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 Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 11:55 pm
I am an old soul put into an new body, I write and I love to read writings of all.
I'll post all my work in this.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:00 am
This is a poem made out of song titles
a Musical Story
Endlessly she said watching me
I look after you
The Beast and the harlot
Makes you scream
Brings you to your afterlife
I look after you
Endlessly she said
Here in
A town called hypocrisy
We watch it burn down
On the last train home
An Everyday combat
Look a Riot
On the rooftops
We wish it would be 4:am forever
For all these times son for all these times
We have our hands up high
Get lifted into the sky
Here in bat country
Livin’ on a prayer
Welcome to where ever you are
Because I am in
The city of fallen angels
And I can
Say there’s no worries
Because its never to late
With this new medicine
Its time to turn around
And break on through
Through the fire and flames
Storming the burning fields
And only you my Burning love
Can bring me to life
For this last thriller
To forget this damn regret
And a new beginning
For girls & boys
Shall end the day that I die
The last living soul
Here in demon days
Right next door to hell
Welcome to the jungle
On the last train home
Always all ways
On the last train home
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:12 am
I wrote this while work the follow spots for the play west side story, at the end of the play
My Heart Still Skips a Beat
my heart still skips a beat
every time the gun goes shot
My heart still melt away
every time our eye's get locked
My Hand still shakes
every time your body goes away
My knuckles still crack
Every time the guy get you
My head still screaming
Every time your eyes goes away
My mind still breaking
Every time that guy get a grab
My hand still shaking
Every time the gun goes shot
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:27 am
I wrote this after playing don't fear the reaper on rock band (weirds ispiration ever)
Don't Fear the Reaper
A Dark hand rising
A cold heart warming
Cold and lifeless
Does mean it is loveless
A reaper’s hand reaches for her
The young soul slipping from her
The reaper’s love is a curse
The reaper’s touch is another verse
Don’t fear the reaper my friend
Fear the reaper’s curse
Fear the reaper’s love
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:01 am
a Musical Story: Amazing, simply amazing. I really enjoyed it. It's a very creative way to write. It reminded me of that movie 'children of men' I'm not sure why... but it does.
My Heart Still Skips a Beat: To me it looked like it needed spell-checked. and It was a bit hard to read.
Don't Fear the Reaper: an interesting Take on the reaping process I'd say.. and just for the record BOC is an awesome band.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:37 pm
I don't remember how I was inspired to write this, but I will take this time to say that I won't be giving much comments on other pieces till I am done editing and posting all 55 of mine, or the ones I think I'd like to keep
Mistakes
One last time I pray for your soul
One more time I cry for you, a fool
I am such a fool for you are the one
The one that made me I lose control
I think I made a mistake, between
When my eyes laid onto you
And when my heart was crushed
My eyes became blue my heart became cold
My body slow my words low
nothing left to say
Until I am back, for another sad day.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:39 pm
This was a English paper turned into a poem for a final project, I really like this piece, it was about my home at first then I brought to sound and music
Eternity
Faint sounds, ringing for eternity
Only beauty grows from it
Eternity goes on forever, never ending, never stopping
Just like music, sound, life
As long as sound lives, music will be near
the beauty, growing eternally, something never seen
only heard, listen to sound, the voices
let vision blur away
blind men will go on, angel voices guiding them
I am here, music makes my home
eternal sounds, eternal beauty, eternal power
Music forms something, that can't be felt, but gives feeling
Safety, protection, fearlessness, fright
it gives so much feelings, but to me
only protection, safety
so many, and so few at the same time
let the music flow, and protect you
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:42 pm
Again this was for the same English project as the last one, but this was a poem that was a failure that I redid completely to something right, the original was all backwards
Judgment
Life with our death, Creation without destruction, Beginnings with out ends
All are connected all are linked, you can’t have one without the other
But the difference between them, like a to cross an ocean three times before reaching land again.
