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VikkiLostGuin

PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:31 pm


Drowning

Fire smoldering in my lungs
as I fight to find my words,
the prediction of my own death.
My teeth long to be fangs begging
to steal away a moment
of your life, your breath, your warmth.
Desperation oozes through my veins
as I try to find the surface.
The water strangles me
as it glistens from the light
kissing its somber face with ripples,
but I am cold to its beauty.
Stings of salt into an open wound
invade my searching eyes.
Is there no escape, no means
to save this pathetic life?
Surrender, bittersweet surrender.
Peace followed by darkness.



Thanks for reading. Let me know what you think!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:02 pm


it's scary in an almost dreamlike way

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VikkiLostGuin

PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:02 pm


eek It was a dream/nightmare.
I'm glad that you saw that.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:31 pm


wow really? that's freaky...

Calopterynx


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:03 pm


You writing could be adapted pretty easilly to camera, I think. The way you describe it makes it very easy to be in the scene.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:06 pm


Thank you.

VikkiLostGuin

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