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 Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:58 am
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters all though i wish i could own naruto wink
Well this is my first fanfic so.. enjoy! btw it's basically a short story i made up during school and it's setting is Kohana Village on Valentine's day :3
"Hey, dobe." Sasuke said as he passed me on the street, but surprisingly he was smiling.
"What do you want, Sasuke?" Naruto replied slightly angrily at him since he never called him by his real name.
"I just wanted to show you.. how i feel about you, Naruto.."
Before Naruto could even react Sasuke had pulled him into a tight hug and was kissing him with an unleashed passion.
Then, suddenly... BEEP BEEP BEEP. "What it was just a dream?!" Naruto shouted as he awoke. "Damn.." He mumbled as he looked down just as a tear slid down his cheek.
Later that day...
"Okay.. today's mission is to give a valentine card to the person you love the most in this world!" Kakashi said with a big smile, happy that he had already given his to Iruka before the day had really started.
"WHAT?!" Naruto and Sasuke shouted together in outrage.
"You heard me, you two." Kakashi said before he started to walk slowly away from them headed to Iruka's house. "Don't bother me until you are finished!" Kakashi yelled now a few hundred feet away.
"Umm.. Sasuke.. i need to talk to you, in private.." Naruto said already walking down the road waiting for him to follow. Sasuke just shrugged before following Naruto. About a mile down the road Naruto turned and stopped to face Sasuke.
"Naruto... i wanted to give you this.." Sasuke said as he handed Naruto a valentine's card in the shape of a big heart. Naruto could feel his heart skip a beat as he took it. He looked up at Sasuke uncertain before Sasuke, gently, took him into his arms and gave him the kiss he had always dreamed about.
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:58 pm
It's a really cute and good story!!! I hope that you will continue to add to it!!!
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:57 am
ok i'm trying to add to it so.. wish me luck >_<
Chpt. 2 i guess o_O
Naruto yawned as he awoke. He had an eventful day with Sasuke and all. He loved that they were going out and didn't care if everyone knew. They had gone to the movies and then shared a bowel of ramen. Luckily as faith would have it most of the ramen noodles were the same one each were eating so they ended up kissing or joking around by slurping it out of the other's mouth. They enjoyed their time together and loved to be around each other. Naruto smiled as he got out of bed still thinking about what they would do today. Naruto quickly got dressed and headed outside. Before he could make 5 steps out of the door Kakashi was infront of him. "Naruto.. follow me.." Kakashi said with a bitte look in his eyes. Kakashi quickly headed off Naruto right behind him. They arrived at the hospital in a matter of minutes.
"Kakashi-sensi, why are we here?" Naruto asked as he looked nervously up at the hospital hoping everything was alright.
"Naruto.. Sasuke was hurt.. He was attacked by a group of rogue ninjas.." Kakashi said as he looked down at Naruto the look still there. For a second Naruto's world stopped.
"You're lieing.. you just don't want us to be together!" Naruto yelled trying to think of some reason Kakashi would say it other than it was true. Before Kakashi could do anything Naruto was running into the hospital. He ignored everyone except a nurse passing by to ask where Sasuke was. When Naruto ran into Sasuke's room, His heart stopped as he looked at the lifeless body of his lover.
"I'm sorry, Naruto.." Lady Tsunade said as she walked out of Sasuke's room. She had tried every method of healing possible. Naruto just stood there before he crawled into the bed and hugged his lifeless lover and cried.
The End!
Don't worry there will be another chapter so relax it won't end badly ilove sasuNaru too much to let that happen wink
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:44 pm
btw i'm only gonna post new chapters if people comment on it positively, pm me requesting or just a positive thing about it, or a comment on my pro, sorry i just don't want my fanfic to be taking up space.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 1:33 pm
Well i'm gonna try another chapter wish me luck Also i own none of these character's although i wish i owned Sasuke and Naruto wink
Naruto awoke later around 3 hours. He had cried and dreamt of Sasuke. The form beside him was cold and Naruto was now cold inside.
