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 Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 5:49 am
Heya guys!
As you can see, I'm back for a little while,
and I just wanna share my story with you
that I'm working on Mibba.
This subforum seems kinda dead,
so let's revive it, shall we? Title: My Way Home is Through You
By: Annie (Goth Shadow)
Rating: Rated R for some swearing, and some influences.
Disclaimer!: THIS IS PURELY A WORK OF FICTION AND IS NOT REAL IN ANY WAY. I do not own My Chemical Romance. I am also going to use Chiodos and Paramore songs, even though I do not own them. However, I do own Victoria, Shawn, Kale, Carson, Jesse, and all my other characters. This is also my first story that I'm going to try to finish, so DON'T BASH. But you can tell me if it's shitty and I should never write stories again.
Summary:Victoria Zhang is a 17-year-old lonely girl, full of pain and misunderstanding.
She's also the adopted sister of Bob Bryar.
What happens when she gets to go on tour with My Chemical Romance, the band that's the only thing keeping her alive?
What happens when Frank Iero and Mikey Way are both interested in her?
Will Bob let that happen?
Warning: This story is full of lies, deciet, drama, and fights.
Takes place during the Revenge Album.
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 5:53 am
Chapter 1:
A tornado of clothing flew around Victoria Zhang's room as she struggled to pack her suitcase.
"Where did my purple TRIPP Pants go?" she muttered. Victoria dug under a humongous pile of clothes and found it. Snatching it, she carelessly threw it into her black suitcase.
Victoria continued to pick items of clothing up and throw it into her case, cleaning up her room at the same time. She slammed the cover of her suitcase down, and sighed.
"Finally! I never thought I'd finish packing." she said.
Victoria stood up, and looked around the room that she would be leaving.
The black and red walls were covered in various posters, from My Chemical Romance to Green Day to Black Flag. Her bed was covered in purple velvelty sheets that felt soft.
Victoria then rested her eyes on a tattered yellow blanket. It was her very first baby blanket, back before her parents were murdered.
Victoria let her thoughts stop in that instant, not wanting to let the vicious memories return to her. After all, she had enough of those dreams at night.
The phone suddenly rang, pushing her out of her thoughts. She ran quickly to the phone and picked it up from its cradle.
"Hello?" she said.
"Are you done packing yet?" Victoria recognized the voice of her non-biological brother.
"Yeah. I'm just waiting for you to get your fat a** here!" she replied.
"Look who's talking. Anyways, we're gonna be at your house in about 20 minutes.
Is that fine with you?" he said.
"Absolutely!"
"Okay. Be there in 20!"
"See ya." Victoria hung up.
She was very excited, not to mention hyper as well. But she let her thoughts drift back to her life before she became part of her non-biological brother's family.
Victoria's was born in Hong Kong, and her parents were murdered in front of her by a burglar when she was the age of five. Then she was moved from foster house to foster house.
But at each one, she was abused, leaving her with painful scars. She was finally adpoted by the Bryar family at age 14, about three years ago.She was finally happy then.
Victoria was also considered to be a prodigy. She had finished High School at age 12, and college at age 16, about a year ago. She was 17 now.
Victoria still couldn't believe, even after two years, that Bob Bryar, the drummer of My Chemical Romance was part of the family that adopted her.
He was an amazing brother that she was proud of,and it was even better that he was in her favorite band. Because of Victoria's pestering, Bob had finally let her come on tour with him,
and that was why she was packing earlier.
She ran to the bathroom as she heard the door rang, just to check her makeup.
Victoria was disppointed by what she saw in the mirror. A very ghostly pale girl with deep black hair that hung straight to her shoulders with side bangs and purple and red highlights.
She wore black eyeliner and charcoal eye shadow around it. Victoria was also wearing a Invader Zim hoodie, and beneath the hoodie was an Iron Maiden Band-Tee.
She wore black skinny jeans with a pair of worn out checkered vans as well.
Victoria finally became aware of the doorbell ringing over and over again. She rushed to the door, and opened it quickly, hoping to find her brother and his band mates.
Instead, she found her best friend, Shawn.
"SHAWN! You actually came!" She cried, giving Shawn a hug.
She pulled away and studied his face. He had jet-black emoish-skater-ish hair that framed his face perfectly. She had always admired his hair.
