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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 4:40 am


I LOVE POETRY MORE THEN ANYTHING ON EARTH LOL SOME ARE TO PERSONAL TO SEE BUT OTHERS I WANT TO SHARE TO THE WORLD MAYBE... THIS IS MY CHANCE



LOVE IT ALL AND LOVE IT LONG
YOU DO BELONG YOU CAN BE STRONG

DISTANCE FROM THIS WORLD TO A PLACE OF DREAMS AND BEAUTY
WALK WITH HOPE AND PRIDE AND TAKE IN THE SMELL OF LIFE
MAKE OF WHAT YOU CAN AND LIVE LONG AND TRUELY
GRAB YOUR HEART AND SOUL AND HOLD IT TIGHT
DISTANCE TO A WORLD WHERE THE COLOR'S BRIGHT AND GLEAMING
AMAZEING THINGS AWAIT FOR PEOPLE WHO BELIVE
NEVER GIVE UP NEVER WASTE YOUR LIVE ON GRIEVING
KNOW AND KEEP IN MIND THAT EVERYTHING'S ALRIGHT

LOVE YOUR INNER BEAUTY
AND
LOVE YOUR OUTER BEAUTY

DISTANCE TO A WORLD WHERE THE TRUTH FLIES THROGUTH THE SKY
NOTHING BAD COULD HAPPEN WHEN YOU LIFT YOUR WINGS AND FLY
AND KNOW THE SUN DO SHINE TO SHOW THE WORLDS TRUE BEAUTY
AND BEAUTY SHIMMER DAY AND NIGHT TO SHOW LOVES YOUR TRUELY
WHEN YOUR FEELING LONELY LOOK TO THE STARS THEY GLISTEN
TO SHOW YOU NIGHTS AS THEY SHINE BRIGHT THEIR ALWAYS THERE TO LISTEN
AND WHEN ITS DARK REMEBER THAT THE SUN WILL SHINE TO YOU
IT'LL SHOW YOUR WAY AND ALL THAT LAYS REFELCTING OFF THE MOON
PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:04 pm


Positively lovely! Please post more.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:27 am


I wish I had some of my poems. I wrote a lovely one about a darling dear of mine named Megan. (She's the cutie in green with the waist cincher.) But I can not for the life of me find it.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:04 pm


Hm... I have this poem I wrote.
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Sleeping

Inside of you

I lay in wait for your mistake

You lie

Dead besides

Me I cry

Why don't you cry?

You want me

Just to die

I'll humor you

But I'm still inside.

You're the pretty one

The sister they love

You're the gift from above

Soft-spirited; a little dove.

Filled with hate as a doll

Of wrath

Dormant I crawl

I'm coming for you

The beaten one

In every sun

The core of iron

I'm the special one.

When I come

When I come

I'll come closer

So that I can

Steal you away

from me

I'll pick you up and keep you

Free

You'll be like a bird

In my love

And I'll keep you safe

Inside of me

Where the grubby hands

Can't reach you

And you're warm and safe

Where I can feel you breathe.

You want to die

But you can't

Cry

I wait for you inside.

You want to prove

Once and for all

You're alive

It's your downfall

Protected I'm

Sleeping here

Where you let me

I'm inside of you

Your peaceful sleep can't

Be rent apart.

Stuck here I don't

Feel your heart.

Holding tight

A flower and a seed,

Let go of your blossom,

Sister.

A child with a little China doll

You hold on

With no real pull

And I'm the force

That opposes you

I'll change your course

You can have your due.

When I come

When I come

I'll come closer

So that I can

Steal you away from me

I'll pick you up and keep you

Free You'll be like a bird In my love

And I'll keep you safe

Inside of me

Where the grubby hands

Can't reach you

And you're warm and safe

Where I can feel you breathe.

Eating and drinking

Gods gorge as men

With a butterfly In her cage

Fluttering within

A Mother with

Her child And a wolf

With its prey

I'll take you Inside myself

And keep you Here with this heart.

Poor fragile paper

Cannot hold your soul

Let go of your life

And turn back to coal

A present from A pixie

You give it all away

Wait'll I come

Keep me here

With your thoughts

Tucked into a corner

Warm without

A care

I care

You care

We care

I'll be safe here

So I can save your life.

