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 Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:30 pm
Mind you I'm writing these now, on a whimsicle and off the top of my head.
Title Pending
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Walk the Line
and straddle the fence
stay undecided
your action's self defense
Teeter and wattle
dazed and confused
Ignorance overrules
and stupidity amused
What is this meaning
what is going on
What's this responsibility
unto me thrust upon
in world like this
deceit and illusion
make this place better
the land of Confusion.
Competition [Found the name As I finished typing]
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Running and running
Faster and faster
Muscles weak
and lungs empty
Eye lids heavy
and clothes soaked
with the end in sight
all goes black
feet still moving
and legs still pumping
adrenaline released
and instincts at the reins
the body past it's limits
sweat on the brow
burning the eyes
shoes suddenly gaining ten tons
nearing the end
Waking up in a hospital bed
family and friends around
one thing in mind
and with a grin
you ask one thing
"Did I win?"
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Aeon
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:43 pm
Awesome! I love how you can do that just off the bat. When I wrote one off the bat it didn't sound half as good as yours. blaugh
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