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Jan-san

PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:31 am


This is where the deleted profiles of banned members will go so that others can see what NOT to do.

Ultimate Iceman
Name: Dark
Age: 19
Race: Vizard, Mutant [X-Men=Iceman]
Ranks Held: Former Captain of the 11th Division
Physical Description: Dark has a lean and cut muscular build made for speed, agility and quick reflexes.
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Zanpakutō: Maki's zanpakutō is called Nijigasumi aka "Rainbow Mist". It is released by the command "shine brightly". Nijigasumi has the ability is to control light for various purposes. It can make Maki turn invisible or douse the area in light, both playing havoc with opponents' counterattacks. It can also use light offensively, creating blades of light to cut an opponent. Dark's bankai is called Saigyoku Nijigasumi aka "Swallowing Orb of Rainbow Mist". In this form it can compress light around an opponent, crushing them.
Special Accessories: On his left ear, Dark wears a square platinum energy-sealing earring studded with diamonds. His spiritual pressure is such that, even when wearing the energy-sealing earring, Dark can fight on-par with other captain-level opponents, even when they release their zanpakutō in either shikai or bankai form.
Skills: Dark has the rare skill of compressing his power. By compressing his power, Dark can move at speeds exceeding those of flash steps, and is given matching agility and reflexes, allowing him to use his natural strength to its limits. Because of this skill combined with his almost unmatched spiritual power, Dark is able to use more powerful hollow techniques that vizards normally wouldn't be able to use, such as Bala and Hierro.
Ability: Dark has a unique ability which allows him to speed up his body, and just like an adrenaline rush, he can react and think more quickly. That is because while using this ability everything appears moving in slow motion just like in the Matrix or WANTED.
Personality: Aside from having a "badassness" attitude, Dark has a soft and flirty side as well.
Biography/History: Ever since he can remember, Dark has loved two things; fighting and drifting. Whether it was taking down the #1 ranked fighter in Japan or drifting the most dangerous course in Tokyo, Dark never backed down. But when a gang of drifters who held a grudge decided to light up Dark's car with hundreds of bullets and cause gallons of NOS to explode on his way to a martial arts tournament, the only thing you can really do is...die. Being reborn with awesome mutant X-Men powers was worth it in Dark's eyes. When Dark got into the Soul Reaper Academy, he was excited to learn and make new friends. Dark excelled quickly while in the academy and was the top of his class. Dark's most astounding ability, which the Gotei 13 noticed, was his growth rate: he grasps the basic control of advanced techniques in days where it should take weeks or even years. Also, because of his power level, he has been able to use high level Soul Reaper techniques early, such as sensing 'Spirit Threads' (energy threads that trace back to a specific soul), which only top level Soul Reapers can use. Dark always took his training to new heights so that he could become stronger, but it was mostly for the adrenaline rush he would get. He did this by secretly entering the Hollow Forest, and fighting the strongest of hollows. When students at the academy asked Dark why he had so many cuts and bruises, he would ask them "What the ******** have you done lately?", and they would be too scared to even think about asking again. Like I said, Dark has a "badassness" attitude. He soon reached bankai and had mastered it by the time of his graduation due to the intense training in the hollow forest. On a clear and sunny day he took the captain proficiency test (隊首試験, taishushiken), which requires the ability to perform the bankai. Presumably, most Soul Reapers become captains using this method. At least three existing captains, including the Commander-General, have to witness the test. Immediatly after the test Dark was promoted and given a spot in the Gotei 13 as Captain of the 9th Division. A few years later several captains and vice-captains were unwillingly subjected to hollowification by Aizen, who used some sort of infectious agent to trigger the change. Kisuke Urahara rescued them and attempted to use the Orb of Distortion to reverse the damage, but it failed. After they were sentenced to be executed as hollows, Urahara gave them untraceable gigais for their escape to the human world. Dark and the other shinigami trained in a massive undergound basement located under a warehouse to gain control over their new powers and succeeded.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:42 pm


Hes banned from this guild? And Im noticing some things but whats the overall problem with his profile?

[EDIT]

Answer: He copied a Canon Character right from Wikipedia, not even attempting to change the name in his Zanpakuto Description.

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Jan-san

PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:38 am


...Another old one to add.

