that it is back." Eleanor told him sternly.

He took the piece of parchment and said, "Thank you, Madam. I will write to her thanking her for the evening."

"Good, I am glad. Now I will let you go. You are, no doubt, very tired."

If only she knew that he wasn't tired in the least. Actually the nights events didn't take away any of his energy. "Good bye, Madam Eleanor."

"I will send you a message for the next Ball. Good Evening." She turned and headed back into her home so Lucien closed the carriage door and tapped on the door. The hackney immediately took off, pulling the carriage away from the home.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 8:40 pm


Chapter Four
June 28th, 1888;

Lucien arrived at his estate; immediately retired to his study. Yanking off the jacket, he threw it onto the chair before taking off the cravat and waistcoat; dropping both to the floor. Stripping down to his trousers, he needed to have those confining clothes off of him in order to concentrate on the letter he had to write to the Lady he had the most wonderful evening with.

"Wonderful," he thought to himself. He actually enjoyed his night which was a first in a long time. When he went to run a hand through his hair he realized it was still bound and took it down, freeing his hair from their confinement as he again ran a hand through his hair. "I am making a mess of everything." He whispered to himself before sitting down at the desk.

The room was still pitch dark but didn't bother with the lamps, he could see perfectly. Taking out a piece of parchment, Lucien picked up his quill and began to write the first thing that came to mind.

Lady Lorraine,
I had the most wonderful time last night. I am thankful to you for accepting my offers to dance and would like to compliment you. You are the most spectacular dancer I've ever had the pleasure to dance with. Thank you once again and I am looking forward to seeing you at the next Ball.
Yours Truly,
Lucien Gautier


His eyes fixed on the paper, he read over the brief letter several times. Unsure about most of what he had written onto that simple piece of parchment. Never in all the time he walked the Earth had he ever felt like this about a woman; he almost felt alive again.

Almost.

He contemplated sealing the letter. He knew it could get him into trouble. Lucien feared he might be leading her on; him thinking to make her his wife or some such nonsense.

"No, the woman is smart." He told himself, "She wouldn't lead herself to believe in such things."

Lucien folded the letter and sealed it with wax before writing her name on it. He stood and walked to the door, opening it, "Christopher!" He bellowed.

Almost immediately a young man was running towards him, obviously thinking something was horribly wrong since his Lord was calling for him so loudly at night. "Yes, my Lord?" Christopher panted as he came to a stop in from of him. Christopher, a young boy of only about fifteen, was a stable hand that stayed most nights in the stables to help brush the horses after every use.

"I request that you take this note to Lady Lorraine at this address tomorrow." He handed the boy both pieces of parchment before handing him a shilling.

Christopher's eyes lite up as he took the notes in hand and stuffing the shilling into his pocked, "Yes, Sir. I'll do it first thin' in the mornin'. Right afta Mr. Hensley and I feed the horses."

Lucien nodded, "Thank you. You are dismissed." With that the boy rushed off, without another word.



June 29th, 1888;
Lady Lorraine Whitworth entered her family's breakfast room at a quarter after ten. "Hello Father," She greeted as she took the seat next to him.

"Good morning, Lorraine. I take it that the evening went well?" Charles Whitworth, 15th Marquess of Winchester, asked.

Lorraine smiled brightly, "Oh yes, it was wonderful." She stopped as the kitchen maid set down a plate in front of her; the plate holding eggs and toast. Her usual morning breakfast.

She lifted her fork and took a small bite of the eggs just as the footman entered the breakfast room, "Lady Lorraine, I have a letter for you."

Her eyes shot up from her plate to look at the folded paper in the footman's hands, she stood up and walked over to him, taking the letter. "Thank you,"

He bowed to her slightly before retreating. Lorraine eyed her name on the letter that was written with the most beautiful handwriting she had ever seen. Carefully opening it she scanned the letter and smiled.

"Who is writing you, Dear?" Her father asked curiously.

Lorraine just smiled at her father, "A man from the Ball last night father."

Charles stood up from his place and took the letter from his daughter and read it quickly, "Lucien Gautier? Why do I not recognize that name?"