"Of course. How could I let my best friend and band mate go without me saying good bye?" he said
Victoria was also in a band as well, called Soveriegn of Shadows. She was the lead guitarist, and Shawn was the vocalist.
Shawn's brother who wasn't here right now, Kale, who looked exactly like him, was the rhythm guitarist. Her other friends who also weren't here right now, Jesse and Carson, were also in the band.
Jesse played the guitar bass, and Carson played the drums.
Shawn flopped onto on her couch, and said, "So, when are they coming?"
"They're supposed to be here right now..." she replied
"Really? You know, I'm gonna miss you lots," Shawn gave her a faint smile.
"Yeah, I'm gonna miss you too, but don't worry, we should be able to tour with My Chemical Romance next year. After all,
we already signed to reprise records. We're just waiting for them to let us know when to start recording in the studio."
"But if they call during the tour, you'll come back right?"
"Duh!" she exclaimed, smacking Shawn in the head. "After all, we've been waiting for this ******** opportunity!"
"Right..."
"You can be a dope in the head sometimes, Shawn." Victoria muttered, shaking her head.
"Well, you're the prodigy here!"
She sighed. "You know I hate being called that. And besides, any human being would have the common sense to know that I would of course come back."
Just then the door bell started to ring. Victoria's eyes went wide and she frantically said, "Do I look okay? Is my makeup fine? Where's my suitcase?"
"You look gorgeous V-Bear. Don't worry. And answer the door, I'll go get your suitcase for you." Shawn said soothingly as he marched upstairs.
The constant ringing of the doorbell was really annoying. She walked calmly to the door, smoothed her hair and clothing down before opening it.
Tell me how it is. =]
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:06 am
I think no one has been on here for a
loooonnnngggg time...
why is this place so dead??
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:59 pm
Goth Shadow I think no one has been on here for a
loooonnnngggg time...
why is this place so dead??
Psssh...I've been the only person on here that has actually spoken. It's the beginning of the school year so I guess everyone's bummed out. Me? I have no idea. Aaaanyways....
ACCEPT MY FRIEND REQUEST!
GIVE ME THE LINK!
UPDATE!
GIVE ME A COOKIE!
wow I'm demanding
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:44 pm
Haha.
I already accepted your friend's request.
If I gave you the link, it wouldn't be fair,
would it? wink
I'm gonna update soon.
And you'll get a free cookie later.
Hehe.
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:48 pm
Hurra! Hurra!
Another update is bestowed upon!
You should be happy that
I didn't make you wait until the nextv page.
wink Chapter 2:
"SURPRISE!"
Victoria felt someone jump into her arms and tackle her to the ground.
She opened her eyes to find Frank Iero on top of her!
"Oof," she grunted, trying to push Frank off.
"Wow, Bob! Never knew you had such a good-looking sister! Compared to you at least," Frank squealed, as he jumped off her.
"I think Frank ate too many Skittles this morning. Sorry 'bout that." said Bob as he helped his sister off the ground.
Victoria dusted herself off before letting them all in. They all sat on the couch.
"Hey, I'm Victoria, Bob's sister. Pleasure to meet ya." she said.
"I'm Gerard, this person here is my brother, Mikey. The guy with the afro is Ray, and the guy that jumped on you is Frank." Gerard said, pointing to each person as he mentioned them.
"Pfft. As if I didn't know that already!" Victoria exclaimed.
"Well, once again, you're the prodigy here..." Bob said.
"No! I meant that I knew all of you because you guys are like my favorite and best band in the universe!"
"Really?!" Frank squealed, jumping on her and giving her an almost-bone-crushing hug.
"Ow! God, you're like super strong for a little person!" she muttered.
"Hey! You're like half and inch shorter than me so you can't talk about me that way!"
"Well, I just did!"
They continued to argue until Shawn came down with the luggage.
"Well, I think it's time for us to go!" Mikey sighed, getting up, obviously tired of all the bickering between Frank and Victoria.
They all headed outside to the bus. Ray grabbed Victoria's luggage and hauled it to the bus.
"I'm gonna miss you V-Bear," Shawn said, using Victoria's old nickname. He grabbed her into a long embrace.
"I'm gonna miss you too, but come one, I'll call you and everything!" Victoria exclaimed.
"I hope so! And I think its about time for you to leave and everything..."
