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 Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:48 am
These are just a couple of my poems. I've only had critisicsm from friends and family on these, so please be honest and tell me what you think. Even if you think their the worst things you've ever laid eyes on, say so.
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:52 am
Metal and flesh
Metal and flesh
made for each other
one is the secret that must be covered
one is the bringer, the cold metal lover
not alive but loved like no other
slash and tear, a secret fear
a teardrop made of blood
falls to the ground, a silent sound
then teardrop turns to flood
drowned and pure
there is no cure, the red plague on the wall
the knife has killed, my blood has spilled
into oblivion i fall
I lie here now drowned in tears and blood
suicide's a sin and i always knew i could
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 7:03 am
Your tears are your lies
Your tears are your lies
I lie here in your arms as you pretend to cry
More lethal than cyanide
they fall inside me as i start to die
Hurry me to eternal sleep
Haunt with ghosts to earn my keep
My open wound is starting to weep
as are my eyes as the stars begin to peep
You're tears are my poison
Hot and wet they burn my skin
Ambulance arrives with noise on
Heal my wound not the pain within
I can't take these people
Driving me crazy inside
The birds watch from the steeple
as i finish my suicide
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 7:06 am
Would it be better if i was alone
why can't i see the world around?
why can i only hear the sounds?
the screams and the moans
the incessant bass tones
would it be better if i was alone?
I live in a world
a world on my own
i walk down the street and smell the pheromones
the sweat and the tears born of ridiculous fears
the moans of the people falling on blocked ears
blocked with rebates and debates and loans
would it be better if i was alone?
I'm stuck here in a world of pain
if i could see i would go insane
but if I've learnt one thing
and I'll tell you this
there's nothing like ignorance
because ignorance is bliss
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