She shook her head and took her letter back from Charles, "That is because he is from France."

The man scoffed, "Really and what makes him think that he can send letters to my daughter? What stature does he hold?"

"He is a Duke, father." Lorraine told him, almost bitterly. "Duke of Angoulême"

Charles' eyes lite up at the word Duke, "A Duke is interested in you?" She let out an irritated sigh. She knew her father was interested in marrying her off to Lucien now. No one was interested in her, not since the death of her mother. It had been a scandal no one of great stature wanted to involve themselves in.

"He is not interested in me father. I had one offer to dance and he asked if he could have the rest on my agenda if no one asked. I agreed. He was being nothing more than friendly to me."

Charles scoffed, "Friendly you say." Then went on to mumble things that she could not make out.

"I am going to break my fast and then write back to him," Lorraine stated to her father before adding. "Also, I am not interested in him as a husband and he is not looking for a wife. The Duchess told me so herself."

Lorraine finished breaking her fast as she thought of what to reply to Lucien; only she couldn't think of what to write to him. Standing she went back to her room where her lady's maid Mary waited for her, "I think I am going to go out."

"Out where?" Mary asked.

"Oh, just around town. I'll need my riding habit... the blue one I think." Lorraine said.

Mary nodded and disappeared before coming out holding the medium blue ensemble. Mary helped her changed without asking any questions and when Lorraine was all dressed the maid asked, "Would you like a riding hat?"

"No, I think I'll just need a bonnet," Lorraine told her simply. When she had the bonnet she placed it on her head and tucked most of her hair into it, a few pieces hung out the sides and the front which she did not bother with. "Thank you, Mary."

"When are you coming back?"

"Oh I won't be gone but an hour or two," then she left. Leaving her room and going down the stairs that lead right to the foyer. She exited the house and walked around to the stables where Gerald was.

"Good day Lady Lorraine," Gerald said upon seeing her.

She returned the greeting and asked, "Could you please ready Annabell for me?"


Lorraine arrived at Lucien's home and dismounted her horse, Annabell. A man, who she assumed was a stable hand, came towards her. "Good day, Miss. Would ya like me to take your horse?"

She gave him a small nod, "Yes, thank you." She handed Annabell's reins to the stable hand before heading to the front entrance of the house.

Lorraine knocked softly and it was only a few moments before the door opened to reveal an elderly looking man, "May I help you, Madam?"

"I am looking for Mr. Gautier," Lorraine said with a small smile.

The man gave a small frown, "I am sorry to tell you that Mr. Gautier is indisposed of at the moment. He will be until later this evening."

Lorraine didn't mean to let her disappointment show but it was obvious from the man's expression that she did, "All right then, will you tell him I called?"

"Of course, and you are?"

"Lorraine Whitworth," she replied; she almost told him where they met just in case Lucien had forgotten her but refrained. "If he does not remember me then there is no use reminding him," she thought to herself.

The gentleman nodded before saying, "I will tell him, thank you for calling Miss Whitworth." With that the man closed the door and she turned to see the stable hand leading the horse back towards her.

She slowly walked down the few steps and approached him, "Thank you, Sir."



Chapter Five
June 28th, 1888;

His vision was red as he stalked quickly and quietly through his childhood home, the screams of those he had already slaughters ringing in his ears.

The screams didn't phase him.

They didn't slow him down in the least.

He came the door to his mother's private sleeping chamber and paused, he heard her heavy breathing as she rushed through a prayer, begging for the safety of her soul and the outcome of the nights events. The growl the escaped him was barely human as he pushed the door open to reveal his mother cowering in the middle of the room.

Her dark hair was tousled from sleep and her eyes were full of fear. Her once pristine white sleeping gown was covered in the blood of a simple maid that had went to awaken her.

"No... Do not harm me."

Lucien didn't say anything as his bloody red vision narrowed on his prey. He slowly walked around her, circling her like an animal examining the threat of his mark.

"Stay away!" She screamed as she darted to the opposite side of the room to grab a heavy iron candle stick to defend herself with.

This invigorated Lucien. It excited him to have his prey so afraid of him that it would run so he lunged at her, grabbed her by her biceps and pushing her against the wall.

