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Ally Os
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 9:53 am


Have a question regaurding character profiles? Ask here! A mod will get to you as soon as possible.


Due to overlooking and forgetting about this threads existance, please just send a pm to the captain (Rose Adele Zellar) or one of the VC (KanitaDoyle /or/ Ruruka) if you have an questions regarding the profiles. We'd be happy to help!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 2:18 am


Ok, I'm confused with the new way. help?

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KanitaDoyle
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 2:26 am


Did you go see the profile skeleton? Just fill it in with the information about your own roleplaying character.

If you need an example, I provided one.
Kanita Doyle, Seventh Year, Ravenclaw.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 10:04 am


This isn't a profile question but I couldn't find a Q&A section so....

Are the're going to be prefects and head boy/girls?

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 1:59 pm


PokeDaBubble
This isn't a profile question but I couldn't find a Q&A section so....

Are the're going to be prefects and head boy/girls?


Yes, there's an announcement about it in the main forum 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 5:32 pm


Was my profile accepted know?

Kimora Summers


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:33 pm


Kimora Summers
Was my profile accepted know?


Almost, it still needs a little tweaking. There should be no "me" or "I". For example:

"We entered into the Great Hall for the first time in are lives to be sorted into are Houses. As we draw closer to the Sorting Hat on the stool I start to murmur in my mind not Slytherin, not Slytherin. We halted in front of Mrs. McGonagall and then she started to call each student up. I wasn’t that far from being called since my last name starts with a C."

Should be: They entered into the Great hall for the first time in otheir lives to be sorted into their houses. As they drew closer to the Sorting Hat on the stool she started to murmur in her mind not Slytherin, not Slytherin. They halted in front of Mrs McGonagall and then she started to call each student up. She wasn't that far from being called since her last name starts with a C."

So change the rest of your role play bit and your profile so there's no "Me" "I" "our" etc. look at Kanita's for an example.

Also here's a bit of info on Third Person: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammatical_person and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_of_view_(literature)#Third_person
PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:36 pm


Ally Os
Kimora Summers
Was my profile accepted know?


Almost, it still needs a little tweaking. There should be no "me" or "I". For example:

"We entered into the Great Hall for the first time in are lives to be sorted into are Houses. As we draw closer to the Sorting Hat on the stool I start to murmur in my mind not Slytherin, not Slytherin. We halted in front of Mrs. McGonagall and then she started to call each student up. I wasn’t that far from being called since my last name starts with a C."

Should be: They entered into the Great hall for the first time in otheir lives to be sorted into their houses. As they drew closer to the Sorting Hat on the stool she started to murmur in her mind not Slytherin, not Slytherin. They halted in front of Mrs McGonagall and then she started to call each student up. She wasn't that far from being called since her last name starts with a C."

So change the rest of your role play bit and your profile so there's no "Me" "I" "our" etc. look at Kanita's for an example.

Also here's a bit of info on Third Person: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammatical_person and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_of_view_(literature)#Third_person


Ok I corrected it.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:49 pm


You've been accepted 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:18 pm


hello
I know this might sound really stupid but where exactly do I submit my profile?

~Hermione~

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KanitaDoyle
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 11:49 pm


Student profiles are posted in their own thread, so you create a 'new topic' for them

Teacher profiles are posted in the second thread from the top. or here

Though,no canon characters or canon related characters are being accepted at this time (so you cannot be Hermione Weasley).
PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 6:41 pm


Kanita had some uncertainty with my app :0 If you'd prefer I changed my character's House, I could put her in 'Puff? Since more Puffs are needed. Also, I know those subjects aren't taught at Hogwarts xD; Was just sorta elaborating on her general interests, didn't know they had to be magical specific.

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KanitaDoyle
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:09 pm


Oh! Okay, I'm so very sorry. D8
I've been hectic and not in the right state of mind lately (preparing for the start of hogwarts express rp -tomorrow- and making three new profiles!)

It's alright if you want to keep her in the house she's in, but it would be lovely for more hufflepuffs as well.
Don't feel as if you have to change though, but I'll make the alterations with your 'ok.'

C:
PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:13 pm


Don't be sorry! :0 Nothing to be sorry for x)

I really don't mind xD; Whatever you feel is best. I'm not gonna freak out or be heartbroken if you'd prefer my character somewhere else, but if you're willing to give me a chance, I'll gladly accept :3 I guess I just explained her character really badly |Da Hopefully you'll see the 'Claw in her once I start playing :3 If not, I can restart her in Puff? Whatever's best, however it works out.

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KanitaDoyle
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:22 pm


I say you definatelly deserve the chance. C:

Plus, I shouldn't stereotype all Ravenclaws to be a certain way. Just make sure she demonstrates some type of Ravenclaw trait along the way. Goodness knows, I don't want Ravenclaw completely overloaded with quiet, bookish witches and wizards. xD Variety is preferred.
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