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 Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:55 am
Yay! I'm the first one to post a story! ^^
Anyway, my story's about a young woman who survived the explosion on planet Vegeta because her father send her away when she was a kid. But she was caught by scientists and they began to do some freaky experiments on her. Years have passed when she finally could escape.
The rest, you have to read!
Okay, here comes my rules:
-If you have any comments regarding my story, please leave a profile comment or send me a mail. (I don't want to get a mess during my story!)
-Please don't copy my story because I have worked really hard on it!
Now, that wasn't much, now was it?
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:59 am
 Name: Ayu Age: Unknown Family: Unknown Attitude: Silent, dark, mysterious, blood lusty, proud, mean to everyone, easily annoyed Likes: Hunting people down, fighting, concur and destroying planets, darkness, dark colors Dislikes: Friendship speeches, light, bright colors, mornings, girly stuff, preps, men touching her, hearing that planet Vegeta is destroyed, everyone who oppose her Rang: Low Class Saiyan Danger level: Extremely dangerous Hates: Being a shame for the Saiyans Most cherished memory: Everything before planet Vegeta was destroyed
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:08 am
Part1: Planet Earth "What is her status?"
"She’s still unconscious, doctor."
Fools.
"Grr, we can't use her if she still keeps fainting!"
"What must we do, doctor?"
"We have no choice but to dump her."
If you think you can stop me, then try, you pathetic mortals!
"Prepare everything for..."
"DOCTOR! WE HAVE A REACTION!"
"What?!"
It's time to show those inferior beings who I am!
"AHHHHH!!!!!!"
[?????? POV]
"Wow Trunks! You saw that?"
"Yeah! Man, what an explosion. I wonder what happened." Trunks looked from the sky to his bud, Goten. "I dunno. But it seems that a space ship got stuck in the ozone layer." Goten replied. "You actually know the word 'Ozone layer'?" Trunks asked joking. "Haha, very funny Trunks." Goten said a bit embarrassed. "But, it can make sense though." Trunks said.
Suddenly, a blue flash raged over the two youngsters head. "Whoa! What was that?" Goten asked shocked. "Do I look like a psychic to you?" Trunks asked. An explosion made the ground shudder. “Wow! That has to be a big meteorite." Goten said. "Let's find out!" Trunks said and flew towards to giant crater a couple of miles further away.
[Normal POV]
I successfully destroyed the space ship and landed on this strange planet. I looked around. The sun was shining brightly and birds were singing their song. I growled. "This planet is disgusting." I said to myself. I made my hands into fists. Mentally I was okay. But physically…
I walked to a creek and looked at my reflection. All those experiments caused this to happen. I covered an eye with my hand. My beautiful black eyes turned into these disgusting things! I felt my power rising. "And my body was unable to complete his growth." I whispered to myself.
After my home was destroyed, scientists found me and began to experiment on me. They wanted to know how strong Saiyans could be. Well, they know there answer. Because after so many years of torture, I released myself from that curse. And now I can do as I was told: Concur and destroy planets!
I sensed two different energies. I looked behind me and saw two guys. They were staring at me in awe. "What are you two staring at?" I sneered at them. They shocked. "Umm...Nothing." A black haired said. The other didn't replied. He had a red color spread over his face. "But...Do you realize that..." I glared at them. "Realize what?" I asked. "That you're naked?" I narrowed my eyes. "Yeah. So?" I asked. "Don't you need clothes to cover your body?" The black haired asked. I scanned the two carefully. The black one had a dumb look on his face, his friend, who saw as red as a tomato, had icy blue eyes. I stood up. "Listen up kids, if you want to live, I assume you'd better run." I said. "Kids? But you look even younger than we are!" The black haired said. I growled. "Leave me alone!" I jelled. "Hey! We only try to help."
"I don't need any help." I sneered at him. "Y...Y...You...Are...Injured." The other said and pointed with a shaky finger at my right leg. I growled as I saw the wound. "Let us help you." The first one walked up to me but I ascended in the air. "I said: Leave me alone!" I jelled. "But you need surgery!" I made a energy ball in my hand. "Die then!" My attack made contact with the ground and destroyed everything around it, including the space ship. The two youngsters were gone. I smirked. "Yes! I still got it!"