"I am your mother, you cannot harm me. He will not allow you to harm me, you beast." She whispered as she looked upon his face. The face of the boy she had coddled and soothed as a child. The face of the young youth that had held her hand when they buried the still borne babe that was to be his sister. The face of her murderer.

"This is your fault," he seethed before burying his fangs in her jugular.


Jolting upright in bed, Lucien's hand immediately went to his chest only to feel his nonexistent heartbeat. He released a long breath before letting his hand fall from his chest onto the blanket that was tangled around his narrow waist. He looked down at his hands to see that they were shaking, trying to calm himself he ran his hand through his hair, "Mon dieu... c'est quoi çe bordel est à gauche avec moi?" He whispered to himself as he took a quick glance around his room.

Carefully untangling the covers from around himself, Lucien stood up from his bed. The room was unnaturally stuffy, which caused him even more discomfort. Stalking over to the heavy curtains, he pushed them apart and threw open his balcony doors to let the cool night air hit his bare skin. The sun had just fallen below the horizon and the red-purple hues of the sky were slowly fading darker and darker.

He breathed deeply through his nose as he closed his eyes, letting the air cool his nerves as well as his body. The dream had been more vivid than ever, and with the intense vividness came the extreme uneasiness the dream always caused him.

The blood shouldn't bother him because of what he was; but it did. Though, it wasn't the blood that disturbed him and shook him to his core; it was the fact that he caused the blood shed.

When he opened his eyes he was a lot calmer; backing away from the balcony and to his bureau. Lucien pulled out his normal attire before quickly dressing, wanting to get out of his bedroom quickly. Looking into the mirror on the top, he realized how unkempt he looked; a full beard was growing on his face and his hair was a disaster.

Realizing that he couldn't go out looking like a street urchin he lite the oil lamps that were around his bedroom, casting a light glow throughout the room. With the light - which he had no need for to begin with - he shaved his face clean and brushed out his hair before pulling it back.

Satisfied with how looked he dried his face with the cloth by the basin before taking several long strides to his door; with a flick of his wrist he unlocked the door and stepped into the hall.

The house was quiet. He could hear William bustling around on the main floor, the cook and Harvey were in the kitchen; the cook was humming to herself and Harvey was eating. He slowly walked down the stairs and turned into the dining area where William was washing the long dining table. "Good Eve William," Lucien said as he strode to the old man.

William turned and looked at his employer, "Good eve, Mr. Gautier." He cleared his throat before saying, "You have a visitor today, Sir."

Lucien felt his eyebrows raise in surprise before inquiring, "Who?"

"A Miss Lorraine Whitworth. She arrived around Midday to see you. It appeared as if she rode her horse here, Harvey held the horse while she came to the door."

"Stupid girl," Lucien muttered to himself before turning on his heel. "Tell Mrs. Worthington that I will not be attending supper this night and to serve it to the house staff."

"Alright, Sir. May I inquire as to how long you will be gone?"

"Most the night, no doubt," he replied before stepping into the foyer and strode out the door with long strides. Upon getting to the stables he chose he'd take Zephyr out for the trip since his exercise was limited to once a week. The animal was temperamental; he hated to be saddled by anyone but Lucien and tried to buck off anyone who thought to ride him.

Lucien grabbed the lead rope and attached it to his halter before leading him out of the stall and to the post; tying him up there. He quickly placed the saddle blanket over the horse and set the saddle on in one fluid movement and fastening it. Lucien went to mount the horse when Zephyr balked, Lucien sighed and patted the horse's hindquarters before saying, "It is alright, Zyphyr. Calm yourself." When the horse stopped pulling Lucien untied him and mounted the animal before grabbing the reins.

Zyphyr, being the wily animal he was, didn't bother starting off in a trot like Lucien would have liked; he started at full speed leaving Lucien in control of only which direction he was headed.

The ride took half as long with the stud running most the way, as he reined Zyphyr to a halt he dismounted and lead the beast towards the stables. A young man emerged and acknowledged him, "Sir."

"Good Evening," Lucien greeted trying to act pleasant, "My horse needs to be detained."

"I'll take him."