The water splashes to the sides of your boat pushing you back trying to prolong your length to the next side
But for what, to leave the destruction and create a new life
To forget the deaths of family and friends and beginning a new
To get to one side, only one thing stands how far, or how close it is to reach
Judgment, Something that be with the government, the environment
Something within an agreement, a movement, we all just hide within its settlement
Something has imprisonment and
In its document with write on from the creation we want and the destruction we fear
The beginnings we love and the endings we would want to do without
The lives we enjoy and the deaths we hide
All because of the links, between things, all connected, all decided from
Judgment………………Judgment
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:44 pm
I was feeling, sorta depressed when I wrote this, I can say that for sure, or I was pissed off, I can't remember
The End
I Hate Life
Death I love
The Creation
Of destruction
the beginning
of the end
The End is near
when
those who are alive
die
and those who are dead
live
Life
shall end
Death
shall begin
Judgment
shall happen
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:53 pm
This poem was inspired in an odd way, from the final boss in kingdom hearts 2, I got it from the cut scene right before the final final boss the you fight with only Riku and Sora.
Darkness
There will always be darkness
As long as there is light
Darkness
Everlasting darkness
Pulling those who
Hearts are weak into it
Darkness and light
Goes on for ever
Everlasting
Entwined with
Each other
But there is something
In-between
But it
It is nothing
Nothing goes on forever
Between the two
Hiding in fear
From the light and darkness
Raging at war
Light and darkness
The blades meet
A never ending battle
Till one meets defeat
And the
World
ends
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:54 pm
I got this from something I read, and my views on the war and how allot of people are.
What Does It Take
What does it
take
to wake
everyone
me
you
everyone
too see the truth
the reasons the world is dieing
we are killing each other
we are killing our home
why
Do we do this
we say we want to end it
but by
finishing off the other side first
I want it to end
But how
we need to join
we need to end this hate
this blanket of death
this war, this fight, this time
we need to
rise together
and wake up
if we could just wake up
we could save the world
shake up
those who are trying to
hold it all in there grasps
we must
be one
a from
the truth
the nation
the world
be as one
and no long fight
no long have all this death
but flourish in life
in truth
end all this hate
and replace it with love
make it
so LOVE can over come Hate
so WAKE UP
and never give up
keep it up
lets save the world
and be one
so WAKE UP
and never give up
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:56 pm
This I got from watching the sunset here in beautiful Hawaii.
Gates of Heaven and Hell
The sun
breaking though the clouds
like a golden rain
beams of sunlight
cutting though the clouds
like a warm knife
cutting though warm butter
You look up
its so beautiful
what is it
we can dream
can't we
so I dream
its the gates
to heaven
and hell
two of the same
depending on who you are
and how you live
the sins you've done
and the life you gained
depends if you'll go
to heaven or hell
though the same gate
the gate
of heaven and hell
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Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:24 pm
A New Age
A new Age
a New time
a new way
but they all ends the same
death, through true lovers eyes
and death again
repeating, in what seems
a never ending cycle
the death
of the three
the killer
the fighter
and the lover
they are all reborn
to just repeat themselves
ones more
never ending
a new age
a new time
a new way
but They all ends the same
because life and love
when added hate
can only end with death
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Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:32 pm
Emowetic
I walk down
my lonely way
the one I cared for so much
I couldn't wait to go to her
once more
my heart
pumping
like a jackhammer
my pace goes faster
as happy as I could
be
but then
but
then
I saw her
there
with another man
hidden behind a door
hidden on a bed
hidden under the covers
stare at her
crying to myself
"Your a whore" I yell
but, my voice then goes low
"Your a whore
does that mean I have to pay now
well here" I throw
a small black box
that held a ring
then I run
I run for my death
I grab my gun
I hold it to my chest
I cry
and say
"You lie, I die"
slowly my finger
pulls back
the trigger clicks
the cap crushed
and my heart destroyed
splash goes my blood
and I fall
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Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:41 pm
I run, I hide, I cry
I run, I hide, I cry
I want to get away
away from it all
my life, my love, my secrets
and my so called
friends
it all gets in MY way
its just brings me
STRESS
my STRESS makes me run
they come
they stop me
I drop my tears
they say
"Your Worthless"
"Get your act together"
"GET BACK TO WORK"
I just yell out
yet no sound comes out
I just want to scream but....
I can't.....
So I do
the only thing I can
I grip my first, my nails like knifes
cutting into my palm
from gripping so tightly
the stress
the anger
the rage
all into one fist
I cry
and I punch the man
in front of me
a gun shot from my first
he dies
then I hold that gun
to my own ear.....
bang
I fall
my blood on the floor
my life over
my love
my friends
my life
Its all over
I am dead
I have nothing more
no more stress
no more anger
no more life
No more
To get in my way
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