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 Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:12 pm
Wow. It's been a really, really long time since I've posted anything here.
Thank goodness school's finally almost normal enough for me to start drawing again.
So. I'm working on a commission, and I'd like some pointers, if you wouldn't mind please.
I'm just not sure on the positioning of the legs, though I like them a lot, as well as the left (her left, our right) hand.
Here. Click here!
And of course anything else you see, that could be helpful. I'd appreciate any feedback! <3
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:00 pm
i think this picture looks great!
although, it'd be better if you lowered the waist and made the torso longer and the head could be bigger or make the jawline less slanted upward
good job! nd good luck! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:03 pm
Sorry this took so long to get back to you, babe U^^
But I made a red line for you to see what I'm talking about
I kept the legs long, because that's your style, and they look good that way.
Comparitively with the rest of the body, the head should be made to be slightly larger.
Her left arm (our right) looked to an at an extremely awkward angle and too long, so I put it next to her body.
He right leg (our left) was a little disjointed when it got around to the hip area, so I made it a little smoother.
And her right fooot (our left) looked to be going in an odd direction with her leg, so I pointed more towards her left (our right).
So, these are just some minor suggestions. Your drawing is extrememly awesome, hun; only follow them if you wish, and I hope I have been of some help. 3nodding
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