That was part 1. Don't know when the second parts comes :p
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:16 am
Part2: No need for help I walked in a city. The people there were looking at we with wide eyes. Especially the men. That began to annoy me because I hate it when men stare at me. I had to go trough that a bit too much. "Hey, little girl. What happened to you?" A man asked. I glared. He shocked back. A woman ran towards me. "You pervert. Don't you stare at that girl like that!" She hissed. The man backed off. "Here. Pull these clothes on. After that, you come with me to my house and explain everything what happened." She said. I just sighed and pulled the clothes on she gave me.
"Okay. My house isn't far. Come on now." I sighed again. "Listen you inferior being. I'm not taking orders from anyone." I sneered. Everyone looked at me. I began to charge my powers. When I released them, everybody vanished. Those humans, animals and their beloved city. Everything laid in crumbles. I smirked. "That happens when you mess with a Saiyan." I said and laughed.
I ascended and flew off.
In the next three hours that followed, I destroyed a couple of cities for food and of course for the fun.
I stopped flying when I saw a wood. Seeing that began to trigger my memories. I remember how I used to play with my father when he wasn't on a mission.
I descended, and walked on my ease in the forest. With each step I began to realize that I missed my people. I noticed a cave and went inside. A bear was there and began to growl. I simply shook my head and in a flash, my dinner was ready.
The next day, I heard voices. "Man, I wonder what happened to those cities." A voice said. "Yeah, me too."
"Do you think it has to do something with that girl?" My eyes widened. I recognized those voices. They're still alive?! But how? I asked myself. I peeked outside and my thoughts were correct. Damn! What are they?
"But, isn't it strange? She arrives here and bang! a dozen of cities and towns are destroyed." The black haired said. "Hm, I don't think so. She's injured."
"Trunks, you were there when she tried to kill us, right? I tell you, there's something wrong with that girl!" The youngster named Trunks stopped walking, and looked at the ground. "But Goten, she was angry about something." He said. "Girls are always angry about something. Because there aren't enough sales, they have a bad hair day, someone ruined their favorite dress and so on."
"She's not that kind of girl!" Trunks said angry. Goten looked at him wondered. "What do you mean?" He asked. "The girls you summed up are the type that would freak out if you saw them naked. But she, it was like she didn't even care. And her eyes...That color isn't natural!" Goten shrugged. "Maybe. But I'm not going to look for her! My head still hurts of that last attack she gave us!"
"Too bad you didn't became wiser of it."
"Haha..." The two walked away. I left the cave. "Reminder to myself. I have to kill those two. Especially the purple head. I don't need any sympathy. Of no one!"
I looked at my reflection. I just had my breakfast and my morning exercise. A couple of years ago, my eyes were like black orbs. They shone every time if I looked into my father's. He used to call them 'Black Diamonds', because mine were blacker than every other Saiyan. But now, due some freaking experiment, their color changed. The red color, is actually my own blood traveling through my eyes. "I wish I had died as well when Frieza destroyed our planet." I said to myself. "Well, better get to work again." I ascended in the air, looking for another town or city I could destroy.More revealing secrets next time! ^^
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:18 am
Part 3: Two other Saiyans Another town destroyed. "Heh. I'm doing good today." I said to myself and brushed some blood of my hand. "Those Humans are so weak that it's almost funny." I chuckled. "Ah well. Let's move on." I was about to walk away when I suddenly heard something approaching. I looked back, and saw a blue energy beam heading towards me. But I was too late to dodge it, and it hit me through some rocks. Eventually, I hit a tree branch, and it fell on me. "Oww..."
