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Phantom_Crazy

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:11 pm


I haven't posted anything in forever. DX

I've come back to haunt y'all. 4laugh

http://phantomcrazy.deviantart.com/art/Delilah-104988520

So. Critique. To me the legs are stubby. bleh.

*note: The hair got magically bigger when coloring it because the marker bled in one spot, then I had ocd and made it all one line bigger, and so the hair grew bigger than supposed to be, and this explanation is longer than it needs to be. End.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:10 am


It's cute but you want to work on your folding cloths;
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/howtodraw/jdillon/clothingmain.html
that helped me a lot when I first started to work on folds I'm sure it'll help you asl well =]

next your hands and feet look strange and I think you sould probably pay a little more attention to them as well.

but it is still nice and very cute biggrin

gun_girl


Phantom_Crazy

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:54 am


lol. the hands.
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