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 Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 8:29 pm
Man. I haven't been on Gaia for like... years. XD
Anyways... this was my first attempt at smudging. XD
Elegant Eternity.
Please let me know what I need to work on. Be as harsh as you want. XD
I love help in any form.
**I know one of the eyes is smaller than the other. The next time I draw, I'll make sure to correct that.
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:25 pm
Not much to add, but a hit about the eyes sizes as you said.
One way to fix it is to first draw one of the eyes (it only works for the pose)
and if you drew the further away eye first, purposely make closer one bigger, and vice versa .
Perspectively, the eye away from you in naturally smaller.
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:24 pm
The person is really pretty and I like the unusual skin tone. It kinda reminds me of Durza, but that's probably just 'cause I'm always stuck in a fantasy. Anyway, I also don't think it's totally the eye size that's the problem with the eyes (I mean, the size would have to be adjusted but there's another thing there). The angle of the eyes are different. The one on the right is really elegantly slanted upward on the outside, which is really pretty but the other one is sitting all straight. And the left side of the face, like the line that shows the cheek and ya know just the side of the face is a kinda strange shape compared to the very slantiness of the right side of the face. People do have the effect of the very slanted jawbone and then the curvy side of the face when in that pose, but I don't think it's usually to that extent. I dunno. That was only two thngs though, so you're in really great shape. I thought she was extremely beautiful and I really liked the style of hair you used. It's just I'm crazy about details (even if I can't always --or ever-- fix those things on my own pictures... sweatdrop ). Anyway, keep it up.
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