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nice work, although some areas are kinda difficult to read. i like the sketchy feel to it (the boxes) in contrast to the neater lines (the first two panels). i think the most successful panel would probably be the second one, where she's smirking. i do start getting a little lost after, like how her sword switches from the right hand to her left...especially when slicing a figure (who is standing to the right of her) as she's running past them. and i got really lost at the panel in where she's licking the blade, i think because her mouth doesn't have the same style and feel as with the second panel. i would figure that her mouth would form more of an 'o' shape around her tongue, instead of opening it that wide. it would also help to see the top part of her mouth too, because the way it's framed now makes it look like she's got two chins.

i mean, i know that you said that you just did it for fun, so these are things that you can take or leave. on the whole it's pretty cool, i like the simple color scheme you picked. the greys look pretty good, especially on her lips in the second panel...it looks like it was done with a marker. i also like how it looks like you used two different greys. like the warmer grey for the main shading and the cooler grey to do some light shadows/outlines. i'm not sure if you intended for that to happen but i think it gives it an interesting feel. the grey you chose is a nice shade...doesn't make your piece feel too heavy and contrasty, but still enough to add depth.

lawl

This one was done this morning.



Here are the rest...






And here's a random chibi I'm working on:



MRAWR.

thanks, I'll think about that.