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 Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 5:40 pm
Name : Raina Claudry
Gender : Female
Age : 16
Year : 6th year
House : Slytherin
Ethnicity : British
Hair Color : Lower black legnth curly black har.
Eye Color : Green
Wand : 14 inch Willow wood., Erumpent Core
Home Life :
Raina's mother left her when she was eleven, the thought of her daughter being anything more than a normal human made her grow insane. Mrs.Claudry left Raina before she got home from school after her first year. Raina didn't get to say good bye and never herd from her again.
Raina lives with her father Owen in England a few miles east of Liverpool. Her father is about forty years old with black hair and green eyes. Mr.Claudry works as a politician in the wizarding world.
Raina goes between living in America for the summer, and england for the rest of the year. They have a small house in Maryland, and she enjoys spending almost every waking minute with the american highschool football team, practicing with them.
Her summer ends when Raina and her father flys back to England at the end of August.
Diving Deeper: Raina is cold and a bit of a prankster, though striking the fear into others with a single glance. Long legs, and a professional stance, she is usually very talkative, never being able to hold her sharp tongue or her even sharper mind. At home she usually enjoys running, singing, and playing music. Since she isn't old enough to do magic outside she enjoys doing simple muggle things, such as reading and running around the track.
Raina is about five foot ten inches tall, her long legs are toned perfectly thanks to her long runs on the track regularly. In Raina's opinion, her hands are the best feature, long pale fingers, freshly manicured nails. Raina's nails are usually french manicured with silver tips, and the very end an emerald green.
Raina enjoys watching horror and suspense movies, spending her Fridays at the nearest movie theater, watching movies alone with her fathers credit card.
Taking a Closer Look:
Running down the track, Raina stopped, wiping her sweating face with her arm. Taking a deep breath she stopped, her pale skin glistening in the sun.
Walking over towards the stands, she grabbed her water bottle, drinking the rest of the bottle in one gulp.
Looking up, she saw her father pulling up in his mustang, his suit jacket over the seat behind him, the orange tie untied over his shoulder.
“Hey kiddo, you ready to get going?” His loud voice could be herd from a long way away. Raina jogged over to the car, opening the passenger door and taking a seat.
“I see that your home from work early.” Trying to make small talk, she pulled the seat belt over her body, clicking it into place.
Owen disregarded her statement, going right on with what was on his mind.
“It is the day before school starts and your still running four miles a day? What are you going to do at school?' Raina sighed, feeling the engine buzz beneath her feet as her father started driving home.
“That is why I ran six miles today, I kicked it up a step and did two extra laps.” Her breathing was still heavy as she put the frozen bottle that her father always brought her against her forehead.
“I'll just do stairs all school year.”
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:34 pm
You have been Accepted
to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Good, though a bit short, profile. I can only see one small problem and
that is the contradicting sentences. "Long legs, and a professional stance.."
vs. "..her small legs are toned.." Other than that, you are good to go.
But do watch her personality. Don't make her so cold that she seems dull.
There are many ways you can go with Raina, as she has many interests,
so I hope to see lots of creativity! C:
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