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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:30 pm


This is a story my family and I are working on. I really hope you like it.^^ there's lots of action, lots of comedy and we have some romance too. Any drawings you see, my little sis drew them. She's 12, I'm the writer. you'll learn more along the way, Please enjoy it would really mean a lot.^^
PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:42 pm


Here is where you will get to know some of the main characters. There are more but they will be added later. Maybe these characters can relate to some of you.

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Name: Lazaro Diaz
Age: 17
Birth place: New Brunswick, New Jersey
Height: 5'11
Weight: 168
Birth Date: Jan. 25, 1988
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Saber Blade
Special gifts: Fire
Family: Mother, Father still living, Sister/ Emma, Cousins/ Dalia, Selina, Nelson
Hates: All types of bugs, and people with big egos.
Favorite things/Hobbies/Food: Amine, writing, training, Amine Video Making, and playing video games/ Cold subs
# 1 Hate: Man treating or speaking as if women are under them.

Secret Bloodline: Blood of Inciro the Crescent Phoenix

Lazaro, A nice kid, some say just a little too nice. He tends to worry more about others then he does himself. Sorrows, worries, pain, he's wants to help, and he want to worry. He loves to make others laugh to relieve the moment. Only when it comes to himself, he hates bothering others or make anyone worry about him. Some cases he has no choice, but he's the type who wants to carry the burden of others, then to share it. So he acts like a clown. Heh, heh not the joker. Something Nelson said to him that struck him deeply. "You always smile, but you're crying on the inside." " If it's only me who suffers, then I am happy." Now that his world is turned upside down, will the burden be to much for him to carry alone? Or will he learn to share it?Or will it end up destroying him and everyone around him?




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Name: Emma Diaz
Age: 11
Birth place: Newark, New Jersey
Height: 4'10
Weight: 90
Birth Date: July 18, 1995
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Metal Stick
Special gifts: Earth
Family: Mother, Father still living, Brother/ Lazaro, Cousins/ Dalia, Selina, Nelson
Hates: Girls that think their all that, bug, math, the smell of flowers
Favorite things/Hobbies/Food: Anime, Drawing, Chinese food
# 1 Hate: Pink

Secret Bloodline: Blood of Rezondra the true mother of Earth

Emma, Lazaro's younger sister, she a real nice person. Only she can be a little nutty, and PLEASE BEWARE. She can REALLY speak her mind. " Girls, don't fart?! What?! Everybody farts!! I'm proud of it!! Doesn't everybody fart?! Am I wrong? Am I Wrong?!
Lazaro- (Sweat, Embarrassed doesn't cut it.) "Emma..... Please don't ask that in a public food market...."
She loves her brother to death, sadly. She's always with him no matter how much he tries to get away. Her love for Daila, it's til death do you part. Mother, She can not stand, but she loves her father. She always likes to liven up the moment. Yes there really isn't a dull moment around her. The comic relief you would say. Will she liven up this adventure? Or will she just drive everyone insane?



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Name: Nelson Medina
Age: 16
Birth place: New Brunswick, New Jersey
Height: 5'6
Weight: 140
Birth Date: Sept. 23, 1989
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Samurai Sword, small two side dagger
Special gifts: Lightning
Family: Mother, Father still living, Cousin/ Emma, Lazaro Sisters/ Dalia, Selina
Hates: Effort, stupid people, guns
Favorite Things/ Hobbies/Food: Anime, Reading books (mangas), hanging out with friends, Swords, training, and fighting, pizza hut pizza

Secret Bloodline: Blood of Drecin the Shadow thunder Dragon

Nelson, his a nice funny guy too. His can be pretty funny,Even though he don't look it, but he has a short temper. Like Lazaro he likes to carry the burden, but he knows how to share it a little more, plus he knows when he's carrying too much. He is there for anyone who needs help. Both of their past are some what similar, only they found different ways to deal with it. Lazaro, Bottles it up, and find the good in it. Then tries his best to hide it with a smile. Nelson, bottles it up, Smiles to hide it, only his anger
most times gets the best of him. Most cases he ends up hurting the ones he loves because of it. This he hates most about himself, but everyone really understands. The closest to understand would probably be Lazaro. "In your heart, you have that much hate in you?" "I-I don't know how to take it out." Now as his life is turned upside down. Will he learn to control his hate completely? Or will it consume him completely?
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Name: Dalia Medina
Age: 15
Birth place: New Brunswick, New Jersey
Height: 5-5
Weight: 155
Birth Date: Sept. 29, 1990
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Numb chucks , spear
Special gifts: Ice
Family: Mother, Father still living, Cousins/ Emma, Lazaro Sister/ Selina, Brother/ Nelson
Hates: Spider, A... Holes, Father, and advice
Favorite things/food/hobbies: Anime, Renting movies, Sea food, Friends, Family, and Dark red teddy bear