"Oh dear god! I'm so sorry! I thought you were the one who destroyed this city. I didn't see you were a girl." A voice said. Like a girl can't fight. I thought annoyed. I let the one who attacked me help me with removing the tree branch. "Are you okay?" He asked. My eyes shot open and I was about to slam my fist into his face, but then I recognized that face. That black spiky hair, those black eyes, that worried look! It's...No, the scar is missing. My fist stopped an inch from his face. "Hey. Are you okay?" He grabbed my hand and removed it from his face. He looked at me. "Wow! I never saw that kind of color before! It's like I can see through your head!" He said kinda cheery. "K...K...Kakarot!"
[Trunks' POV]
The Z-gang flew towards the place where Goku was heading. "This is so strange. I can't sense any power levels." Gohan said. "I have a bad feeling about this." Krillin said with a worried look. "If it is that girl. She's gonna pay! Woman or not!" Goten said. "It's not sure if it is her." Trunks said. "What's wrong with you lately? Are you in love?" Goten asked. "No!" Trunks replied with a light blush on his cheeks and flew away from his bud.
"Look at all those cities that lays in shambles." Tien said. "Yeah. This is horrible, dude. The one who did this must be very strong." Yamcha said. "It's best if don't drop our guard. It can be that Goku is in danger." Piccolo said. "Ha! That's typical something that Kakarot would do!"
"Vegeta! Keep that big mouth of yours! I know Goku is okay." Yamcha said. "You wanna start a fight with me? Put it up then!"
"Dad! This isn't the time to start a fight with the others. We have to hurry before any more casualties fall!" Trunks said and pulled his father away from Yamcha. Vegeta grumbled, while Yamcha whipped some sweat drops away.
"Look! There he is!" Krillin said, pointing at Goku. "Dad! You're okay!" Gohan and Goten said. We landed.
[Normal POV]
Some other people landed behind Kakarot. "Yeah. That's my name, but I prefer Goku." I shocked. What's going on here?! I asked myself. "Kakarot?" He looked a bit waggish at me. I looked down. "Is this...he earth?" I asked. "Yeah." He replied. Something snapped in my head. "You, WEAKLING!!!" All of a sudden, my fist hit Kakarot right in his face and he was smashed through some trees, a whole end away. I dashed after him but somebody grabbed my two arms. "Let me go!" I jelled furious. "I knew it! It was her after all!"
"Let me go!!!" I jelled again and struggled to get loose. But the grip was too strong. "Dad! Are you alright?"
"Don't worry Gohan. I'm fine. But this girl has to tell me why she'd killed all those innocent people." Kakarot said. "You are responsible for this!" I sneered. "Not anymore. I decided to protect this planet."
"WEAKLING!!!" My anger was uncontrollable, and my power was rising with the second. But I was still unable to get loose. "No. You are the one who’s weak. Destroying and killing helpless people. There is more in life than destruction."
"Like you can change her mind." The one who held me let me go, and right after that, I felt his fist in my cheek. I fell with my back on the ground. "Now listen, Ayu, why are you here?" I looked at the one who hit me on the ground. I shocked. Prince Vegeta! I thought. "Dad. You know her?"
"You can say that...Ayu and I share a past together."That's it for today
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 10:17 am
Part4: Memories "Share a past together? Father, what do you mean?" Trunks asked. "I'll explain that later." Vegeta picked me up from the ground. "But planet Vegeta is destroyed by Frieza ages ago." Goten said. "I said that I'll explain it later." Vegeta said annoyed. "But first, we're going back home, so Ayu can tell us at all ease what happened to her." He ascended with me in the air. The rest followed.