"Really? I'll miss you lots!" Victoria pulled away from the hug and took a minute to stare at his grey eyes. They were always enchanting and mysterious to her, the reason they became best friends.
"Yeah. Me too."
"Bye!" Victoria shouted, waving as she ran to the bus.
"Bye!" Shawn yelled, waving back.
As the bus left, Victoria sat back down on the couch, feeling bored.
"Bored already?" Mikey said noticing her bored expression as he walked over and sat next to her. "Then you'll be in for a long tour...."
"Oh well. Doesn't really matter. You'll have to make me help you guys, or else you'll be hearing me saying 'bored' over and over again."
"Don't worry. We'll definitely find something for you to do....I hope."
"Good. What's our next stop anyways?"
"I don't know actually...wherever our driver drives us, we play."
"That's interesting. So you really never know where you are."
"Not really..."
At that moment, Frank proceded to jump on Victoria again, and push her off the couch onto the floor.
"Argh! There really must be something wrong with you!" she muttered as she tried to pry him off her.
"Did you really mean that?" Frank whined, giving Victoria his best puppy face.
Usually she didn't fall for that s**t, but with Frank, she gave in almost immediately. After all, it was hard to not forgive him if you stared into his wide hazel eyes.
"No. I didn't" she sighed
"Yay!" Frank exclaimed, getting off her.
"Where's the rest of the guys?" Victoria asked, sitting back on the couch.
"I honestly don't know." Frank yawned, and that was when Victoria noticed his lip ring. That's hot, she thought to herself.
"If you listen really closely, you can hear Gerard and Ray playing Guitar Hero in the back, and Bob snoring his a** off." Mikey replied.
Victoria giggled at Mikey's remark.
Frank then started to poke her leg continuesly. *poke* *poke poke* *poke poke poke*
"Ow!" Victoria giggled. "That tickles! Stop!"
"What? How can something hurt, but be ticklish at the same time? And I thought you were the smart one here besides Mikes." Frank scoffed.
"Like this!" Then Victoria proceded to tickled Frank at his stomach.
"Ahahahahahahah! Ow! Hahahahah! Ouch!" Frank squealed.
"Like that!"
"You don't play fair!" Frank pouted.
"Who said I would?"
They continued to wrestle and tickle each other for 5 minutes, until Bob interuppted.
"Would both of you shut the ******** up! I'm trying to sleep here!" he half snored, half yelled.
Victoria giggled. This was gonna be one fun tour!
There, I gave you an update.
Now comment away,
my pretties!
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:32 am
SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz !
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:56 pm
vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:00 pm
YAY! YAY!
Here comes another update! Chapter 3: Victoria was currently kicking Frank's a** at Scrabble.
"Fwaffle?! That isn't even a word!" She exclaimed.
"Oh yes it is!" Frank shot back.
"Fine, what is it?" she asked.
"A fried waffle! Everyone knows that!"
"As if! Let me ask Mikey!"
Mikey was reading a book, but before Victoria could turn around and ask him what
a fwaffle was, he said, "A fwaffle is a fried waffle."
Victoria's mouth was wide open as she exclaimed, "But I still don't believe it!"
"You can ask everyone else on the bus, even the driver if you want,"Frank said, his mouth turned up in a cocky grin.
"Whatever. I'm not playing."
"Fine by me."
Victoria walked to the back of the bus where Gerard and Ray were playing Guitar Hero.
Actually, they had been playing for the whole day.
"What time is it," Victoria yawned, pulling a hand through her hair.
"About 9:00. We're gonna have to sleep around ten, because we have a show tomorrow."
Gerard said, his face screwing up because he had just lost to Ray.
"s**t," she said.
"Aren't you tired though?"
True, she was tired, but she really didn't want to sleep. When she agreed to go on tour, she forgot about her little problem. What was she gonna do?
"And you're also going to have to bunk with one of us,"Ray added. "Normally, we'd have you sleep on the couch, but the couch, but the driver's gonna be sleeping there tonight. So you gotta choose who you're bunking with later."
"Great."
They all decided to eat pizza for dinner before stopping at the rest stops for the night.
After cleaning up, Victoria announced, "First to use the bathroom!" before rushing in the lavatory. All five guys groaned, but she finished fairly quickly and rushed outside for the rest of the guys to use it.
