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 Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 6:52 pm
Pain is something no one knows.
Pain is something that only grows.
The kind of pain that's really real.
The only kind that people feel.
It's the kind that leaves no mark.
The kind that draws no blood.
It leaves you cold, and in the dark.
You wonder what you could've done?
What? To save him?
How? To sacrifice yourself?
The pain you feel is over one.
The pain you feel is never done.
He left, that's true.
He's gone, but you.....
You're still around.
For now, I know.
The kinds of sounds
that can be found
Wherever a loved one has passed,
wherever a dead lover is unmasked.
I've lost dear friends
and soul mates too.
But now I fear I'm losing you.
Am I?
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:21 pm
Hmmm good I tink....I guess you sort've planned this out.
I never plan my out for some reason XD
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:38 pm
Actually I didn't at all X3 I just came up with it on the spot.
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 8:35 pm
I think it's very good. It flows smoothly and quickly captured my attention. Good job. :]
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:45 pm
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