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hahaha that was funny....
but i don't think Lorelai would run away crying. that just doesn't seem like Lorelai. she would give Luke some time to answer her at least. she doesn't want to lose him.

another thing....why does Lorelai and Rory have a bat? lol now that really doesn't seem like them rofl

lol im sorry xp i started the skript when i first started watching so its not very truthfull sweatdrop alot of my later inserts match the characters better so i'll post some more -.=

you don't have to apologize...just giving you my input xp
you're script does not nessessarily have to match up with the show completely

Ep. 4 was pretty cute! but i didn't quite understand what Luke said to Rory: "you will come here every holiday to see your mother, and you will not stay at you grandmothers!" wouldn't he say she has to move back in with her mother?

Ep. 5 i didn't like that she clung to Luke's arm and wouldn't let go but it ended that scene well so eh..lol
and isn't Lane going on tour?

ah well heres the next

this is all i have of this skript, i started another one so i might not continue it much further

Ep. 6 The fun of being alone, a loner, and loneliness

Recently on Gilmore Girls: if you don’t remember look back lol
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biggrin ragon Fly Inn:

(lor walks in)
lor: good morning Michel
michel: well it would be for you wouldn’t it
lor: why the sudden hostility, are the bad linens attaching?
michel: no, not that the linens are any good, but you always come in when ever you want and leave me here to take care of everything (flips through some of the inn's books)
lor: well im sorry michel but not everyone has your early mornings, I need coffee
michel: then why don’t you drink it here?
lor: do you know what that would do to our inventory?
voice: she does have a point
lor: luke! what are you doing here?
luke: (can now be seen at the entrance with a bag in hand)
you forgot breakfast
michel: oh goodie, the flannel man bears gifts (rolls eyes)
lor: did I not eat?!? what could possibly be wrong with me? I need to be examined or studied
michel: well I wont argue with that
lor: oh go clean some linens
michel: I think I might (walks up stairs)

luke: (now next to lorelai) what’s with him?
lor: oh just the usual, angry linens, and indestructible accents, so what did you bring me? (looks inside the bag)
luke: oh no you don’t (pulls it away)
lor: your cruel (gives him a playful stare)
so what must I do for food?
luke: say you'll have dinner with me tonight?
lor: where else would I get it, ^^ a kitchen?
luke: sounds like a yes to me, here you go (gives her the bag)
lor: Ooh danish and a large cup of coffee thank you (they kiss)
(sookie walks in)
sookie: lorelai, i've been looking for y.......Oh so sorry (covers eyes)
lor: (pulls away) oh sorry sookie, what were you saying?
sookie: I just wanted you to look at the menu for today, but I see your busy (giggles)
lor: well as busy as I may be, I need to get to work bye luke, thank you for the food ^^
luke: no problem, see you tonight then
(luke leaves)
sookie: well it seems that you two are getting along quiet nicely, so about the menu...
lor: I asked him to marry me
sookie: what? when? (in a shocked happy emotion)
lor: a few days ago, I asked him to marry me
(looking sad)
sookie: and what did he say? (looking excited while not noticing her expression)
lor: he didn’t
sookie: (gasps) he said no, but that doesn’t make sense, he was just here, and the kissing, and the food, and the coffee, (continues on)
lor: no he didn’t say anything, I ran home, rory was there, and then I hit him with a bat...
sookie: you hit him with a bat!?
lor: I thought he was a monster or something, I don’t really know what I was thinking
sookie: and then..
lor: I cried, he came in, said he wanted to save whatever he was about to say for a "better" setting, and then I went to the diner and that was that.
sookie: what about dinner? the one that you two have planned for tonight, will he propose there? and what do you mean whatever he said?
lor: im guessing proposal, but why a different setting?
sookie: maybe luke's a romantic at heart? I mean from what i've heard you guys always seem to go that way
lor: what do you mean?
sookie: well from what the town says about the scenes they've seen you two always seem to have a very romantic time
lor: and whose witnessed this? (curious to know who she should confront)
sookie: well lets see, the first time you kissed at the inn, the slay ride at the dinner, and when you guys made up on your porch...
lor: who saw that one? and that slay ride was along time ago, and I forced him to ride
sookie: oh kirk saw that during on of his "night terrors" (laughs)and it doesn’t matter how long ago that sleigh ride was, it was one of many of your moments. you have to remember that you and luke’s relationship was anticipated for along time
lor: yeh I was beginning to pick up on that

