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 Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:55 am
Umm. D8 I need help with the lower portion of this comission. Her left leg (her left, not ours) looks really wierd to me, and I'm not sure how it should really lie. Also, her right arm...I suck at drawing arms XD so is it too straight/crooked or? Would love some help, advice or redline. heart Thanks~ DX
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:56 am
PS: Ignore the words in the lower left corner. XD It's my reading for next week on Percy Shelley.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:11 am
The way her right arm is bending... I'm wondering if thats physically possible D: It might be, but it looks really awkward. I think its the hand and wrist that are most awkward...
Maybe this?
I dunno rofl
Hopefully someone else will come around and give advice surprised
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:21 am
her left foot looked like it got twisted u should move the foot in a diffrent postion it seems painful
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:47 am
Any better? I hate how mu rough sketches look. DX
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:52 am
Yes, the arm and hand looks much better now.
And her left arm looks much better now too.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:59 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:59 am
The arms look a whole lot better now. I feel like the left leg is too long, maybe just on the lower half, sice it's technically farther away from teh viewpoint and should be a little smaller. Just a little.
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:49 pm
Finished:  Don't really like the way the legs came out, but oh well, I got paid so w/e XDD
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:04 pm
I love the finished product! : D The entire center of the picture, her body, I just love all the details and the way its colored.
I feel guilty often when I create art for someone who paid for it, and I don't like the way it came out or don't feel I did the best that I could. But as long as they're happy in the end, it works out I guess.
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:53 pm
I like it! Love the color scheme.
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