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[disclaimer] these charicters belong to JK Rowling. I just borrow them from time to timeals this story idea belongs to Homigwtf. Poppet.

Helga sat down at the staff table wondering what this meeting was going to be about, but after a few minutes of wondering her mind went blank. He was so talented, and handsome too. And she loved the way that he held himself as he walked and thats not to men-. Her thought were interupted when Salazar Slytherin walked into the room. look at him. she thought, how could anyone resist that body? and just look at him walk! he looks so dignified! Helga looked over to see Roweena and Godric walk in. "Everyones here? Good...you probably wonder why I called this meeting then" Salazar was cut off by Godric "we know why you bloody well called the meeting! you do this every time! dont you ever hear what your saying? how could you want to get rid of those who 'arent pure'?" Helga looked over to Rowena. they loved it when Godric and Salazar fought."They are ruining the magickal community!" Salazar's face got red "And I will die before I see that the purebloods have gone extinct because we started teaching these mudbloods!"Godric's face went a shade of red to match Salazar's "you cant be predjudice against certain witches/wizards just because they arent 'pure'!" Salazar stood up, pushing his chair away "they shouldnt be aloud to learn magick if they werent born to BE magick!" Helga found herself speeking without meaning to. timidly she said "I agree wth Salazar" the room went quiet.

yes I know...its short...but I had to break it off there *shrugs* sorry....next chapter will be longer

thanks!

=o Are you taking my idea. <3 Good job dear! ;;>.> Just wish you gave me some cerdit.

Homigwtf. Poppet.

I'm thinking of writing on too. You gave me an idea.

And you could use italics for thoughts. It is a helpful thing. I wish my stories had more thinking, I like italics. Hehe... sweatdrop

Like someone said earlier, you could definately use a beta reader. There were quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes in there. Which, at least for me, amkes it really hard to read and enjoy properly. Plus, the way you se things up romance wise is kinda...odd. I'm a fan of the type of romances where it takes the characters awhile to realize their feelings and then act upon them. So far it just seems Helga is attracted to Salazar for being "hot;" not exactly a lot of drama involved.
Also, it seems to me like Helga is acting out of character. I know, I know it's teh founders and they don't have a character other than the little we glean from the Sorting Hat song. The problem is, what Helga's cahracter here gives off is something that is at odds with the song. Do you recall, "Kind Hufflepuff she took the rest." Or something along thos lines. XD Anyway, agreeing with Salazar on the matters of purblods is definately something she wouldn't do; even if his body was irresistable. Going agaisnt your morals in order to get into someone's good graces isn't exactly a Hufflepuff House trait.
Pretty good though; you ended it perfectly.