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 Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:36 pm
Rules, no spaming and no stealing peoms
thnks
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 6:17 am
ok.... ill try to make an emo poem...
the sky was black'
the grass was blue
the ravens screeched
there crazy tune
my ears were scarred
as were my eyes
no sign left on earth
what have i done to deserve this?
thank u thank u! (i know that sucked... but i mean i did right off the bat...)
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 9:55 am
B L A C K
that is all I see
my heart is filled
with obscenity
L E F T
in the cold of winter
F O R S A K E N
he walks away quietly
I shudder in the corner
B L A C K
I cover the space
where his face
had been
Thank you thank you no autographs please. lol Feel free to steal it, it's all yours!
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:51 am
nice poem! let me try again...
The hatred in my heart
is burning my soul
the things i see through my eyes
they do not disappear
the sadness that i felt
it would not vanquish itself
the person that caused it all
was myself...
heh.. this stinks... plz dont make fun of it....... i tried as hard as i could
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:24 pm
Hey! Don't be down on yourself! It's good! Mine is mostly a joke .. hmm let me conjure up my inner emo once more...
A single tear
.. falls down my cheek...
like the stars fall...
and heaven falls..
and I fell..
for you..
The rose lays..
dying by my side..
petals wilting..
like my soul is wilting..
and my heart..
wilts..
anger and misery
i run my fingers through the dirt
the colors bleed together..
as my vision blurs
and the knife
..... falls..
........... to the ground...
Thank you thank you no autographs please!
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:56 pm
thx. WOW! that was an awesome poem! but i kinda expected the knife to like stab into ur heart or something... lemme try again
the fires of hell open up
swallowing all happiness
all memories
all laughter
replacing them with tears
saddness
unhappiness
bitter beginnings
bitter endings
every soul WILL be swallowed up
its just a matter of time....
ugggggggg y cant i write better....
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 7:47 am
Great poems guys! Lemme give it a shot...lol!
Sadness is what I feel the most.
I have so many dreams and hopes.
My sadness often makes me feel,
As if those dreams will never be real.
I know that life is one long race.
And I wish to put on a happy face.
Do you know the pain I feel?
Let me tell you it is very real.
The devastation that I feel everyday,
Doesn't want to go away.
I know that I'm wasting my life away.
It gets worse everyday.
I wish that things would turn out right.
But, they won't without a fight.
I came back with my head up high.
But, all I really want to do is cry.
I still wait for the day,
That all my problems will go away.
Sadness is what I feel the most.
I have so many dreams and hopes.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:45 pm
i woke up with a gloomy face
feeling as i always felt
feeling the pain i have delt
the agony, the sadness i have done
i feel it all...
the vile blood on my hands
the ear-chattering screams i have heard
yet my cold heart was immune to this
my heart housed no guilt
my eyes housed no pain
but within me, deep, deep inside
pain was thundering
and so i slep with a gloomy face...
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:05 pm
You really got some emo angst Naruto... hmm let me see if I can step it up a notch.
grey is the color the world has become
grey is the color i taste on my tongue
grey is what now pumps through my veins
since i lost you, nothing is the same
apathy is what i smell when i hold a rose close
my apathetic glory wallowing in morose
apathy is what i taste when i breath in the air
even if i died now, i wouldn't care
black is the color of the panic in my tears
my friends laugh around but i don't feel their cheer
black is the thought when i fall asleep tonight
if i don't wake up, then i finally did it right...
yup.. that sounds depressing enough for one night !! I need to go watch a comedy now or something rofl
Maybe we could have an opposite of emo poems thread? heh .. heh
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:35 pm
The "Emo" thing is all about depression and how the world sucks ???
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:30 am
thx... i think.. its good to be angst right?! well.... lemme write another poem
i fell down the never-ending hole
down.
down
down.....
where no happiness could penetrate
where no light could shine
where no smiles could be made
where no happy memories were remembered
until i remembered....
that this was my mind
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:40 am
sloweiser The "Emo" thing is all about depression and how the world sucks ???
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:16 pm
Rutalia sloweiser The "Emo" thing is all about depression and how the world sucks ??? yea... i like the poems too cause i usually stink at writing poems so this is like a training kinda thing for me.... (but then everything i write turns emo...)
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:53 am
it is so funny watching you guys talk anyways you guys are awesome poet writters
keep writting it is getting intresting
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:25 am
Kaydelz it is so funny watching you guys talk anyways you guys are awesome poet writters keep writting it is getting intresting
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