Legendary Shinigami Aros
~User Data~

RP Name: Aros Ryuega
Age: 200 [looks to be in his early 20's]
Gender: Male
Rank: Vaizard
Element: Shadows, Flames
Reiatsu Color: Pitch Black
Species: Vaizard


~Appearance~
NORMAL STATE/SHIKAI/BANKAI:
Aros is dressed in black jeans with black etnies. Black leather gloves are on his hands and dog tags hang off his neck. Instead of a shirt, he wears a large overcoat that reveals his abs perfectly. Even through the coat, it's obvious he was quite muscular. The coat itself was all the way down to his ankles and its pitch black. The tips were sort of in the shape of lightning bolts and the black tip of his zanpaku~to's hilt sticks out of the coat at his left side. His eyes are icy gray and a relaxed look is always on his face. His messy jet black hair is kinda long and spiky and a single bang comes down over his face.
In Bankai, a large leathery black wing erupts from his left shoulder and his left hand becomes a large claw.


SHADOHISAKI MASKED FORM:
Imagine Ichigo's mask, only pitch black and instead of the "claw" marks on his left half of the mask, Aros has red flame like marks on both sides

Shadohisaki:
A large bipedal dragon with razor sharp black fangs. It's gleaming blood red eyes remind most of death. It towers about 11'0 and weights approximately 500 pounds. The dragon is quite muscular like it's counterpart, Aros. It has two large leathery black wings and a huge tail(for image of tail, simply look on my avi). It's always has a hollow's mask shaped just it's head. The mask is pitch black with red flame like marks running down the whole thing. Shado also has hollow armor running down it's neck and on his large claws and talons, all of it is pitch black. Despite the fact that it weighs over a thousand pounds with all that, it still has the ability to move faster than many something it created itself. A special step only it and Aros can control and use. The dragon may not look it, but it is EXTREMELY fast, agile and flexible

Zanpaku~to [normal state]:
Shadohisaki's first form is a mere katana made of orichalcum. It is pitch black

Zanpaku~to [shikai]:
Shadohisaki is the second form of Aros' zanpaku~to. It is just a pitch black blade with a small chain attached to the hilt that coils itself around Aros' hand. The blade makes Aros' speed increase so a jog to him would seem like a sonido to everyone else. The whole blade is made of oricalchum, an indestructable metal, and whenever the blade slices you it drains abit of your reaitsu and feeds it Aros.

Zanpaku~to [bankai]:
Naraku Kagirinai Shadohisaki (Hell's Eternal Black Flames) is the third and final form of Aros' zanpaku~to. It contains the power of hell and the power of flames. It is a large black blade with a very special power. Aros can preform all arrancar attacks using his blade, to preform a cero, his black blade glows a violent red then when he slashes it sends a small cero with the force of a thousand. There is a pitch black chain attached to the hilt made of orichalum, a strange metal that can not be destroyed under any circumstances, the chain coils around Aros' arm making it impossible to remove the blade from him and the chain covers his whole arm making it impossible to severe. The blade boosts Aros' speed tremendously, thus allowing his slow walks to have the sped of a full power sonido. The whole blade is made of orichalcum as well. Aros' blade removes 25% of the enemies reaitsu each time it cuts them. Even if it's a simple nick, it still takes the reaitsu, sometimes it feeds it to Aros but if it's too high of a level the blade simply stores it in intself until Aros unleashes an extremely powerful kidou. Basically, with 4 hits, even if not a single one is fatal, the enemy will die or at least lose everythind and become a mere soul

~Background~
Aros has stood by Soul Society since the beginning. Aside from that nothing about his past is known


~Personality~
[Normal] - Kind, Warm, Gentle
[Battle/Traiing] Cold, Firm, Serious

~Other~
Aros has lost alot in the war including his love. He vows to destroy all the enemy of Soul Society and everyone is suprised darkness hasn't consumed his soul yet

~Techniques~

Bankai - Final Release - A Rank
The second possible stage of release of a zanpakutou. Attaining Bankai requires the materialization of the zanpakutou's avatar, and forcing it into submission, which usually takes at least 10 years, even for skilled Shinigami. When Bankai is achieved, the wielder often gains a 5 to 10 fold increase in fighting strength. Even after attaining Bankai, 10 additional years of training are required to master the zanpakutou.

Shikai - Initial Release - B Rank
The first possible stage of release of a zanpakutou. To attain it, one must achieve interaction and synchronization with their zanpakutou.

Gran Rey Cero - S Rank
This is two or three levels above Cero, no one has ever lived its sight to tell about it. The immense power of this technique requires the sum of a persons usable Riatsu to form into one blast. This technique is only taught to Vasto Lorde, and is simply so powerful that it is scary.

