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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 8:18 pm
Well,I couldn't name this poem but here it is,it is a two line poem btw.
Pretending that we see does not give us sight.
Pretending that we live does not make us alive.
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:25 am
i like it but i wouldnt call it a poem...none the less it is nice
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:43 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:20 pm
Very good, I have not read that many two line poems that are even close to being as good as this.
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Black-Cat-Revenants Captain
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Rozen Black Chronicles Crew
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:53 pm
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