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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:12 pm
How to join squad 13 Please post an RP sample here . When I say "RP Sample" I mean something realistic. Pull it from one of your past RPs for all I care, but please don't write me a novel and tell me you usually post like that. I try to keep it realistic. Tips for your RP sample:Keep your grammar simple Not everyone is inside your head, so keeping it to simple words when discribeing complex movements helps. I am not looking for a spelling bee champ, with a vocabulary the size of Bill Gate's bank account. stay away from RP no's Meaning one liners, god-moding, puppet mastering, shoe elfing and other such nonsense ( if you don't know what this is, don't panic, that means you probably don't do it anyway.) Length is good. Longer the better, but keep it realistic. At some point in RP posts past a page or so you are forced to puppet master, so I will know if you are cheating and intentionally making a hideously long post. When I see the application, I will post below it weather or not you are accepted. Thank you,
~Captain Yukimaru
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:37 pm
This is not recent, and this is not how Buru acts any more. I've re-created and this is simple a sample of my RPing abilities. Normally unless my muse is low... lately it's been high. Life is good. heart Buru had been building up all of his stress, and not letting himself cope with it. Now it was at it’s breaking point, Nagi’s disrespect towards him was nothing large, it was a surprise inspection, but the sight of him sleeping at his desk crushed his anger and it now boiled. Standing at the center of the training grounds he closed his eyes, and he was quickly covered in black flames. His fists balled and the axe on his back absorbed into his form, as he began to yell as loud as he could, which sounded as a lions roar as his own anger boiled into his spiritual energy. Once again he transformed into his Bankai state where he looked similar to a hulking hollow.
As he roared particles of the ground lifted around him and spun in a tornado formation. His eyes opened and it seemed as though flames shot from his eyes, but only for a mere second. His mouth had shut but the roar still echoed off the walls of fifth squad, his own image seemed to duplicate and shift around in spot. The flames that erupted off his form blazed furiously. This time he roared but it was filled with more anger, and he lunged forward putting his hands to his head, and the particles began to shoot up higher around him. As the energy increased around him, small flickers of black flame began to erode the circle around him. Standing strait up to take a deep breath he reached for the sky and yelled once again, and a pillar of black flame spouted from the ground beneath him, and when the flames disappeared, he stood breathing heavily in his strongest form. A samurai looking hollow, with random spikes which curled out from random pieces of his armor; the inner beast was clawing at the cage that Buru held it within. Throwing his arms out to either side the blades of his axe shot from his fore arms, so that long blades extended from his arms. Bowing his head again he growled deeply as he began to charge his energy once again, the hole in his chest seemed to tear deeper into his chest, and if one looked close enough could see the two souls side by side. This was his torment…
Stabbing the blades into the ground a large crack spread from the blades two meters in front of himself. The hole that had been torn open began to be drained of energy. Soul Society was pure spiritual energy, and Buru’s chest began to eat away at the fabric of Soul Society. He just lumbered in position draining energy from it’s endless supply. Holding that position for only a few more moments later he stood up right and the hole in his chest close slightly to seal the two souls. Looking up he roared as if he where calling for some one… this was his war cry…
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 10:03 pm
This is Fefnir fighting Ryoku in Squad 11 from forever ago. I always liked this post the best out of it, so I thought I'd use it for my sample. Enjoy!