When I come

When I come

I'll come closer

So that I can

Steal you away from me

I'll pick you up and keep you

Free You'll be like a bird In my love

And I'll keep you safe Inside of me

Where the grubby hands

Can't reach you

And you're warm and safe

Where I can feel you breathe.

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Not that great, hm?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:33 pm


Insignificant Observer

Not that great, hm?


I really liked it, it was very intriguing, but it might be easier to read if the lines weren't double spaced. I mean like:

"Sleeping
Inside of you"

instead of

"Sleeping

Inside of you"

The double spacing was just a little hard on my eyes.

Otherwise, I think it's good. I would like to read more if you ever feel like posting another.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:31 pm


He once held my heart between his fingers
He once held me tight in his arms.
Then his eyes began to wander.
And my soul began to shatter.
Now my mind is less then it once was.

Marlynna


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:14 am


Marlynna
He once held my heart between his fingers
He once held me tight in his arms.
Then his eyes began to wander.
And my soul began to shatter.
Now my mind is less then it once was.

Aw, I felt like that before.

Thank you, LaLaLogic!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:36 pm


You can have me when I'm dead. When everything that I wanted and never got is gone. After I pulled the trigger just to blow you off. Until I'm lost in a maze that only promises begging, pleading and a lifetime supply of dead ends. I've just been thrown into a mindset that knows my words can't be mass produced or get me any farther in that bizarre little fantasy of mine. You're the only words being swallowed up by the very industry that gave you your tongue.

Cockey VonMurdertits


Marlynna

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:09 pm


Cockey VonMurdertits
You can have me when I'm dead. When everything that I wanted and never got is gone. After I pulled the trigger just to blow you off. Until I'm lost in a maze that only promises begging, pleading and a lifetime supply of dead ends. I've just been thrown into a mindset that knows my words can't be mass produced or get me any farther in that bizarre little fantasy of mine. You're the only words being swallowed up by the very industry that gave you your tongue.


Reminds me of Emilie Autumns songs actually.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:16 pm


He sits patiently explaining how I am, and what I do, and what my life should be.
He expects to be idolized, and fantasied, while my eyes gaze adoringly at his continence.
Little does he know I'm gagging at his patronizing, and longing for the clock to turn, so I can shortly call on my friends.
Politeness is such a bore.
But-
harming the fragile ego of a man, is a crime hard for me to commit.
And so, I suffer his prattle, his droning on, occasionally voicing my disagreement.
Praying he takes the hint that we are incompatible.
Ah, he was foolish enough to bring up politics.
My opinions should scare him away.
Saved at last.

Marlynna


Cockey VonMurdertits

PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:01 am


Marlynna
He sits patiently explaining how I am, and what I do, and what my life should be.
He expects to be idolized, and fantasied, while my eyes gaze adoringly at his continence.
Little does he know I'm gagging at his patronizing, and longing for the clock to turn, so I can shortly call on my friends.
Politeness is such a bore.
But-
harming the fragile ego of a man, is a crime hard for me to commit.
And so, I suffer his prattle, his droning on, occasionally voicing my disagreement.
Praying he takes the hint that we are incompatible.
Ah, he was foolish enough to bring up politics.
My opinions should scare him away.
Saved at last.



:] It awakens the inner sociopath in me
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:39 am


Signals
Fear not, Children of the Garden,
if what falls from the skies tonight
calls out to you.
For you are the Chosen
and she is the saint
of the Lost and the Leper and the Star.

This was actually a description I wrote for the avi arena, but I thought it sounded cool so I kept it. mrgreen

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Marlynna

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:28 pm


Kitschy
Signals
Fear not, Children of the Garden,
if what falls from the skies tonight
calls out to you.
For you are the Chosen
and she is the saint
of the Lost and the Leper and the Star.

This was actually a description I wrote for the avi arena, but I thought it sounded cool so I kept it. mrgreen

Interesting indeed.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 3:14 pm


He creates storming thoughts,
Questions rising and falling.
I feel like a leaf torn apart by the wind.
Crying, no more, no longing, nothing.
Lying to myself only works for so long.

Marlynna

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