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x-moon-x-daughter-x

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:38 am


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Sunlight streams through the blinds
Bars of gold,
Patch of warmth.

How I long to lay there,
Lazy,
C o n t e n t
In that patch of sunlight.

How I long to pass my life,
Happy,
C o n t e n t
In a patch of sunlight.

How I long to be free,
Flying,
C o n t e n t
In that open sky.



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PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:08 pm


I love the use of repetition and how you made it stand out, also the first stanza is gold. 3nodding

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x-moon-x-daughter-x

PostPosted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:11 am


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Thank you! this was my first poem using the different spacings and things to make them stand out. its nice to know that some one likes it! biggrin



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PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:28 pm


Poetry is such a wonderful thing, it encourages you to break the rules and praises you for it.

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x-moon-x-daughter-x

PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:01 pm


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yes it is!!!! biggrin



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