Lucien shook his head, "He is hardly broken to anyone else. If you'll show me to where I can keep him, I will place him there."

The man nodded and lead Lucien into the stables and to the first vacant stall; he didn't bother unsaddling the creature as he closed the half door and checked the water level. The barrel of water was full so he retreated from the stable, satisfied that his horse was cared for before heading to the front entrance of the home.

He stood at the door several moments before his fist rapped on the door several times, he stood patiently until the door was opened. A man of about sixty stood looking at him, "Can I help you?" the man inquired.

"I am here to speak to Lady Whitworth," Lucien said as a gentleman would, not bothering to use her first name in the company of another man.

The man's eyes narrowed, "What of your name?"

"Lucien Gautier, Duke of Angoulême." He announced, his head lifting slightly as if he was proud of his title.

The man's eyes lite up as he extended his hand, "Charles Whitworth, 15th Marquess of Winchester."

Lucien cursed inwardly at himself. Lucien took his hand and shook it, "Good Eve, may I speak to your daughter."

"Oh... Of course! Come in, come in. It was rude of me to make you stand out there," Charles said with enthusiasm as he led the Duke inside. "Mirabel!" Charles called only to have a made rush in. "Take His Grace's coat and bring us drinks in the parlor."

"No, that won't be necessary. I only came to speak to Miss Whitworth."

"Nonsense. Lorraine is in the middle of dressing for supper and will not be ready for another half hour at the most. Have a drink with me while we wait."

Lucien took a deep breath, "Very well."

He followed the older man into the small formal parlor and sat on the single chair while Charles took a seat next to the empty fireplace, "Tell me, what do you want to talk to Lorrie about?"

"Things that do not concern you, Sir." Lucien replied in a tense voice.

"I believe it is. She is my daughter, if you are discussing proposals you should be talking to me." Charles said as if hopeful Lorraine was finally receiving a proposal.

"I am not proposing, the thought never even crossed my mind."

The room fell silent as the maid came in carrying a tray containing two crystal glasses and a crystal glass with dark amber liquor. Mirabel poured the Scotch into the glasses, only filling them up half way and handing each the men their glasses. She curtsied before taking her leave and leaving the two men alone.

"How did you come to the assumption that I wanted to propose marriage to Lorraine?" Lucien asked before taking a drink from his glass.

The older man just shook his head, "Lorrie does not receive very many calls; none at all if you do not count the females that come to see her. The men avoid her like the plague and when you came calling I hoped that maybe my girl would be married off before I die."

Lucien's brow raised slightly in confusion, "Why are there no suitors? She seems like a perfect choice for a man in need of heirs and a beautiful wife."

Charles shook his head, "You forget reputation, boy. There was a... scandal a few years back that affected Lorraine's coming out."

"Please elaborate."

"A few years ago, four to be exact, Lorraine's mother was caught in an awkward situation. She had gone outside our marriage bed and taken a lover; a foreign one mind you - and fell deeply in love as she put it. As soon as I found out I called the man out, the boy was a tad older than you but not as good as myself with a sword. It didn't take me long to run him through; it actually took longer for my wife to throw herself off her bedroom balcony. All that happened just before Season started and Lorraine wasn't even invited to go to any of the dances because of the events of that summer." Charles downed his drink in one gulp before pouring himself more, "As you can see, not many men want their future wife to have a reputation like that. They believe its genetic or some nonsense of the like."

Lucien shook his head, "That is absolutely ridiculous."

"What is ridiculous?" A soft voice asked from behind the two men.

Lucien jumped up to face Lorraine, her hair was damp and hanging around her like a curtain and her eyes looked even greener than ever as she looked upon him. Her dress was a simple green dress that flowed with her movements but held her in like the dress she wore to the ball.

"Lucien, how are you this evening?" She asked with a large smile.

"I am well, and yourself?"

"I am well also," Lorraine replied as she turned to her father. "Did I disrupt something important?"

Charles shook his head as he stood, "No Dear, why don't you and His Grace step outside to speak. I think I am going to see what Gretchen is cooking for Supper."