We landed at some sort of house. There, Vegeta set me on the couch, and I was surrounded by the rest of the people that were there. It made me feel uneasy. "From the beginning Ayu. What happened after our planted was destroyed?” Vegeta asked. I sighed. "Father wanted me to go to the earth to find Kakarot and teach him everything about our race. But, I was halfway there when some weird scientists found me and captured me to see how far a Saiyan could go mentally." I replied. "And let me guess. Due all those experiments, your eyes color changed, your tail has fallen off and you stopped growing?" Vegeta asked. I nodded. "Well, it seems like you're Saiyan off to me." He said. I jumped up, growling. "My father told me that, as long as I have the Saiyan Soul and pride, I always will be a true Saiyan! Regardless how I look like!" I sneered. Vegeta sighed. "First: Your father is just a low class Saiyan and second: Do you believe that yourself?" He asked. "Yes!" I said determined. Vegeta laughed. "Ayu, you haven't changed a bit. You still are that helpless little Saiyan that you were back in the old days. Clinging at your father's ideals, agreeing with everything he said. Heh, Kakarot was right about one thing: You are weak." I clinched my fists together. "That's not true." I felt my anger welling up, but at the same time, it was under pressed by upwelling tears. "If it isn't, why didn't you escape from those scientists and destroyed them?" Vegeta asked. "Because...Because..."
"Because you are weak?"
"Vegeta that's enough! Can't you see she's about to cry?" Kakarot said. I opened my eyes and the first tears fell on the floor. I heard gasps from everyone. Even Vegeta. Yes, this was also something that happened cause of those experiments. If I cry, I cry blood. "Good job, Dad. Now you made her upset." Trunks said. He grabbed my shoulders. "Are you okay?" He asked. I pushed myself away from him and looked with my blooded eyes at Vegeta. "You didn't saw how our planet spat out each other. Nothing and nobody was left. You didn't saw how your father was killed by Frieza's men. But I saw it all. I saw how he destroyed our planet, our people. I saw how he killed my father. I SAW IT ALL!!!!" I jelled and ran away.
[Trunks' POV]
Ayu ran away, leaving some blood tears. Trunks felt sympathy for her. "That's rough man. I mean, seeing the death of your family and friends. That's something I don't want to go through." Goten said. "Me either." Gohan agreed. "But Vegeta, it seems you have a close bond with her." Goku said. "What? That's ridiculous! She's a low class warrior. I just know her because she's three days older than me."
"THREE DAYS OLDER?!?!?!" Trunks jelled out of nowhere. Everybody looked surprised at him. "What did you expect? That she was sixteen? How ridiculous!" Vegeta said. "But she sure looks like an average teenage girl." Piccolo said. "Looks can be deceiving. From the outside she looks like a teenager of Goten's age. But from the inside she's a grownup woman." Gohan said. "No. From the inside she still a kid. That's because she lives with her head in the past." Vegeta said. Everybody was silent. "She misses her family and friends. We should make her feel home." Trunks said. "Wow, wow, wow! And where is she staying?" Goten asked. "With you of course." Vegeta said. "What?!?! Why?!" Goten asked shocked. "Because Ayu is the older sister of Kakarot. He's the only family she has left." Vegeta replied. "Oh man..."
"Cheer up Goten. You must be happy. Now we can know things about grandpa." Gohan said. "Huh? But, you know your grandfather." Goku said. "I mean your father, Dad." Gohan said. "Oh yeah! My father..." Goku sank away in his thoughts. "Dad. It's important that Ayu feels herself welcome in our family. You had that too with great-grandfather, right?" Gohan asked. "Aren't you forgetting something, Gohan? She destroyed millions of people." Piccolo said. "Yeah, that's right! We can't trust her!" Krillin agreed. "She's a Saiyan." Gohan said and glared at Vegeta. "And that's a reason why you should forgive her?" Tien asked. "That's maybe not a reason. But of what I understood is that she misses her friends and family. And she's doing what she's told to do." Trunks turned to his friends. "How would you feel if you're used as an experiment for so long? I would be angry too, and want to kick some a**. And the people of earth paid the highest price for it." He said. "Trunks has right in a way. I don't want to be used as an experiment either." Yamcha said. "Yeah. Maybe you're right." Tien said. "We can wish the people back with the Dragonballs. But, what is our second wish then?" Krillin asked. "I've got an idea! Why should we try to make herself home here as we can wish her home back!" Yamcha said. "You're saying you want to wish planet Vegeta back?" Goku asked, shocked up from his thoughts. "Yeah! So she can go back and continue her life, with her friends and family, and then we don't have to look out for her." Yamcha said. "You fool! Have you looked at her closely? She would be the perfect subject of a failure." Vegeta snarled. "We can, wish her father back." Gohan said. "Her father?" Goten asked wondered. "It seems like she had a close bond with him." Gohan said and looked at Vegeta to confirm his thought. "Ayu was always a father child." He only said. "But, wouldn't he reject her? And what if he sees Goku?" Krillin asked. "Knowing him, he wouldn't reject his only pride, so he would concentrate himself on his daughter and not his son." Vegeta said. "It's worth a shot." Piccolo said. "Do you agree to it, Goku?" Tien asked. "If that's the only way to protect the earth."