"Heh..." Fefnir laughed softly as blood streamed from his arm, "One of the basic principles of fire is that it creates light. Light, Ryoku, that will always pierce any darkness. Light that produces hope for survival and saves those around it," Kaji had grown steadily brighter as the fight wore on, and was covered in Fefnir's reiatsu, creating a sharp contrast between itself and Ryoku's midnight blue reiatsu. Light shone from the blade, dull at first, then gradually grew, engulfing the pair. With the shadows binding him slowly losing their grip, Fefnir was able to slip away from his opponent and get around 25 yards away with a slower-than-normal Shukuchi. It seemed the effects of the familiar's strike set in very quickly, and Fefnir dropped to his knee, trying to clear his mind and his vision of all the creeping blackness. It was almost impossible to think, and even harder to move, but in the darkness, an image cut through, one of a small girl, no more than 5 years old. It was her... Fefnir thought, I'm the one... the one who couldn't save her... I'm the reason she's dead... A tear slid down Fefnir's face as he stood, reiatsu soaring higher, and roared, "I WILL NOT LOSE, MIYUKI!" He took several deep breaths, the physical manifestation of his reaitsu illuminating the area, then said, "Shuntensatsu, my only named attack. You will drop before the pain strikes," Fefnir sheathed his sword, then hesitated a moment. He closed his eyes, then when he reopened them, they glowed with an etheral light. Fefnir's eyes fixed on Ryoku, and performed his True Shukuchi, the ultimate in speed and precision. In the blink of an eye, Fefnir was gone, and a distinct ring was heard, the tone of a blade loosed on the world. No trail of destruction, no shockwave, just just the oppressive ringing of Kaji Hitokage as the slash was made.
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 10:50 pm
O.o Oh jebuz, Tenchi is applying for my squad? I feel so loved!
Both of you are totally accepted ^_^ Welcome to squad 13!
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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:01 am
((This is my rp from my shikai training from BSS, i dont have a large archive of my rp-ing; i am still a recent member of Gaia, so i hope that this will suffice.))
Right as Rikujin was going for the high five he blacked out. As he was regaining consciousness he felt that his overall orientation was a little different. "What the hell...was...that..Den--...." He looked around and saw nothing but hills covered in green grass extending forever, it was as if he was in some ephemeral countryside; the wind blew perfectly and everything was just "that" perfect temperature.
"Where am I? Isn't this where i meditate?"
"So he does have some level of intelligence. Thats a f***ing relief hahaha" Rikujin looked around; panning the fields he saw nothing. "Who's there? This some kinda' trick or somethin'?"
The voice closed in right behind Rikujin. "Oh no, this is far from a joke, its life or death from this point, hahahahaha!" That insane maniacal rang through his head, he quickly pulled out his zanpakto to swipe whatever was behind him; realizing soon after there was no sword in his hand or sheathe at his hilt. It was gone.
"Oh, yea i took that, hahaha..i tend to make things complicated for my victims...i like to play games with them hahahaha!" That clown-like outburst came yet again, it was all around Rikujin. He continued to pan around the fields seeing nothing but green...but then...his eyesight focused on something in the distance...black; and it was spreading towards him quickly. The lush color of the fields was quickly darkening and the perfect atmosphere dropped to a rainy lonely environment. The clouds stormed. He could make out a figure now, it was walking slowly towards him; periodically shunpo'ing within a blink to get into even a closer range.
The ground around him began to break and spread in multiple directions, large slabs of rock exploded from the ground around him. They formed perfect parallel rows; infinite in appearance. Halfway in this strange construction large pipes shot out in horizontals and diagonals;steam erupting periodically. It was forming a cityscape, industrial in construction...dark...cold...rainy..the entire mood was brought to sort of a dark uncomfortable setting.
Rikujin still couldnt make out what was closing in through the rainy haze and mist. He could now make out the figure"...male...average height...lean...holding MY zanpakto...who does he think he is." He thought to himself.
"I...am the all around better...YOU...hahahahaha...the opposite of all that excitement, that energy, that attention problem..I have focus, strenght, and power..im everything you arent...and its my turn to be in the soul society."
((Rikujin has a sort of bipolar disorder and his zanpakto is his other personality. It is no threat to anyone except Rikujin, for they will fight for personality dominance now. Sort of a Zaraki in the way he carries himself, but will never do anythin to harm anyone else or soul society))
"Im going to be the one leaving here today, personally, i dont think it is fair that you get to hang out in soul society all the time...leaving me here." The figure was now in complete focus, he looked EXACTLY like Rikujin. His hair was a little bit more scruffled, and his eyes were a deep golden color..his smile wasnt like Rikujins though, it was sharp and crazed..he looked vicious.
"Dont worry, im not evil or anything..this is no "Im gonna' rule the world" situation...its just about me and you...im your other half and today i want out."He said.
Who are you?