Lorraine nodded as she told motioned for Lucien to follow her to the glass double doors that lead out into what seemed like a very beautiful garden. She pushed open the doors to the cool night and both stepped out, Lucien following her and keeping his eyes attached to the back of her head. Not letting them wander to observe her figure fro behind.

"I assume your man told you I came by this afternoon," Lorraine stated as she walked slowly to a bench that sat before rose bushes.

"Yes, I was busy with some business." He looked around the large garden as she sat down on the bench, "Your garden is very lovely."

Lorraine's smile grew broader, "Thank you; Mary and I spend the weekends caring for it."

Lucien stood in front of her as he looked around, "My man did not tell me what you when you came visited."

She shook her head, "I never told him. I wanted to thank you for the letter." She stood and walked briskly away from him, "This may sound very foolish but I could not think of what to write to you so I rode out this morning to talk to you in person because I knew if I stood in front of you I would know what to say."

"That would be...?" He asked, drawing out the question.

"I wanted to tell you I am not interested in marriage, just in case you were thinking it." She turned to look at him, "I hope thats what you were thinking otherwise I will feel horribly foolish for even thinking you would make an offer to me." She held her hands in front of her, wringing them nervously as her eyes darted from his face to her hands.

"Why would you not want to marry?"

"I do! Of course I want to marry some day but I do not want to marry for the beauty of my body and the amount of my dowry. I want to marry for," she paused and looked at him, "love. My father says it is a strange notation and I should not get my hopes up, but I cannot help myself."

Lucien just smiled at her slightly, "No, it is not a strange notation. Though, I was not going to offer for you, I actually came over to halt any and all thoughts of us getting married."

Lorraine's eyes grew wide slightly with shock before she smiled brightly, "What a strange pair we are, do you not think so Lucien? We both are friendly enough to be husband and wife but neither of us want to get married."

He chuckled lightly, "We are friendly enough with each other to be friends."

She smiled lightly, "Friends... I like that term. We are friends then?"

"Yes we are friends," he replied.

Lorraine smiled as she said, "Alright then, we will be friends. So there is no need for us to be so formal around each other; meaning that you can call me Lorraine or Lorrie around everyone, even my father."

"I cannot do that," Lucien told her as he looked at her seriously.

"Call me Lorraine?"

He nodded, "People will assume we are lovers and since your mother had a foreign lover Society thinks you will take after her by taking a foreign lover."

Lorraine scoffed, "Damn Society. Damn them all. Fine then, you can call me Lorraine when we are having social visits and such."

"Very well then... Lorrie," he said with a slight smirk.

Lorraine laughed in delight before she said, "I hate to make you rush off since we are now just becoming friends but I know my father is drinking himself to an early death inside anticipating what we are discussing, so I am going to go in and have supper."

Lucien nodded, "Then I will leave. I must be getting back to my home to take care of some items of business anyways."

"I will write," Lorraine told him as she turned and looked over her shoulder at him, "You have a nice evening."

"You must also have a wonderful evening," Lucien said as he watched her go in. Staring only a moment longer at the door he headed around the house and to the stables. Retrieving his horse he lead him out to the path; stroking his mane, Lucien carefully mounted the stud and headed home.


... to be continued ...

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:03 pm


I just can't read it. I keep seeing my Lucian and I just have to look away. surprised But I will try again. I kind of liked it~, even though I didn't read much.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:27 pm


I generally liked this, though the first part strikes me as a bit 'Interview with a Vampire'. It gets better as it goes on though - I personally love Lady...(frick)...whatshername - she's kick a** in such a polite manner.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:37 pm


Serenity Reed;; You can always refer to Lucien as Gautier. It'll probably make a difference. Also, thank you for reading! I'm glad you like what you read.

charbookwyrm;; I got that from someone else when I first wrote it. I actually didn't even realize it until after I read it. Though, I was to lazy to go back and change all of it. I hope your thinking of Eleanor, because she is supposed to have a kick a** attitude in a polite type of way. biggrin I'm glad you liked it.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 1:36 am


Elenor - that's the one! (Sorry, I'm just so bad with names - I have enough trouble with real people, let alone book characters.) Yup, i liked - awaiting the next part smile

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