Mikey was the last to finish using the lavatory before Bob said, "Looks like you're going to have to bunk with one of us. Choose."
Victoria hated to make choices that either way would embaress her or uncover her secrets. This time, any choice would uncover her problem.
"Don't look at me. I'm your brother. Wouldn't it be wierd to sleep with your brother?" All of the guys laughed at Bob's remark.
"I snore." Ray added, the bunk was small enough.
"I smell." Gerard said, even though it wasn't true at all.
"Um...I...Uh...Guys?" Mikey stuttered, unable to find an excuse. He just really didn't want to sleep next to a pretty girl like Victoria.
Victoria turned to Frank, and he just shrugged. Dammit. She really didn't want to bunk with Frank. It wasn't that she didn't like him, it was just that he was nearly naked shirtless with only boxers on. And he had the faint line of abs.
In all, he was ******** hot good-looking.
She sighed, there was no easy way out of this was there?
Frank climbed to the top bunk.
"Do you want to sleep inside or outside?"
"Either way is fine."
Frank let Victoria climb in first before laying down next to her. She turned around to face the wall and felt his breath against her neck.
For some reason, it was making her feel butterflies in her stomach. "Good night," he whispered.
She swore she felt him kiss her cheek quickly and faintly, but when she looked over her shoulder, he was facing the other way.
She felt nothing, she saw nothing. Blood flowed down her sullen cheeks, over her pale arms and graceful legs. Her mouth open in a silent scream. No one, No one could hear her. She was all alone. Voices. She reached toward them,
and found herself surrounded in trees. Green. Calm. Red. Red? No. There shouldn't be any red. No, not red. Blood. She turned around and found women in intricate victorian dresses.
They were staring at her. Cold, hard stares. They were holding knives. Stained with red. Run, they're coming. Run. No where to run to. She found herself falling. Horrible things. Dying people. Bloody people. Stabbing. Shooting. Beating.
Blood. Blood. Blood. No escape. No where to run. She found herself in front of a mirror. Is that me? In a bloody black cape? No. No! The figure she saw in the mirror was filled with misery, hate, sadness, and longing.
Slam! Shards of glass showering on her. Her fists were bloody red from the glass. The figure reappeared behind her, holding a knife. No! NO! The kinfe came down swifly- There, I gave you an update.
Now comment away!
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:32 pm
Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
I'm just smart. I went through all your stories and compared the chapters to the chapters in the guild.
HA
Now give me my cookie
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:43 am
vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
I'm just smart. I went through all your stories and compared the chapters to the chapters in the guild.
HA
Now give me my cookie stare Fine.
*Gives you half of a giant cookie*
There.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:00 am
Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
I'm just smart. I went through all your stories and compared the chapters to the chapters in the guild.
HA
Now give me my cookie stare Fine.
*Gives you half of a giant cookie*
There.
YAY! *takes cookie and eats it*
Aww...Now I'm starting to crave for a fwaffle
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:18 am
vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
I'm just smart. I went through all your stories and compared the chapters to the chapters in the guild.
HA
Now give me my cookie stare Fine.
*Gives you half of a giant cookie*
There.
YAY! *takes cookie and eats it*
Aww...Now I'm starting to crave for a fwaffleNo fwaffles for you!
I'm great at cooking, but horrible at making fwaffles.
I tried one, and it burned instantly. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:20 am
If you want an update,
you gotta get to the next chapter.
That's the rule.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:12 pm
Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 Goth Shadow vampiremistress1290 SHHHHHH!
If you listen closely you can hear me whining for another update xD
EDIT: I found it on Mibba so I already read up to chapter 6 razz ! What?
How?
Why?
When?
Where?
I purposely changed the titles.....
NUOOOOO.
Oh well, happy reading. =]
I'm just smart. I went through all your stories and compared the chapters to the chapters in the guild.
HA
Now give me my cookie stare Fine.
*Gives you half of a giant cookie*
There.
YAY! *takes cookie and eats it*
Aww...Now I'm starting to crave for a fwaffleNo fwaffles for you!
I'm great at cooking, but horrible at making fwaffles.
I tried one, and it burned instantly. sweatdrop
No cooking for you! *unplugs curling iron*
Ray: Yay!
Oops sorry. *unplugs toaster*
Mikey: Noooo!!!!
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