"Hahahahaha, oh my god are you serious..what are you an idiot. I just went over this, IM YOU..your other half, that left over part of your personality that makes you whole and you NEED me. Hajime mashite; nice to meet you..my name is Rikaijin." He bowed.
"Well that's a little cliche dont ya' think..my name is Rikujin and your Rikaijin...woah big difference.." Rikujin said comically.
"FOCUS!!! Damn, didnt i just tell you that..you never pay attention, your so "all over the place" about everythin(sigh)...whatever..lets do this."
Rikaijin charged at Rikujin, as he shunpo'ed towards him a zanpakto started to materialize in his hands. It was identical to Rikujin's except black. "You have a zanpakto, you better use it!" Rikaijin said.
Rikujin felt his swords presence in his hands and blocked Rikai's attack. Shortly afterward Rikaijin disappeared. Rikujin was confused, he couldnt even feel his reiatsu at the moment..THERE! Rikujin turned around to see Rikaijin tryin to flank him from behind, but he teleported yet again...this time before he even finished his attack. Rikujin hears the tear of fabric followed by a large pulsing pain. A large gash appeared on his back, the serrated black sword from Rikaijin had cut him pretty deep.
"Hahahahaha! Ya' know i thought you were catching on for a second..that i had maybe misunderstood you..but know, your still unfocused and you have yet to really pay attention."Rikujin looked around for him but saw nothing and he still couldnt feel Rikaijins reiatsu..it was just that one moment he could barely sense it. He stood still and rested his sword, letting it hang at his side. His breathing calmed from its earlier heavy panting to pattern inhales and exhales. His eyes were close and he tried to sense his other half. Focus, focus...focus.....focus.....THERE!! The two serrated swords collided with each other, sparks flickered in the rain and the two men were at stance with one another.
"So how are you gonna' let this end huh?" Rikaijin knocked Rikujins sword away striking him yet again across the chest horizontally. Rikaijin laughed that insane laugh at his opposites pain. Rikujin collapsed to one knee panting for air yet again.
"How in the hell did you think you could prove to Denkou that you could master your shikai form..YOU will never master shikai at this rate." Rikaijin kicks Rikujin in the face pushing over into the wet ground; Rikujin lied there..rain smacking onto his face followed by the tears from his eyes. His opposite stood over him.
"Today i leave this place...today I master shikai...you, on the other hand will stay here and train and fight till you can prove that you are worthy, till you can really learn to control me..until then you do not have my respect..and will come out at my discretion. Dont worry you wont die here, everythin heals over time, but they will never stop beating up on you. Have fun."
Dark figures surrounded Rikujin and stood him up, he could barely make out anythin at this moment, the blood that was running from his chest and back startedto retract back into him..the skin sealed..and there wasnt even a scar. Shortly afterwards the figures starting beating on Rikujin all of them with their own serrated swords.
Rikaijin started walking away, he started to fragment from the environment he was in..almost breaking away in particles to return to soul society.
Everythin faded to white and Rikaijin was face first in the ground.
"Way to go idiot, get knocked out and I have to wake up to a face full of dirt."
"Ya know i can still here you in here!" Said Rikujin.
Rikaijin started to take his stance, patting the dirt off of his body, and finally seeing Denkou face to face. There were now two zanpaktos at his side, both serrated; one blade black and one blade white. The black black glowed with a dark light, it was a display of Rikaijins emotion, and the white blade still glowed white with Rikujins emotion.
((Rikaijin's shikai is two swords at his side. A black one and a white one. Rikujin wont have the both of these till he himself achieves shikai. Till then he will have to rely on Rikaijin in a sort of partnership))
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 7:37 am
This is me being bored and writing the sample instead of finding one.
Oath was sleeping under a tree. He was wearing a normal shinigami uniform, except with a green cloak. A loud noise came from all around him, but he didn't seem to notice it. The noise became louder and louder, but he still didn't wake up. Eventually, the noise became deafening, and that's when he finally woke up. He jumped up and rubbed his eye with his right hand. He opened his eyes and saw the thing that made the noise. It was a Menos the size of a skyscraper!