:Elder Gilmore’s home: (haha Emily is "elderly")

(rory walks in)
rory: hello grandma
emily: why hello rory, actually there is a visitor here for you
(rory is led into the sitting room)
rory: dad?! :does not look happy:
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I might write more in a minute

Ep.7 Kalendar of Carma
last time on Gilmore Girls

rory: dad?!
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chris: in the flesh (motions to hug her)
rory: (backs away) dad, what are you doing here?
chris: I came to see you of course (lowers arms) we haven’t talked in awhile so I wanted to see if u and your mom were all right
rory: I wonder why (mutters under breath)
emily: what was that?
rory: mom and I are fine (shoots a stare at emily)
chris: well glad to hear it, so where is lorelai?
rory: at home, and she's doing fine. so dad how long do you plan on staying in town.
chris: I don't know, I thought I might bring G.G. here and rent an apartment here in heartford for a few weeks so we could catch up (smiles)
rory: well um,...that’s great,
emily: that’s a wonderful idea christopher, but why don’t you try and find a place in Stars Hallow, so you can be closer to the girls and see how they've been doing up close
rory: no dad you don’t have to do that, and they're aren’t many places to rent at home
emily: nonsense, there are tons of for rent signs around that place and plenty of houses for sale as well (is looking very pleased with herself)
chris: sounds like a plan,
emily: oh and rory, instead of staying at the pool house why don’t you stay with your father
rory: oh no grandma, im going back to yale...and staying with mom. so that really isn’t necessary
emily: well that was a quick turn around, anyways christopher, im sure you can follow rory back then.
chris: yes that sounds like a good plan, well shall we go?
rory: just a moment I just remembered, I need to go make a call, can I be excused for a moment.
emily: of course you can
(rory runs up the stairs to richard's study and dials the phone)

:Lor's house:

(lor watching another Judy Garland movie)
(the house phone rings)
lor: (walks over to the phone and sees emily's home phone on the answering machine, she waits and listens)

rory: mom, there is something you and luke should know....
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I have more to write today (looks at the scrap of paper) I just wanted to stop it there for a moment


Ep.8 Lost in Like

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:Lorelai walking into Luke's Diner:

:Night of the message, hours or less before:

:At dinner in luke’s apartment:

lor: (walks in and sees a table set for two with candles....with a lack of luke)
luke? (looks behind the door) lukey?
luke: (walks in from the bedroom)
I told you to stop calling me that.
lor: (smiles) well I would, but it seems to be the best way to find you, plus you answer to it so well
luke: i'll have to remember that the next time your calling for me would you like to sit down (pulls out a chair)
lor: well yes I would (kisses him then takes a seat) Oo champagne, I thought you didn’t like this stuff (looks at the bottle at the table)
luke: I don’t, that’s why I brought this (takes out a bottle of beer)
lor: oh the things my mother would say (laughs)
luke: cute
lor: aren’t I?
luke: very (says quietly)
lor: awe lukey (blushes)
luke: well...I guessing that you hungry
lor: always ^^ so what’s on the menu?
luke: well lets see, we have pork chops, mashed potatoes, rolls, and a cheese cake for desert
lor: and what will you be having?
luke: what every you choose to leave behind apparently
lor: and mashed potatoes it is
luke: (picks up his beer) to you never having to considering cooking again
lor: I drank to that the first day I met you but whatever you say (raises glass) cheers
(the night continues)
luke: so what's rory planning on doing now (eating desert)
lor: she's going to yale, and is coming home on holidays, thank you for what you said to her.
luke: it was nothing, im just glad that you two aren’t fighting anymore
lor: so am I (takes the last bight of cheese cake)
luke: so what are your plans for tomorrow?
lor: oh you know, the usual, come here for breakfast, go to the inn for lunch, come here for dinner maybe...
luke: well you could always skip the coming here part
lor: now why would I want to do a thing like that?
luke: you could just walk down stairs instead...(feels awkward)
lor: I say. are you trying to get me to do dirty things?
luke: geeze
lor: well alright, I guess i'll go home then, though didn’t you want to ask me something first> (hopes for a proposal)
luke: no not really (looks away)
lor: (disappointed) all right then, seeya in the morning luke
luke: no wait (steps forward and kisses her)
lor: (wraps arms around him) its a start I guess ^^
luke: wha? (silenced by another kiss)