Secret Bloodline: Blood of Lithian the mystic aqua Leviathan

Dalia, Nelson's Younger sister. She is nice, but she can have her cold sides, heh, heh. Though nice she does have her wild sides. Contents not suitable for children under the age of eighteen. Also her punches REALLY hurt. REALLY, Just ask Lazaro. They have a special bond, painfully special. "Wow! That guy's really HOT!!" "I think he's gay." *WHAM!!* "I didn't ask for a second opinion!!" "(sobbing) I didn't mean it...." Now if you have Emma and her together. Run, RUN AWAY!!! FAR FAR AWAY!!! Contents not suitable for children under the age of eighteen. Dalia's deepest, darkest weakness is.... Hot boys.... She can do crazy things when a hot boy is in the mixed. will she make this adventure wild? Or will she just make things worse?


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Name: Selina Medina
Age: 12
Birth place: Newark, New Jersey
Height: 5'
Weight:120
Birth Date: Nov. 28,1993
Blood Type: Unknown
Weapon: Bow and arrow
Special gifts: Laser whips
Family: Mother, Father still living, Cousins/ Emma, Lazaro, Sister/ Dalia, Brother/ Nelson
Hates: Smart talk, football, school
Favorite things/Food: Hip hop, rap, chicken

Secret Bloodline: Blood of Sicaida the giant Basilisk

Selina, Nelson's youngest sister. She can be a nice person, Can be. She is very different from Dalia, and Nelson. From likes to even looks. That also goes for Emma and Lazaro. There really isn't much of a strong bond for her brother or sister, except related by blood. It's the same for Emma. There are times when Dalia and Nelson forgets she exists. Lazaro tries his best to except her, but sometimes she can even get to his last nerves. Though he probably just have a bond for her some where inside. " You know, sometimes they don't even know you exist." "I know." "It doesn't hurt?" ".....No...." With her in the mix of this adventure. Will she be able to be excepted or will this adventure just push her more away?

CrescentPheonix
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CrescentPheonix
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:48 pm


This should sum up what TrueFiction is all about.

~ TrueFiction~ Time crisis and Wishful thinking...
TrueFiction, A story of kids in a world trapped in a time crisis. With hardcore hits, unforgiving battles, and unpredictable emotions all mixed into one. These kid fight for their lives to save their parents.... And the world....
PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 3:20 pm


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TrueFiction
Ep.1 Season 1 Time Crisis
Opening theme Song: Blow Me Away

Seven...Seven graves.... All with statues of what looks like teenagers, young teenagers.
On each grave had a name and history. The names read Nelson, Dalia, Selina, Lazaro, Emma, Chris, and Brian.
Voice 1- Hey isn’t that creepy for being the first thing you see. Well my name is Lazaro. That’s my grave in the middle.
Voice 2- I’m Emma!!! My grave is next to his!!!
Voice3- My Name is Dal-!!!
Lazaro- Hey wait! Everyone will know who we are when we tell them our story.
Voice 4- Then why did you tell them your name?
Lazaro- Well uhh... I forgot Nelson.
Nelson- Right...
Voice 5- You just wanted the spot light.
Lazaro- Hey I did not Chris!
Voice 6- He got you there.
Lazaro- Shut up Brian!
Voice 7- Are we ever going to start the story?!
Lazaro- Yeah Listen to Selina. Alright, I bet you’re wondering how we got here right. Well it a real long story. A Story of our lives. How one moment changed our normal lives forever.. (Fade out)