"This can't be good." Oath said as he looked up at the Menos. He unsheathed his swords and said, "Dance, Gogyoumori!" He slammed the bottom of the hilts together and it formed a lance with two spear tips. He spun it above his head with his right hand and then got in a fighting position. He spun it with both hands in front of him and a water vortex came out it. It hit the Menos but didn't go through it. "Great. So I guess the only way to immobilize this Menos is to cut it down." he mumbled. He jumped up and spun his lance under his feet. A water vortex shot out and pushed him upward, directly toward the Menos' face...or mask.
When Oath reached the Menos' face/mask, he spun it in front of himself, with the spear tips facing him and the Menos'. Each time it spun, it slammed the Menos down and scratched Oath. After a few minutes, the Menos was crushed into the ground so that the Menos and Oath were at the same height. The vortex stopped and Oath dropped down on the ground. He landed softly, and ran toward the Menos at full speed yelling, "Eulaliaaaa!" He spun the lance one last time and it cut the Menos. The menos created a garganta and disappeared into it so it wouldn't get hurt more. "Release." Oath said. The lance split in half and turned into two swords. He unsheathed them and sat back under the tree. "No one will notice the hole." he mumbled to himself as he fell asleep. He said that even though the whole was at least 20 feet wide and deep.
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 11:37 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:31 pm
((Fefnir asked me to join before he became captain of 9th, but I'd still like to join here in 13th, so here you go...))
Hibiki patrolled the city cautiously, his first trip to Earth on duties making it all the more important to him. Leaping up to the vantage point of a steeple roof, he crouched and looked over the sleeping homes. Relaxing a bit as he sensed nothing, he sighed, wiping his face with his hand, since he'd been sweating. No reason to nervous yet.
Suddenly, the echoing roar of a Hollow came from the west, and with a startled jump to his feet Hibiki race off towards it. Reaching a park he found the source, a rather new Hollow, probably just recently reformed. Instead of running directly at it, the shinigami dashed to the right, still unnoticed.
The Hollow's target was clearly a pair of spirits who were hiding under the slide nearby, and Hibiki slashed at the Hollow from the opposite direction. Got to lead it away. The Hollow swept around to face him, and suddenly lunged at Hibiki in fury. "Oh cra-" He said, turning to retreat a bit, the creature hot on his tail. As it lunged a second time, Hibiki came to a dead halt and ducked, let it sail right over him, and stuck up his zanpaktou's blade to slice it clean in half as he went over. Sighing as the Hollow vanished, he sat back down to regain his bearings.
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:57 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:31 pm
Kesui RP sample
Kesui walks outside of squad 9's gate into a grassy plain. Kesui thought he got the best training out of squad 9. Kesui walks under a apple tree. He grabs a apple from the tree. He grads his kanui and cuts the apple, and begins to eats it. kesui looks at the sky.
Kesui wonders where he will go next. Kesui has no parents, no family,and no freinds. Well he has a couple of them, but thats all. Kesui got up and started to train by himself. Leaves fell from the tree. Kesui was trying to cut them one by one. Kesui falls to the ground.
"Man this is hard, I need to get all of these" Kesui said. Kesui kept on training til all the leaves were gone. Kesui realized that a hollow killed his family! " Squad 9 was the being , now hopefuly squad 13 will be the end" Kesui thought to himself.
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 11:20 am
This my RP sample (i'll try my best!!) P.S this is my first one
Haroku walks through a forest desperate to find a trainer. All of a sudden a hollow flies through the tree just to land inches from my face. I drop to my knees in awe of the monster that's in front of me. "Damn i have no weapons on me, What do i do" Haroku thinks to himself. Haroku remembers his excellent climbing abilities so he heads for the trees. After almost an hour of running and climbing Haroku drops to the forest floor.
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:10 pm
KASHI walking threw the white snow angery that his village been destroy by hollows they killed his family friends i was cut up bleeding the hollows was chaseing me then i hide in the snow then i past out when i woke up i was next to a bloosome tree rose petale falling from the tree now i know what i must do avenge my familey friends and my village so i started traning by my self whith my blade cut up the tree i need more tranning so whent to squad13 gate to do more trianning to avenge my village.
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