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 Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 3:28 pm
Name : Lenore Manson
Gender : Female
Age : seventeen
Year : seventh
House : slytherin
Ethnicity : French/transylvanian
Hair/Eye Color : long straight black hair with magenta underneath and on sideburns. Bright electric green eyes.
Pet : a pure white clean domestic opossum that smells like vanilla with abandonment issues. named Bob.(known pet since its birth)
Home Life : Lenore's family defines the term dysfunctional.With a former prostitute as a mother(esmeralda), a step-father who is easily controlled(Rossco), a sister who gets what she wants with no consequence(Jane) and a brother who is not only over-protective but has attempted suicide and self-inflicted pain more than once(Steve) lenore developed a
very unaffectionate personality towards people( with a short temper to back it up).
she met her pet opposeum bob within a shanty in romania at age 5 as her and her family were escaping poverty and a destructive mormon man claiming to be lenores father by moving to a two-story house in the outskirts of Marquise, France.
Often described as distant from the rest of her family, she feels crowded when they try too appeal to her as a way of "breaking through her mental walls and defenses".
Diving deeper :lenore is a night-person highly disliking the sun and easily makes friends, short tempered, gifted in the dark arts, loves music, likes wide variety of music.often caught listening to anything from Killswitch Engaged to Fergie while strumming her Strat to the melody.Recent obbsessions include Vampiric novels and The band "porcelain and the tramps". choice of clothing includes heavy make-up and dark clothing.
Taking a closer look :
"Lenore come Down!
LENORE WE NEED TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU!."Esmeralda Screams, uselessly attempting to voice over the music.
lenore turns music and Amp louder as her fingers fly along the neck keeping up with the riff perfectly.
as the sound of footsteps on the stairways ascending towards locked room while frustration floods the air.
again she yells as the door shakes from the futile attempt to open it and the
distortion penetrating the room,"LENORE!"
Esmeralda watches speechlessly as the door falls to the ground revealing what lies within.
only for esmeralda to face a black wand in her face.
speechlessness overcomes esmeraldas words as lenore stands in front of her holding her wand steadily without a single hint of hesitation.
"sorry about your door....lenore...darling your father and i need to speak with...with you"
"...."angry silence painted on her face lenore does not respond.
"i'lll get rossco to fix your door so this doesnt happen again.now. lower your wand and come down stairs."
"alright...but the next time you break it down things are going to start happening to you while you slumber..darling" lenore adds coldly as she lowers her wand.
"just because you have your wand out and pointed doesnt mean that you have the balls to use it because that alone would decline your admittance to that stupid world" adds jane in a whiney voice as lenore descends down the stairs
"shut up jane.you now very well my history & dont curse the people around you because you decided to ignore your powers completely and live a normal life like the common muggle"
steve steps into the conversation"okay you two. now lenore you know very well that jane doesnt have the mental capacity to handle you're temper"
"whatever you say Steven"lenore comments as she makes her way back to the priority of her guitar.
"well that was pointless."
"jane.shut-up" says steve with a frustraded haze-filled stare at the empty stairway
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:02 pm
You have been Accepted
to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
It's good that you detailed her home and family, because it describes
her quite alot. The only thing I'm a bit concerned about is your roleplaying.
It needs some touching up here and there...isn't good, but isn't horrid.
Hopefully, as you start roleplaying, you'll be able to develop your style
and skill more. I look forward to seeing your character in action. Have fun!
Also, watch the literacy. C:
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