"Wait a sec!" Goten suddenly blurted. "What if those two decides to destroy this planet as well?" He asked. "Good point." Krillin said. "Bardock isn't so stupid to do that. And besides, as long as I am here, they have to obey me, because I'm still the prince of the Saiyans." Vegeta said. "Okay then. We're counting on you, then." Goku said. "Let's collect those Dragonballs!"
"Yeah!"Is it me, or are my chapters short?
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 9:46 am
Part5: Doubts I sat on a tree branch, collecting my thoughts, when I saw Trunks. "I know you're here, Ayu, so why don't you show yourself?" He asked. "Leave me alone." I said. Trunks looked up. "Ayu, I just want to talk to you. I have to tell you something important." He said. "What's so important that you have to disturb me?" I asked annoyed. "I'll start from the beginning." He ascended and sat beside me on the branch. "Here on earth we have seven mystical ball called the Dragonballs. If you collect all seven of them, you can call upon the eternal dragon Shenron and he will grant you two wishes. We're gonna collect the Dragonballs to revive the people you killed." He said. "There goes all of my effort." I muttered. "You wanna know the second wish?" He asked. "What? Are you gonna wish me dead?" I asked. Trunks laughed. "No. We're gonna wish your father back."
"WHAT?!?!?!" I looked shocked at him. Trunks was stunned of my sudden outburst. "Is something wong?" He asked. "Yeah! I don't want it!" I said. "What?! Why not?" He asked surprised. "Do you need glasses or something? Look at me! I'm disgusting!" I jelled and hid my face. "That's not true, really! I don't think you're disgusting, and I'm sure your father will think the same." He said. "Don't try to comfort me, brat! What do you know about my father anyway?" I asked pissed. "Well, Dad said that yours wouldn't neglect you. He said that you are his pride." I growled. "I WAS his pride. Now that I turned into this, my father will hate me as much as I hate myself!" I sneered. Trunks placed a hand on my shoulder, but I hit it off me. "Listen Ayu, we only want to help you to feel yourself home here." He said. "I don't need any help!" I said. "Okay...I'll tell the others that we have to cancel the wish." Trunks said with his head down and took off. "Vegeta may call this planet as his new home, but I'll never accept this." I said to myself.
I sat high in a tree, munching on some apples. But, with every bite, I felt me bad. I threw the half-eaten apple on the ground. "What in the name of Vegeta is wrong with me?" I asked myself. I jumped out, and walked to a river nearby. I looked at my reflection. I saw nothing, except my own hideous face. "I must be getting sick. Great!" I muttered. Then, all of a sudden, Trunks' image appeared in the water. I looked shocked behind me. But, he wasn't there. I looked back in the water. He was gone. "What in the world is going on? I aren't feeling any sympathy for him, am I?" I shook the idea befriending with Trunks off of me. "Why in the world do I have this horrible idea? Why does he care about me anyway?" I asked myself. "God! My head is so messed up right now!"
[Trunks' POV]
Trunks arrived at Kami's lookout where the wish would take place. "Hey Trunks! Good timing, we're about to summon up the dragon!" Goten said cheery. Trunks looked with doubt at his friends. "What's wrong?" Vegeta asked. "I don't think it's such a good idea to wish Ayu's father back." Trunks replied. "Why not?" Goku asked. "Let me guess. You've spoken to her, isn't it?" Vegeta asked annoyed. "Um, yes."
