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 Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:13 pm
Your voice
soothed my darkest nightmare.
It took me away from
all my sorrows
That I had given into.
Your ears
pick up the sound
of my pounding heart in silence.
They listen to my words,
with out question.
How I long
to hear thy voice again.
To pick up it's frequency
so it may sooth my ears again.
My eyes
long to look into yours.
To feel the passion beneath
the vibrant green.
How our hands,
yearn to touch.
To keep each other close.
And to never lost.
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I think this one sucks...am i wrong?
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:53 am
I don't think it sucks at all. You did a great job. I love how you go through talking, sound, to eyesight to touch. It's a good poem for the senses. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:11 pm
Kita Cloud I don't think it sucks at all. You did a great job. I love how you go through talking, sound, to eyesight to touch. It's a good poem for the senses. 3nodding Thank you very much darling.
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