Hadou #90 – Rank S – Kurohitsugi ("Black Coffin")
Summons a black coffin, which surrounds the target, and then is struck through with hundred of blades.
Incantation: Oh dawn of ages hear my cries, I cast forth to the Harold guardians from the other side. Imprison him, destroy him, and annihilate him!

Hadou #54 – Rank S – Haien ("Incinerating Flame")
Completely destroys a target by burning it to ash. Only the most powerful can use this without having contact with the enemy body, and almost no one can use it with out the incantation.
Incantation: Lord of the underworld, grant me power of sin, and fire. Scorch the floor, burn the fire, shine bright, scorn the light!

Bakudou #98 – Rank A – Kin ("Seal")
Partly immobilizes the body of the target, it will work on up to A rank individuals, and they will still need time to fight through it.
Incantation: Right had of destiny, left hand of fate, eyes of destruction, I command thee, halt his step!

Sonido
is the arrancar equivalent of the shinigami flash steps and the Quincy hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound used for flash steps.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:24 pm


l337squerrel
I see what they did there.
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Marisarin Histale

PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:08 pm


The reason why the profile was banned should also be included...at least, I think so.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:58 pm


Oh come one. Isnt it obvious!?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:47 am


In the first profile, note the "special accessories" and "skills" sections. Though the most blatant violation is in the biography, in which he talks about having powers such as "reaching bankai by the time of graduation" from the academy, and he also (this is quite hilarious) names himself as the 9th Division Captain, and then later on a defective shinigami due to Urahara's hollowification experiments.

In the second, he immediately starts off by saying that he is a vizard, then goes on to give ridiculously overpowered abilities to his bankai (can create a cero that is one thousand times stronger than a normal one, gives him the power of an even faster sonido than normal, and the ability to remove 25% of his opponent's reiatsu just by cutting them). But that's not even the best part. Just check out the abilities section. He's already said that he's achieved bankai, and has hadou up to 90 plus bakudou up to 98, on top of some arrancar abilities he shouldn't have.


I should be a profile checker. I've done stuff like this when I was a GVC in other guilds. ^^
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:26 am


*cough*

Actually, the most incriminating part of the first profile was the fact that it was a copy of an Anime Character, Maki, the ex-vice of squad 11. In the Bount Arc he had a light element zanpaktou with those exact abilities, to the final dot. The reason why he wasn't given a second chance...was because it was his third time doing it. The first he did was a rip of Tousen, and I can't remember the second, but that was the third one.

And in the second one, Ara aready explained everything. XD

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:42 pm


Second was Ichigo.

All he did was change the names. The description was also copied (almost) exactly.

He even included the "Pressure breaking bones thing" with his bankai...
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:45 pm


Ichigo? I applied to RP that Canon/NPC Character. Are you talking about my application??? sweatdrop

Because I am applying to RP that character. ninja

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:47 pm


No

He made a Copy Canon RPC without permission.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:49 pm


Ah yes.

Because I put Ichigo in the profiles section already but in big letters at the top of the application says, "PENDING."

I just became a little concerned when you said that. I read the rules over a few times just to make sure that it was possible to even apply for an NPC but it has to be approved by a guild VC or the guild owner.

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THE TINA DARLING

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:05 pm


Nite N Day
Name:Day N Nite

Aliases/ Nicknames: Moon
Physical Description:Am 6feet tall am a book nerd.
Birthday : May 4
Height : 170 cm
Weight : 112 kg
Blood type : O
Occupation : High School Student
Zanpacto:Time's Cloud

Special Accessories:Night Ring

Skills:Raw power, but even more,know for the flash step has trained for 21years on my speed. Has the power to flash the emeny with dark light to blind them and master at hand to hand combat.

Abilities: The abilitie to fight in unknown origin in the shadows.

Personality:Am shy person who more likey keeps his nosie in the book.Am a team player but hate people with no manners.

Biography/History:
Am from a poor clan,I lived where ever I want,My mom and dad are dead and am alone.,No freind's but books. Always wanted to be a well known person,Baseball,Read books,I went to Martines high school.I deid reading books alone when walking home from school.

Powers:
Achieving level similar the shinigami final release bankai,also has the power to blind my emeny. Has master the flash step,has the power to read 100books in 24hours.




Did he even try? What should we do about this profile???
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:45 pm


ACH! xD Thats so funneh but it drives my OCD INSANE! The grammer makes me gag!

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