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 Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:14 pm
k, for resons know only to myself (and about ten others XD) I have been designing 16 characters that will go into two books, each having a different strong point:
Books/tomes: Dimentia, Bliss
Attributes: Strength, Endurance, Luck, Wisdom, Speed, Agility, Willpower, Personality
So in a matter of weeks (maybe 2) I should have 16 characters up, I just want to know if they look ok and if they're designed ok. (my scanner sucks so ink is messed up so there only in pencil, sry for horrible quality)
also you can read the other stuff if you want I really only care about the art though, also if you have an alternate name I would like to know... I suck at naming people
Dimentia/Luck:
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q315/Eajo/Keap-Kae00.jpg
(I know she's really skinny but thats for a reason, first girl plus first face I've drawn, XD)
Dimentia/Endurance:
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q315/Eajo/Mga00.jpg
(Yes he's supposed to be a rook, and I did make him too skinny)
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:58 pm
Hi! I like your idea.
For uh... the girl... LUCK! For her, you could maybe make her eyes a little more feminine. And just so you know, her arms are a tad too big for her body (long and thick). Also, you should curve her up a bit; don't be afraid to give her some nice hips! mrgreen And some slope in the shoulders. Just things you should watch out for for your next set of super hero peoples. It was heroes, right?
For the guy... ummm.... EDURANCE! For him, His arms are also a bit long--and a bit stiff/straight/flat. The hands are a little small too. I really like the metal skirt-thing (okay, I know it's not really a skirt and it's just more of his armor, but now you know what I'm talking about) perhaps you can bring the outside lines (on the sides) to come out away from the underneath chainmail a little so the obviously metal armor doesn't look like cloth. And don't be afraid to give him some curves either (skinnier at the waist, rounded armor on the sides --only a little-- where the muscles are in the armor). And don't fear making that skirt-thing (again, I know) go outward a little more. He's supposed to have thighs somewhere down there anyway.
Anyways, I really like the designs for your characters. Nice outfits. I can't ever think of cool outfits for characters. Oh! And I know (since you actually use pen on paper--Kudos to you; I like that) you can't really redo your lines, so maybe just keep these things in mind to draw your next characters even better. blaugh *big thumbs up* Have Fun!
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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 4:42 pm
thx, taken this into account for some others hopefully I can get them up, XD. Technically it is a "skirt" of chainmail... I made the mistake of making him way to skinny though. I've never had problems making ideas (I watch enough anime and cartoons for ideas) but always have trouble getting them down on paper) also its in pencil I guess it wasn't really clear but if I do ink my scanner makes the lines fuzzy and barely visible (I had to darken the printer settings just to get what it is now).
Finished, but need put up:
Dimentia: Agility
Bliss: Speed
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 10:21 pm
Hey Eajo!!!
wow, such akwardness here. Well, this is one spot i hang out at.. well, mostly to post in Draw the avatar above you thread.
Anyways...
i am going to edit this tomorrow.
woot.
can't wait
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:54 am
Eajo Finished, but need put up: Dimentia: Agility Bliss: Speed
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:29 pm
Those are great biggrin
you've got potential
but everybody needs work, so leave room for improvment
(no offense or anything i swear im just offering advice but maybe you could make the girl curvier or more feminine in the face)
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