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 Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 5:11 pm
My scanner sucks..so it didn't get the light lines in the latter part of the drawing. 
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:12 pm
nice picture
would you be wanting a critique, then?
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:22 pm
Queen.Trickster nice picture
would you be wanting a critique, then? please.
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:47 am
Well, that is an amazing drawing, I really like the shading and the style of the eyes, it's really unique and awesome!
The one thing I find slightly odd about this picture though is that her boobs are kind of a bit far up her body, like too near the shoulders and perhaps make her head a bit wider or a bit bigger in general.
However, otherwise a great picture, keep up the good work!
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:30 pm
WOW. eek It's so COOL! I like it. Her outfit is all Sci-Fi (even if it's not, that's how it processes in my brain). I didn't really have a problem with her boobs since I've seen that style before, but if you're going with realistic (and not like a boob job realistic) then I suppose they should be brought down a little. I guess. I really didn't mind it. I was just wondering though if she had her chin pressed all the way to her neck when her head was turned or if it just came across that way. If you weren't intending it to look like she brought her chin as far in as possible then I think you can just bring the mouth and nose up a little more. But otherwise, I thought this picture was really cool. Heck! Even with that bit of confusion I really liked/like it. mrgreen Good Good Job! *thumbs up with some big smiles* It's not even boring even though she's just standing there. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:03 pm
OMG. You are amazing *bows* I really enjoy just looking at this piece, because it's just so great. To me, the proportions are right, except for the breast, which seems a little too high up. But other than that, great. Fantastic job on the shading, because for me, that's one of the the hardest parts of making a character come to life. The eyes are wonderful as well (remind me of Arakawa-sensei's eyes) and perfectly crafted. I really have very little critique and more endless praise. Great job! *thumbs up*
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 2:09 am
That is an amazing drawing! I adore it!
Ok, now for the whole...'what you can improve on' thing, or whatever you want to call it. biggrin
First off, I feel that the eyes are positioned a bit too high and that the nose could be widened slightly.
And something looks a little odd with the clothing at the person's thighs, I'm sorry but I'm not too sure what it is. xD
The shading is very awesome though, I adore your skill. <3
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:56 am
Well, there's not much to comment (In terms of constructive crit) because it looks quite good to me. However, I'm not sure, but you could do a little more on the folds around her stomach area since folds come from the sides as well.
Aside from that, it looks brilliant so far. Hope I helped a little.
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:19 pm
Aystraea Queen.Trickster nice picture
would you be wanting a critique, then? please. Well then, here we go~!
I love your style, babe
nice crisp lines and a real subtlety to the shading and feel of the objects on the girl
only, I'd say is that her hair is fading into the dark halo around her upper body.
So, what I suggest is to either make the hair from her ears-down darker or the shading around that area darker
so that the hair is more defined.
Also, I'd suggest being more gradual with the fading at the bottom by letting the shading in back, drop farther down her body and hinting at her hands and the remainder of her dress with it
Another last tid-bit would be to lightly shade he lower parts of her arms so that they feel as though they are more rounded, and so they can appear to be behind the dress
but a lovely use of lines and shading, babe
keep up the nice work~!
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:32 pm
Wow.
The shading, the picture, is really amazing.
Although she has a really weird expression going on with her lips that kind of throw me off.
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:17 pm
verrrry nice drawing. the only things i would say about it is that the shoulders are a bit detatched, and you may possibly want to blend in the hips with the waist a little more.
otherwise awesome.
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:20 am
very nice drawing! smile
I would like to point out though that she has no part in her hair. It makes her hair kinda just there and not so much attached to her head maybe?
Other than that I have no qualms..
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