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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:23 pm
I have to finish by friday blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
is there anything that bothers you so far (BESIDES THE SIDEWALK BEING REALLY HUGE) (also the grey border which is the result of me taking a screenshot instead of saving because I am a lazy b***h)

or any tips because Im still getting used to painter and sometimes its confusing and frustrating ;;
yes please thanks thanks!!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:41 pm
The sidewalk does not bother me at all. I'd have to say his shoulders area bit odd though. They seem too low and his right arm seems to connect either too low or too close to the center, or maybe both?
Also the way the level of detail changes from his face to his hair seems strange, but I expect that is because it is in progress.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 9:05 pm
Yeah basically only the face is "finished" at this point and I should finish the back building before i do the hair
but I know what you mean about the shoulders thank you!
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:52 pm
Have you thought of making the sidewalk thinner in the distance, at the street corner, and then having it curve up to the width you have it at in the foreground? It would mean you'd have to move the building in the far background, but that's easily done in digital.
Watch out for tangency with the elbow that's over the sidewalk edge. Keep an eye on that.
And a couple questions: what's that thing he's holding? And you're keeping the subject on a separate layer from the background, right?
I should go back to Painter. I've forgotten where everything is. stressed
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 3:25 pm
Um, it's a box but right now it looks like a blob
also everything is totally on the same layer
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:10 pm
SNAKES ON A PLANE! also everything is totally on the same layerI was kinda concerned about that. Makes your job harder.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:21 pm
eh kind of i guess, I'm not really that concerned
I fixed the perspective and the doors and stuff up a bit
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