Dong!!! Dong!!!Dong!!! A boy jumps up his bed trying to shut off the alarm clock, he then spotted his door open and his mom walked through the kitchen.
Lazaro- (That’s Me!!!)
Everyone- (Shut up and let the story tell them!!!)
Lazaro- (Heh heh, sorry...)
Mom- Hey Taito.
Lazaro- Hey Mom.
Emma came into the kitchen to go to Lazaro room.
Mom- Hey lets walk to downtown to do some shopping.
Both- No we don’t want to go!.. We just got up!
Mom- Alright, alright I’ll go by myself.
Their Mom left the house going to downtown.
Emma- I’m going to the backyard to play. Let me just put on some nice cloths.
Lazaro- What nice clothes?
Emma- Shut up!!
She puts on a black jeans with a long black jacket and a black shirt with a purple broken heart. She was just about to go outside until Lazaro spotted her.
Lazaro- What in gods name are you wearing?
Emma- Hey I’m going out Fashionable moron.
Lzazro- Really? Well as long as you take Destiny out.
Emma goes outside to play with Destiny (the dog) and Lazaro stares out the window watching them play. This is something that goes on in their daily lives, but all that is about to change. Lazaro Suddenly spots something. A black explosion, shaped like a dome growing larger and larger.
Lazaro- Holy Hell....
Lazaro quickly puts on his blue jeans his favorite red jacket and hat and rushes out trying to call in Emma and Destiny.
Lazaro- Emma! Destiny! Get in here!
Emma- Why? I just got out here!
Lazaro- Emma get your butt over here!
Emma-WHYYYY?
Emma turns around and see the black explosion right in front of her face. She turned blue.
Emma-AHHHH!!!!!
Emma picks up Destiny and starts running. Only she trips dropping the dog.
Lazaro- Jeez!
Lazaro runs down the stairs and picks up Destiny. Than he grabs Emma. But the black explosion engulfed them all....
Lazaro- No!!!
Moments later the explosion imploded and it was gone, but there was no damage at all.
Emma- Wha...what happen.
Lazaro- I- I don’t Know. Last time I check nuclear explosions leaves the leaves more damage then this. Hmm... looks like everything is back to normal. Well I’ll just go back inside. You can still play if you want to.
Emma- Uhh, Y-yeah
Lazaro turns to go back inside.
Lazaro- (I really don’t get it. What just happened there?)
Then suddenly Lazaro heard a strange sound coming down the one way street. Lazaro turn only to see an army of old Japanese warriors running down the street.
Lazaro- (What is this? The Japanese parade? Do we even have those in America?)
One of the soldiers looked at Lazaro for a while
Lazaro- Hm?
Then charged at him. Lazaro fell backward.
Lazaro- Hey, hey what the hell are you doing?!?!
Lazaro on fours crawled away trying not to get slash by the warrior sword. The warrior slashing away at Lazaro was just barley missing, and Lazaro soon was trapped in the corner of the fence.
Lazaro- please, please don’t kill me!!! I.. I.. I don’t even know you!!!
Warrior- shi-ne ! !
Lazaro- shi-ne ?!!
The soldier swung his sword at Lazaro ready to kill him, Lazaro yelled trying to block the attack with his arms. Then suddenly flame started surrounding Lazaro and the warrior sword melted on impact. Lazaro opened his eyes only to see a shock warrior with a melted blade. Lazaro looked at himself dumb founded and in flames.
Lazaro- Oh my god!!! I’m on fire!!!!
Lazaro jumped up, down, and all around trying to put out the flames. The warrior on the floor was staring at Lazaro confused and frozen.
Lazaro- Wait a minute...It’s not burning. I don’t feel a thing. Strange the color of the fire is not normal. purple on the outside blueish-green on the inside.
All of the sudden many soldiers enter Lazaro backyard and the soldiers went straight for him.
Lazaro- What the hell is going on?!?! Err, looks like I don’t have time for question!!
Suddenly all his fire was focused to his fists.
Lazaro- How did I - Ahhh!!
The soldiers got to him and they started to swing their weapons.
Lazaro- Can you guys give a guy a break!!!?
Suddenly a soldier cut him in the chest. Not a deep cut. Good thing too. Only Lazaro saw the blood stain on his shirt and a rage suddenly grow in him.
Lazaro- Why you!!!!
With a flaming punch to the face the soldier who cut him was sent soaring into the wall of the house.
Lazaro- Uhh?! Where did that come from?!
The soldiers around him couldn’t believe what just happened, but they shook it off and started to attack again
Lazaro- You guys don’t learn do you?!!
This time Lazaro was fighting back. With one hit with his flaming fists the soldiers were down. He looked at himself in owe.
Lazaro- How was I able to do all that so easily? Did my backyard training really pay off?
Suddenly a soldier came from behind, but Lazaro quickly nailed a flaming spin kick sending him through the gate and the ground.
Lazaro- Wow!!! Fire on the legs too!!
Emma- Ahh! Lazaro!!!
Lazaro look towards Emma and saw many soldiers chasing after her.
Emma- Help!!
Lazaro- Emma stay away from their swords!!
Emma- Don’t you think I’m trying!!!!!
Emma was trying her best to run away and the soldiers were right behind her. Then suddenly the grass got longer and wrapped around the soldiers and they couldn’t move.
Lazaro- What did you do!?
