Tohomito
i think her eyes are off their axis
slopii
On a second look, her outstretched arm is SUPER to long.
yep, these were things i also noticed when i was refining the lines. but one of the things that i try to do when i'm collaborating with someone is to leave a lot of their stuff intact, and this includes things that may be 'wrong' in the sense that it might not be true to form or anatomically correct. i include them in to keep with their style and their artistic idiosyncrasies since those are what i enjoy. if i fiddled with everything then i feel it would no longer be a collaboration but more me and what i would like and/or feel is correct :3 and if i wanted to do that then i'd much rather save that for something that i would exclusively work on.
i know it may sound like i'm coming up with excuses for every flaw and/or 'mistake' but a lot of these were a judgment call on my part when i was working on it. the arm thing, for example, i consciously left because i know that the artist loves long skinny limbs. i felt it was too long and if it was mine i'd probably shorten it but if it's an ideal from someone else's view and perspective i would rather keep it. kinda like when people look in the mirror and notice different areas about themselves that they love or hate; oftentimes it's reflected in their work so i keep them :3 but i still do appreciate and welcome comments :3
