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 Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:35 am
Sorry I haven't been posting in a while. Been busy with school. Graduating on Sept 25 so I'm working on my new site layout and my demo reel. Targeting motion graphics. Love that media. So this is what I have so far. If you see any anatomy issues please let me know, I've noticed some but I want a few other opinions. An some suggestions would be useful as well. There's a lot of texture issues I'm dealing with when it comes to the layout as a whole. Sooo... please halp, thank you! gonk 
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Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:42 pm
i used to work a lot with webpage design, and i feel the need to pass on this advice - less is more
you shouldn't have the graphics overtake the content of the page - it would probably be in your best interest to simplify the design a bit.
in terms of anatomy, i would resolve some issues regarding the toes. also her left thigh (the one further back) seems to be a lot more thick than the one in the front
the level of detail in the figure is admirable though - i know iw ouldn't have th patience to design such an amazing scythe, so kudos!
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Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:19 am
Her left boobie is a-saggin. Her shoulders aren't slanted that dramatically, her breasts would be at nearly the same level.
Otherwise, freaking aweeesommmmeeee.
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Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:22 am
oh my god that is freakin hot
i think her left leg is way too short, i mean it didnt hit me until i really thought about the anatomy of it but i think it should be longer because it looks a bit stumpy next to the right leg which is posed and far out and yet still ending at the same height
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 10:51 am
Hey I fixed it with some of the suggestions you guys had. Still doin it Mucha style and it's proving to be a pain in the a**. Especially the hair, Jesus let me tell you that hair is a real b***h but worth it!
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:56 pm
mucha style is always worth it
hey just a little suggestion but what do you think about giving her left foot an angle, i think the length change worked out well but the fact that everything is at an angle yet this left foot is straight up facing to the right keeps it a little detached
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Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 12:58 am
The legs also seem odd to me but I think it is because one leg is forward, one is back but the feet are right next to each other?
edit] ok wait, I tried the pose in the mirror, sanding with toes together like that you can't see much of my back leg. If you look at the woman her back leg is not pointing directly towards the floor as if she is standing on it, it is angled to be behind her, like she is leaning forwards, with the angel of the hips and the other foot not on the floor that is a very difficult way to stand!
Hair and scythe are delicious <3
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Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:33 pm
Thanks for the suggestions. I've updated it a bit more so ~ Actually scratch that. Some s**t happened with my review so my graduation has been prolonged to December. ******** bastards. mad
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:18 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:05 pm
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:11 am
I think her right arm could be shortened slightly, it seems a bit longer than her left.
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:38 am
She continues to look positively delicious smile I'm still not fond of that right boob though. It be a-saggin in my eyes. 
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 1:57 pm
Ahhh, awesome point! I like the size for the right boob so I think I'll make the left one larger to make it even with that line position.
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:00 am
Siin Adonai Ahhh, awesome point! I like the size for the right boob so I think I'll make the left one larger to make it even with that line position. lol by all means, do <3
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Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:56 am
Goood god. I'm so exhausted with art from last quarter I haven't been able to create anything good since then. D: So... it's been like a month now. mad But recently I picked up an old project of mine and began working it. Playing with coloring styles in photoshop and I finally found something that I liked. xD <33 It's turning out awesome so far. I'm loving the skin colors, just gotta fix up the lips a bit.... and draw some pants on her. Obviously I'm slowly progressing at a weird rate, working on a few pieces at a time as you can see. I'll post more when I get it so I can get a better critique on it. Right now it's kinda hard to see what's going on since I'm not very far. xD I'd love some costume design suggestions though. *Stares at Felicific* ninja
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