Emma- I don’t know!!!!
Lazaro- (Wait a minute could it be that she has powers?!) Wait could Emma have powers too? Emma there’s more coming do something!
Emma- What?! Why don’t you come and do something?!?! You’re my brother!!! Aren’t you supposed to protect me?!?!
Lazaro- Emma I think you may have special powers! I just don’t know yet.
Emma- All right I’ll try something, but uh what can I do?!
Lazaro- Emma!!!
A soldier was really close for a kill. With a swing of his sword he tried to take her head, Emma luckily fell to the floor trying to get away, but now she had soldier with their swords up and ready for the kill.
Emma-Ahh!!!
Lazaro- No!!!
Suddenly the grass rose again and wrapped very slowly around the soldiers.
Lazaro- ?!?! You do have powers!!!
Emma- Huh??
Emma had her eyes closed so she didn’t really see a thing. As she opened them she saw the soldiers wrapped in grass again.
Emma- How did I do that?!
Then more soldiers came to the backyard.
Lazaro- Ah, come on! How many of you are there?!
Lazaro fire up his fist and races on the warriors and they were all blown away by his burning fist. Soldiers were hit through houses and into the air.
Lazaro- Hey I’m really getting better at this. Well I played fighting games all my life. That has to count for something.
Then out of the blue the earth started trembling.
Lazaro- From the sound of it, the whole army is on it’s way.
He was completely right. A huge army headed their way from the street.
Lazaro- Oh Great!! I can’t take all of then at once!!!
Emma- Hey taito check this out.
Lazaro- Huh?
Emma puts her hand on the ground and the road crack all around the soldiers and they failed into a huge hole.
Lazaro- Emma! Don’t you know that’s not our property!!
Emma- All right let me test something.
Emma close her eyes and her hand still on the ground. She was able to close the road back up like nothing ever happened.
Lazaro- wow that was amazing. How did you do that?!
Emma- thanks Lazz, but I don’t really know. I just thought of it really hard and it happened.
Lazaro- Alright Emma we got to get out of here. We got to check if Mom and Dad is ok. Just let me grab Destiny.
Lazaro went to get the dog.
Lazaro- Here Emma hold the dog, alright lets see if Dad’s ok.
Emma- How the heck are we going to get over there.
Lazaro- We run.
Emma- What! Are you kidding me?!
Lazaro- Well I can’t drive. Now lets go.
Emma and Lazaro started running. But they wasn’t running as fast as they usually do.
Lazaro- what the, I never ran this fast.
Lazaro turned around.
Lazaro- Eh?!?! Now I know she doesn’t run that fast. Lets see if we can go faster. Emma ! Try to keep up with me.
Lazaro ran as fast as he could and Emma seem to follow.
Lazaro- Alright super speed and it looks like we both have it.
Lazaro and Emma looked around them as they ran and as they did, they just couldn’t believe what they saw. The world was in Chaos. Strange people wearing old clothes were running around all over the place. Some would attack homes and other people. Others would just be lost in confusion.
Emma- Lazaro? Why is this happening?
Lazaro- I- I don’t Know.
Lazaro and Emma ran to their father’s house. Only to find no one in his house and it was a wreck.
Lazaro- I don’t know what happen here, but we need to find mom.
Emma and Lazaro ran to downtown and search every where, but could not find her. Also downtown was a mess.
Lazaro- We can’t find her anywhere. Mom and Dad. What going on?!!!
Emma- Do you think something happened to them?
Lazaro- No, Just you wait. We’ll find them. Lets check if Nelson and them are alright.
Lazaro took his cell phone and called Nelson’s phone. Ring, ring...ring.
Nelson- Hello.
Lazaro- Is this Nelson.
Nelson- who else.
Lazaro- Did anything strange happened over there.
Nelson- what do you consider strange.
Lazaro- well Japanese warriors trying to take our lives.
Nelson- This is what I consider strange, pirates coming out of the blue with there vile smiling breath and there black darkness teeth trying to kill us.
Lazaro- Well I can see you had a fine day.
Nelson- Lets drop the sarcasms.
Lazaro- How’s your sisters.
Dalia- Hey Lazz, how you doing?
Selina- What’s up?
Lazaro- I’m fine even Emma. I’ll be there soon. I’m glad to here you’re all ok.
Lazaro went to hang up the phone.
Nelson- No! Don’t hang u...
Lazaro and Emma were about to go to Nelson house all the way in Newark, but something caught Lazaro eyes. Lazaro turned to a wreck Marshall store. It was a shirt with a full moon and a crescent moon in the inside.
Lazaro- I don’t think they’d be needing that anymore.
Emma- Lazaro!! Are you going to steal that shirt?!
Lazaro- Come on, It’s not like they’re going to be doing any sell anytime soon. Besides my shirt’s a mess.
Emma- Err, idiot!
Lazaro went into the shop to change. Once his got out, he was a new man.
Lazaro- I really don’t know what is going on here, but why do I get the feeling it’s going to be hell.
Emma- Maybe because all of New Brunswick is going through hell right now.
Lazaro- Your probably right. Oh well, lets go!!!
With that Emma and Lazaro were of to Nelson’s house. (Fade out)


Ending Theme Song-


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