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 Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:12 pm
LUNAR AND CINNAMONPAW'S ADVENTURE!
OVER!
The Beginning:
Cinnamonpaw, a 9 moon old she-cat from GustClan was hunting with her brother's mentor, Moonpelt when Two-legs came. They glared down at them. Only previous nights before, another cat from GustClan was stolen, a tom named Coalpaw. They found him in another cage close by inside the two-legs home. The whole house reeked off kittypet food and two-leg. The two-leg had a strong voice, and was often seen sitting on a object watching the box [T.V.]. Cinnamonpaw was desperate to get out. She meets a loner there, a well groomed tom named Lunar, his fur as dark as night. He has the most wonderful green eyes and it's love at first sight. Moonpelt, Coalpaw, Cinnamonpaw and Lunar plan their escape. It's perfect, fool proof. They just eat their dry kittypet food and the two-leg would come and unlock the cage to refill it. But when they unlock it, they run. They found the door is always open a crack due to some reason. Maybe the stink? 1, 2, 3....they're out. All except Cinnamonpaw whose claw is caught on the metal on the cage. She yowls and screeches in pain, and Coalpaw and Moonpelt need to save her. But Lunar stops them and goes inside instead. The door is slammed and they are both shoved into 1 cage. They're desperate to get out, can they survive?
The end:
Cinnamonpaw got very mad at Lunar, and they had a fight. Cinnamonpaw rushed off to be alone, thinkign their friendship was over. But Leaf-Bare hit them both hard, and they knew they needed each other. Lunar confessed his feelings for her, and Cinnamonpaw purred and said she had the same for him. Cinnamonpaw got sick with Whitecough and almost died. Lunar saved her from her near death, and they smelled GustClan close. They burst into camp, and knew they wound be bonded to each other forever. They were right for each other, and this would make a great nursery tale for their kits!
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:15 pm
The door slamming seems to echo in Cinnamonpaw's head, and it hits her so fast. 'I'm stuck here...' she thought. Lunar's muzzle is pressed against her flank. What's this he's telling her? That he will help her? He has all the time in the world? No one is waiting for him? Cinnamonpaw shakes her head. "Ok." She mutters. "We need a plan Lunar. i want out. Eaglepaw will be worried...and...im scared! Coalpaw! Moonpelt!" the two-leg screams again and kicks their cage. Cinnamonpaw pushes her body close to Lunar.
'StarClan help me!'
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:23 pm
Cinnamonpaw finds herself learning more and more about Lunar by each passing minute. His story is actually fasinating to her. She listens intently, and soon falls asleep on his warm black coat, listening to his steady heartbeat.
Lunar rests his head on Cinnamonpaw and starts to sleep as well.
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:24 pm
Cinnamonpaw dreams of the forest, hunting rabbits and eating them. She's chasing something. a butterfly. Yes, it was when she was a kit with ehr brother, Eaglepaw. He's soaring at her, she laughing and giggling and snorting, then they end up tackling each toher and play fighitng. Everything was perfect. She remembers seeing the butterfly float away, and how everything seemed perfect. Her mother and father watched them play,
Dark nightmares rolled over her mind.
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:26 pm
Cinnamonpaw is sobbing and Eaglepaw looks hard and grief stricken. Both thew kits are cyring. Their parents bodyy lie motionless in front of them. "No not mom and dad!" Cinnamonpaw mops out. Eaglepa tries to calm her. "Shhh....Cinnamonkit...i'm still here with you." He licks her ear and together they watch their parents bodies get carried away for burial.
Yes, she rememberd that day. That's the day her life semed at it's worst.
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:29 pm
Lunar twists in his sleep, his thoughts hurting him. "We hate you! We don't want you!" His parents told him. He was bansihed from his mtoher's soft belly and left out in the world alone. "Why do they hate me?" He remembered asking himself. He knew why though. He had let his sister fall. But he couldn;t have helped her anyways. She fell from the rock and broke her neck.