"But what about the people who died?" Gohan asked. "We still can wish them back." Goku said. "But what about our second wish?" Piccolo asked. "I think I've got an idea." Trunks said. "Okay then. Lets do this. Shenron, I call upon thee!" Dende said. The sky turned pitch black and soon, Shenron appeared. "You who have summoned me, I'll shall grant you two wishes." The dragon said. "Shenron! Please revive the people back that the Saiyan Ayu has killed." Goku said. The eyes of the dragon glowed red. "Your wish has been granted. What's your second wish?" Everybody looked at Trunks. He took a deep breath. I hope I do the right thing. He thought. "I wish…"Cliffhanger! Later!!!!
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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 10:13 am
Part6: Chances I shocked awake of a sudden pain in my eyes. "Gah! What in the world is happening?" My eyes felt like they stood on fire and my tail bone was itching like crazy. I stumbled out of my cave, to the river to see what was going on with me. But because of the pain, I couldn't remove my hands from my face.
When the pain finally subdued, I looked at my reflection, fearing that I might turned even more hideous. I shocked of what I saw. My eye color turned back to normal. "How did this happened?" I asked myself. I felt something swirling behind me. I looked back. "My tail?!" I jelled out surprised. I grabbed it, to feel if it was real. And it was. Then I looked back in the river. My eyes were really black. I smiled wide. "My size might not be right, but I've got my tail and eye color back!" I cheered. "But how in the world is this possible?" I asked myself.
"Hey Ayu." A familiar voice said. I looked behind me. "Trunks? What are you doing here?" I asked. "I just wanted to know what you thought of my new wish." He said. "Wish?" I repeated confused. "Yeah. Instead of wishing your father back, I wished for you being your old self again. How you're suppose to look like." He said. My eyes widened. "You've done that? Why?" I asked, narrowing my eyes. "I know how pride you Saiyans are and I saw how sad you were with how you looked like. That's why I made the wish, so you would be happy with yourself again." He replied. I released an annoyed sigh. "What part in 'I don't need your help', don't you understand?" I asked. "What in the world is wrong with you? Like you become your old self again by just killing people!" Trunks jelled angry. "Killing people is my job." I said, trying to remain calm. "For your information, Planet Vegeta is destroyed ages ago!" Trunks said. I growled. "Yeah, of course. Why don't you make the wound bigger by saying that you at least still have a family, while I have no one, except an idiotic brother!" I jelled angry. Trunks looked at me, dumbfounded. "Listen up kid, go home, go to your parents, date your girlfriend, do whatever you want but don't bother me anymore!" I said angry. I turned my back at him and started to walk away from him. "I'm sorry." I stopped. "You what?" I asked, not bothering to turn around. "I'm sorry. That's what I said."
"Why would you?"
"Because I felt bad that I made you sad by saying that your home is destroyed. I just want that you give earth a chance." Trunks said. "Did Vegeta?"
"Yes. He did." I growled lightly. "Fine. I'll give earth a chance. But if you make the slightest mistake, you can kiss this planet goodbye! Understood?" Trunks nodded and then smiled. "Do you want to stay with me for a while. Till you found your own place?" He asked. I raised an eyebrow. "For a guy with Saiyan blood and for being Vegeta's son, you're weird." I said. "That sounded more like a compliment." Trunks said, shuffling with his feet. I noticed the pink shade on his cheeks. "You call it a compliment, I call it an insult. Whatever. But I guess a bed won't hurt." I said. Trunks laughed. "Even a Saiyan needs a bed. Guess you're not that bad as you look." He said. "Don't think I'm sentimental because I'm not." I said agitated. "Okay. Let's play the game according to your rules. Do you want to follow me to your new home, milady?" Trunks asked, bowing before me. I smirked. "A prince that bows for me and calls me milady. I can get used to that." I said. "Don't think I'm your servant." Trunks said, crossing his arms. "Dang! You're evil." I said smirking. Trunks laughed and ascended. I followed. Come on Ayu, don't fall for this guy.
That's it for now
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