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[OPEN]CG'd in Photoshop(first time...)

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Noelani-chan

PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 5:02 pm


For Christmas, I got Adobe Photoshop Elements 6.0. Great program, and so many tools...(@_@). The problem being: I'm sort of clueless. I'm doing all this with a mouse, due to my lack of tablet. Any corrections on anatomy or color is greatly appreciated heart
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:11 pm


I think it's a really really good first attempt with PS, especially with a mouse!
Don't get overwhelmed here...... most of my lines are just going over joints and stuff. You got the proportions really good.
I shortened and slightly changed the position of her right arm.
And I didn't have ANY CLUE as to how to changes the left one.... I'm sorry.
I also kinda shifted her bewbs around and widened her hips.

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Otherwise, I think you've done very well. Keep it up, fo'sho'!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 1:11 pm


-: You shouldn't feel threaten just because you don't have a tablet. If you keep working hard, you'll get the hang of it.

It's not bad for the first time. You have a good start, you can search up different poses on the internet and sketch out them out. You can even sketch things you see such as your friends, family, toys, trees and things like that.

What I did for the picture was that I followed the shoulders and went from there. It's just a pose I came up with and you do not have to do the same thing.

I recommend playing around with Adobe. Simply open a blank new file and just use whatever you see. Go ahead and try it. You have any questions about anything I just said, feel free to ask. :-

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:48 pm


@gummibear: Thank you so much! heart
Yeah, I have issues with joints. thanks for fixing that arm, I tried to and failed..miserably. sweatdrop
@Shoroie: I'm working at it, but mouse=difficult to make lines. @-@
That's an amazin' pose! eek I'll have to use that somewhere...thank you!

Noelani-chan

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