It was because he had accidently his sister.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:51 pm
Lunar cringed at that memory every single time. It was terrible. He didn't mean too, of course he didn't. It just happedn. He breathed in, and looked up at the two-leg looming over them. "Cinnamon...he's going to open the cage!" He meowed. "Cinnamonpaw." She corrected him then pricked her ears. She glanced. They had spilled the water dish, and they were both wet. "Oh great!" She meowed, shaking and spraying water everywhere around them.
The cage door creaked open, and the kitchen door let ina breeze as it was wide open.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:54 pm
Lunar and Cinnamonpaw darted. They ginored all the sounds the bird was making, the squaking hurt he ears anyways. The dog was chasing them as they leaped over the fence. They stopped to catch their breath, bot something happened which made Cinnamonpaw so confused then sad...then mad.
Lunar was getting gripped in the dog's mouth. That stupid mutt had jumped too.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:56 pm
Cinnamonpaw wrenched back in horror, then her fur on her spine stood up. "Let him go!" She hissed, and felt brave as LionClan, rushing into battle with this two-leg dog. The dog dropped Lunar harshly, and bit down on Cinnamonpaw's leg. She let out a yowl and turned around, sladshing at the dog's face. The dog crie dout in pain, and cinnamonpaw knew it wasn't jsut because of her attack.
Lunar was under the dog, slashing it's belly with long curved claws.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:59 pm
Lunar feels his whole body shake then convulse as he is gripped int he dog's murky jaws. Before he knows it,. he's dropped down. 'Cinnamonpaw? Are you standing up for me? Well...i won't let you fight alone!' he thought deperatly and shook his pelt, ignoring his pain now seizing his body as blood welled in various bites on his flank. 'I'm doing this for you...because i sorta like you!' he thought and darted under the dog, unsheathing his claws and batting and scratching at it's belly as Cinnamonpaw claws at the dog's muzzle.
The dog's blood sprays on him.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 4:06 pm
Both cats launch back after the attack. The two-leg is calling the dog back, anger in it's voice. Cinnamonpaw darted closer to Lunar. "Your way to hurt! We have to stop to help you!" Cinnamonpaw was limping herself. Lunar nods. "I know...you need it too. Let's just run a bit farther..."
Both cats skid to a halt near a river. That was a border...close to RainClan.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 4:08 pm
But no, this border definatly had a trace of RainClan in it, but that was drifting fromt he stream. This was not the area. But this was the main river which their river connects to. "RainClan." Cinnamonpaw breathed. Lunar nodded. "I know. My dad was in the clans. He todl me about them all. StarClan. Heck, GustClan, RainClan, CloudClan and SwampClan. He was from CloudClan i think...but i don't know. He left very young." Cinnamonpaw looked at Lunar, astonished. "Then you'll live with me right?"
"Ill never leave you." Lunar promised in his strong, tom voice.
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:25 pm
Cinnamonpaw woke up, jolting awake from shock realizing she wasn't in a warm mossy den. Thye were a near a bush, neara river. She rapid was quick, and Cinnamonpaw finally realized. Lunar's warm fur was not next to her. "Lunar!" She called, scared to be alone. She darted off, folliwing his scent.
He was catching fish, and already had 3 oily fish on the surface.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:28 pm
Cinnamonpaw was laying next to Lunar. The few days had been hard, mostly living off RainClan food, fish. They had a bland taste, and their coats were sleek and hard to grab hold of. But they were better then nothing. On lucky days, they caught a few pieces of prey, but nothing really good. a few kinny rabbits, or a bird or two. Lunar wasn't a big eater, and normally gave most of his share to Cinnamonpaw. They had been togetehr for so long now, it seemed an eternity. Then Lunar had started to lick her cheeks and murmured...
That's when he finally confessed he liked her.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:03 pm
Lunar never left Cinnamonpaw's side thorugh the fight. There was foxes around them, abut luckily he only counted 2. He was surprised at how well cinnamonpaw could fight, and let her take care fo the female as he took on the male. He realized how hard it was with his terrible stomach, still healing from the dog fight, and Cinnamonpaw's dog bitten leg.
But they killed both the foxes.
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