(they head to luke’s room and the scene fades out)

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I have the next one next to me also

Ep.9 Sweet Nothings

:Morning at Lukes Diner:

lor: (wakes up to find luke has already gone down stairs and recalls last night and her original objective) im going to grow old waiting for some kind of verbal answer... (shrugs and gets up and gets dressed)

: Down Stairs:

luke: so kirk, what can I get you this morning? (is smiling happily)
kirk: (is spooked by the smile on luke’s face)
id order but im afraid you might murder me
luke: what? (expression changes to confusion)
kirk: never mind, that’s better
luke: I don’t think im understanding this

:Lorelai walks down stairs:

lor: good morning bruger boy ^^ (walks over and kisses luke, then turns to kirk) understand what?
kirk: oh that explains it (now understands)
luke: explains what
kirk: oh it’s just that you were smiling
lor: awe luke you were smiling for other customers? im jealous (smiles cutely)
luke: yeh yeh (little embarrassed)
lor: sits opposite of luke at the counter)
luke: so what can I get for you (smiles)
lor: coffee would be great
luke: coffee coming up (sets down a mug in front of her)
lor: (starts fiddling with her cell phone, and finds she has a voice mail) Oo I have a message
luke: hey you know the rules
lor: awe but its just a voice mail
luke: take it outside
lor: awe (pouts and walks out side) that’s it, im wearing baggy clothes for a week! (looks back teasingly)
luke: out

(lor listens to her voice mail from rory looking nervous)

:Lorelai walks back into the diner:

luke: (sets down a cup of coffee for lor)
lor: thanks (begins stirring her coffee while looking
flustered)
luke: are you all right lorelai?
lor: ....chris is coming to starts hallow!!
(begins to panic)
luke: wha? (is now stunned at the unexpected outburst)
lor: he's back, he's here for a few weeks gonk or longer, my mother has something to do with this I just know it! this is all her fault (is now yelling and drawing quite abit of attention)
luke: whoa lorelai slow down, everything will be fine, despite the fact that you mother could be the anti-christ it does not mean that she's necessarily behind this. every thing is going to be all right, we'll deal with it together
lor: no, everything will not be all right, why would he be here now?! why now, rory must have told emily about your refusal and she must have summoned chris thinking that I was weak, and he's already weak!!!!! ((is now in full panic mode)
luke: ur not weak, and we'll deal with,...wait? what refusal?
lor: yes refusal, I asked you to marry me days ago, and you said nothing, and then you said that you were going to wait until you had the right setting, which I assumed was last night but then it turns out it wasn’t! and im going to grow into and old spinster who spends the night at her boyfriend’s apartment for the rest of her life!!! (has officially snapped)
luke: (overwhelmed) wha?
lor: don’t say wha, or what, or nothing! say something luke
(everything pauses and you can see everyone staring in the background of the diner, and passerbyers with their ears against the windows)
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I can’t seem to write along one can I lol


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Ep.10 11:46 and all's well

:Lorelai turns around and begins to head out the door of the diner:

luke: lorelai wait!
lor: why (extends hand to the door)
luke: cause I need to talk to you
(walks over to her takes her hand)
lor: (looks at her hand then outside and then at the door...)
luke: gets on one knee
lor: Oo!
luke: lorelai gilmore, will you marry me (takes out a ring from his back pocket)
lor: (smiles while speechless, the people outside and around the diner all lean in while a silence falls over the speculators)
luke: (smiles at her reaction) let me rephrase it, lorelai gilmore will you let me make you coffee every morning free of charge?
lor: (laughs) of course (bends over and kisses him) i'll marry you and allow you to make me coffee just as you always have
luke: (rises up from his knee and kisses her back)

