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Arionis Chambers
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:16 pm


H'okay, so, I had a little brain storm of a story that I wanted to make into a comic.

It's going to be a war basically between me and Kaze, one of us fighting FOR the lives of humans, the other having grown tired of their foolishness (the humans) after Bit comes in carrying Yuki's massacred body.

Who you want to be the bad guy? Kaze or myself?

Oh, and do prove that my writing style can be a TAD bit squeamish,

one scene has an angry "good side" Ash shooting Chou in the head just as he manages to kiss her. *she thought he was attacking* I have that scene, an espionage expert Bit doing his job, and a guest appearance from Snow all worked out as preview concepts.

Which you wanta see? This is your one shot at a sneak peak.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:33 pm


O_O;;.......oh God....I think I'm gonna be sick.... gonk *covers Chou's eyes* gonk gonk gonk

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:43 pm


I wanna know where I am in all this Arionis.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:44 pm


I actually have you as a double agent 8P

Now, no more asking your roles people, sorry. Need to keep SOME surprises.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:19 pm


Arionis Chambers
I actually have you as a double agent 8P

Now, no more asking your roles people, sorry. Need to keep SOME surprises.
I din even ASK!! gonk
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:19 pm


AshoftheMidnightRose
Arionis Chambers
I actually have you as a double agent 8P

Now, no more asking your roles people, sorry. Need to keep SOME surprises.
I din even ASK!! gonk


YOU, little Ashie, were an example.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:26 pm


Arionis Chambers
AshoftheMidnightRose
Arionis Chambers
I actually have you as a double agent 8P

Now, no more asking your roles people, sorry. Need to keep SOME surprises.
I din even ASK!! gonk


YOU, little Ashie, were an example.
A sick and disturbed example at that... emo
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:52 pm


Kaze makes a better hero. You, Ari, make a better villain, the villain everyone loves because he's so much cooler.

And my role better be flattering >_<

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:00 pm


Yeah. I'm the psycho extremist who shoots her boyfriend! gonk emo *sulks*
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:54 pm


Arionis Chambers
H'okay, so, I had a little brain storm of a story that I wanted to make into a comic.

It's going to be a war basically between me and Kaze, one of us fighting FOR the lives of humans, the other having grown tired of their foolishness (the humans) after Bit comes in carrying Yuki's massacred body.

Who you want to be the bad guy? Kaze or myself?

Oh, and do prove that my writing style can be a TAD bit squeamish,

one scene has an angry "good side" Ash shooting Chou in the head just as he manages to kiss her. *she thought he was attacking* I have that scene, an espionage expert Bit doing his job, and a guest appearance from Snow all worked out as preview concepts.

Which you wanta see? This is your one shot at a sneak peak.


I wanna see teh espionage!!! gonk
You are teh bad guy.. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:06 pm


//one scene has an angry "good side" Ash shooting Chou in the head just as he manages to kiss her. *she thought he was attacking*//

AshoftheMidnightRose
Yeah. I'm the psycho extremist who shoots her boyfriend! gonk emo *sulks*


>.> Ari......that scene is ((WAY off from what Ash and I are like.
I wouldn't harm her. I'm more afraid about being hurt BY her. She knows what kind of power she holds over me.)) Not cool......Not cool at all....

(((YOU JUST WANT TO KILL ME! Ah hell, well I guess I'll see where the story goes. stare I'm watching you Arionis James Chambers.)))
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:45 pm


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//one scene has an angry "good side" Ash shooting Chou in the head just as he manages to kiss her. *she thought he was attacking*//

AshoftheMidnightRose
Yeah. I'm the psycho extremist who shoots her boyfriend! gonk emo *sulks*


>.> Ari......that scene is ((WAY off from what Ash and I are like.
I wouldn't harm her. I'm more afraid about being hurt BY her. She knows what kind of power she holds over me.)) Not cool......Not cool at all....

(((YOU JUST WANT TO KILL ME! Ah hell, well I guess I'll see where the story goes. stare I'm watching you Arionis James Chambers.)))


Chou, you WEREN"T attacking her. You'r a shape shifter, working for (guess it's gonna be me), and while having been in combat with one of Ash's side, Ash herself snares you in a rope trap.

Ash : I know for a FACT you can't use your shifting when the blood is rushing to your head. Can't concentrate.

Chou: Ashie, please, let me explain!

Ash: Shut up! WHY are you still there, Chou? *Ari's* killed so many innocents! WHY are you still with him?

Chou: I know it looks bad, but look, once he's done, we can be together again, without any problems!

Ash : *glaring, trying to hide tears* YOU'VE killed humans as well!

Chou : So that I can be with you!!!! Please, listen.

*starts swinging in the rope he's attached to*

*steps back, drawing pistol* CHOU! Stop, right now! I know you can't heal Chou, don't make me do this.

*keeps swinging, nearing Ash*

Ash: CHOU! STOP, PLEASE!

*close silouhette shot of Chou reaching Ash's lips, caption box saying*

"The second he had connected was the second her fear compelled her to pull the trigger "

"The next second, she realized what had happened"

*view panning up to close up of Ash crying, curled on ground*

"Losing a loved one comes with grief."

*closer view*

"Grief comes with anger"

*closer view, Ash stops crying*

"In certain situations, like this one,"

*Ash starts to look up*

"Anger is replaced....."

*Close up of Ash's tear stained eyes and cheek, teeth gritted*

".with hatred."

Ash : "Arionis....."

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:01 pm


Very nice. Elaborate. Well thought out. I like it. Now, DELETE IT BEFORE SOMEBODY ELSE SEES IT! gonk That rocks something fierce but lets not ruin it for everybody.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:26 pm


Too Late! mrgreen

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:55 am


Interesting script....
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