Some years later.. (( no not like shippuden it would be but i'm not that far in eps sorry! ))
Naruto was walking back in the village wiping a tear away. It was the anniversary of Sasuke's death and he had visited his grave and delievered about half the flower shop's flowers. He had grown in skill since after Sasuke died he took every suicidal mission possible hoping to die. He had lost many of his newer friend's and was now an Anbu. He was almost home where he knew he would cry himself to sleep. He passed an alley with a glance then looked away before a shadow possession jutsu stopped him.
"Hey Naruto! Choji, Ino and me are going to visit Sasukes grave wanna come?" Shikamaru asked with a smile.
"No Shikamaru.." Naruto answered before he used a special jutsu he had learned from the sanin to break the possession jutsu. He entered his house before he heard a familar voice in his room.
"Hey, dobe.." Sasuke said with a big smile. Naruto turned to face him and literally saw Sasuke in angel form.
"Sasuke!" Naruto yelled before running as fast as possible and taking Sasuke into a big tight hug. "Sasuke take off those fake wings! I thought you was dead!"
"Naruto.. I am.. they're not fake.." Sasuke said hugging Naruto tighter before Naruto pulled on Sasuke's wings which caused Sasuke to yelp in pain and hit him upside the head giving him a big knot on his head.
"Oww.. Sasuke-kunnnn what'd you do glue them on?"
"No Naruto they're real.." Sasuke said twitching in slight anger. Naruto sighed before hugging Sasuke.
"How long can you stay?" Naruto asked him still hugging him.
"Not long.." Sasuke replied.
The realization hit him and he broke into tears and melted into Sasuke's arms.
Mmk all for now! lol
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 1:54 pm
awww how cute! please continue if you can heart
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:18 pm
>w< AAAWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's sooooo kawaii!!!!!!!!!!! heart heart heart Pwease update soon!! 9_9
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 3:55 am
Ok.. woot two comments new record! Might be a bit different though lol Well.. Here it is and bear with me i made this 30 minutes before school -_-'
Disclaimer: I do not own any Naruto character's or the show but the story is mine biggrin And i make no profit from this >.> OH btw Itachi is dead from a previous anbu mission of Naruto's biggrin
Naruto finally pulled away with a sad smile on his face looking back up at Sasuke. "How's heaven, Sasuke-kun?" He asked with a small frown.
"Well.. Itachi's not there so i know it's not hell but.. It's just as bad without you.."
Naruto frowned and hugged him agin. "You can't come back again can you..?" Naruto asked looking up at Sasuke hopefully.
"No... I can't Naruto.." Sasuke said a sad expression on his face.
"Sasuke.. Promise me.. When you go back please forget about me.. I don't want you wasting your time with me.. Plus you know me, I'm stubborn i won't be dieing anytime soon." Naruto said with a false smile on his face.
"Naruto, even if I tried i could never forget about you, ever. Don't even suggest i would even attempt it either. If i tried i really would be in hell."
Naruto smiled softly wrapping his arms around Sasuke-kun again.
"Well.. we'll make the best out of the time we do have." Naruto said with a small grin this one real.
"Yea.. I guess.. But no one, other than you, can see me.. Unless you think we could pass them off as illusions?" Sasuke said with a small chuckle.
"Well I'm sure we could confuse a few of them.. But some like Shikamaru never would believe me." Naruto said with another big smile.
"So.. Naruto how did Itachi and Kakashi end up?" Sasuke asked his head tilted with a look of curiousty.
"Well.. They're still dating it's gotten more serious and i think they're discussing marriage." Naruto said sticking his tongue out playfully.
"Well.. That's good." Sasuke said tilted his head slightly with a grin.
Naruto smiled again and kissed Sasuke's cheek just as Sakura walked into Naruto's room hoping to cheer him up. She had bought a vase of flowers for him and she suddenly dropped it causing it to shatter in the room.
"Sasuke-kun!" Sakura yelled out now Sasuke and Naruto both wincing when her piercing voice entered the room.
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