:The town cheers while Taylor rolls his eyes:

:While just outside:

chris: excuse me, im looking for lorelai gilmore
miss patty: well your at the right place sweet heart (points to the scene beyond the window infront of him)

Ep. 10 cell phones and accusations

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chris: (walks in to the diner still stunned by the spectacle)
(everyone stares at lor and luke while they break apart)
lor: oh uhh, hi guys ^^ (smiles nervously and sits back down at the counter)
luke: (still looking at lor)
coffee?
lor: don’t try to make me forget about work with you caffeine offering ways
luke: so i'll take that as a to go
lor: don’t forget a donut (they smile)
chris: (still waiting at the door way)
lor: by lukey (kiss quickly) and um.. seeya guys (waves)
luke: by, and hey don’t call me that!
lor: (walks out the door and sees chris, she flashes her ring at him, smiles and leaves)
chris: (still confused and shocked walks out and goes the opposite direction)

(the lingering audience at the diner watches lorelai walk of with smiles)

lor: (runs to her car smiling at the thought of what just happened)
: picks up the phone and calls rory, gets voicemail:
lor: hey sweets, its mom, guess what! I'm getting married!!! >< so call me

:Back at Luke's Diner:
luke: (is wiping down the counter while smiling)!!! (realizes he still needs to get the Twickem house) geeze!
(walks out the door and across the street to Doose's:

:Lorelai once again on her cell phone on her way to the inn:

emily: yes hello?
lor: hello yes this is Stalin, can I speak to the fellow dictator of the house
emily: hello lorelai (is now annoyed) and whom do I own the pleasure of this call
lor: I just wanted to tell you and dad that luke and I are engaged, ^^
emily: oh.... well how nice (says with a little more than a hint of sarcasm)
lor: well say what you want, but im getting married! u and dad are not required to attend, but....(thinks of rory) I suppose it would be nice if you would (rolls eyes)
emily: (stunned by the invitation)
lor: well then, I guess i'll see you friday night (not realizing that she stopped going)
:Click:
lor: wait? did I just invite myself to friday night dinner eek ....crap

:At the Elder Gilmore House: (haha emily's elderly, sorry I never get tired of that)

emily: friday night dinner? (whispers confused)
richard! (calls up the stairs)
richard: (o.s) yes emily, im coming
emily: lorelai's engaged (gives richard a mix expression)
richard: (now on the stares) well that’s nice
emily: how can you say that, its that awful diner man
richard: well how long did it take her to tell us this time, should I go get my tux now
emily: no, this sounded recent...she sounded happy
richard: well I should hope so, if she were going to waist her life and marry luke then she should be (wondering were this particular rant is going)
emily: yes, but why him? that awful greasy man.....(trails off)
richard: well I don’t know emily (says sarcastic tone) maybe she loves this man
emily: (not really listening) she’s not poor, she's not old, she's not desperate, she has a buisness, she wouldn’t be marrying for money that’s for sure.....and she couldn’t be....OMG
richard: what now emily?
emily: she's pregnant (gasps horrified) that must be it
richard: now emily, lets not jump to conclusions
emily: she must be. why else would she want to marry that awful man
richard: now emily, we just went over all this. she loves the man, and even if she is pregnant at least she's getting married this time
emily: that’s not the point, i'm going to go have a talk with that luke
richard: shouldn’t we talk to lorelai about this first?
emily: no I want to know everything before friday night dinner tomorrow (she heads for the door)
richard: well I think the sooner you talk to her the better,...wait, friday night dinner?
emily: goodbye richard (takes his keys from the table)
richard: wait don’t take my keys! im coming too (too late she’s gone with both sets of car keys)
richard: sigh (pulls out his cell phone)
lorelai, yes it’s your father. I think there is something I should inform you of.... (Call continues)
lor: shoot
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You should try writing it like a real story. Could be good!